天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như thì sai (ví dụ: "It will raining" nên là "It rains" hoặc "It will rain"). Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

範例: The weather where I live is quite unpredictable. For example, it often rains in the morning and then clears up by the evening. Sometimes, the next day starts sunny but becomes cloudy in the afternoon.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp, ví dụ "where" nên là "wear", "it's make me" nên là "it makes me". Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I prefer cold weather because I can wear layered clothes and style myself better. On the other hand, hot weather makes me sweat and feel uncomfortable.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng hơn để truyền đạt ý kiến của mình.

範例: I don't like very dry or very wet weather. When it's too dry, my skin becomes rough and uncomfortable. When it's too wet, I feel irritated and it's hard to wear gloves.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt, ví dụ "for make sure the cheap will go well" không rõ nghĩa. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I don't usually check the weather forecast daily, but I always check it a few days before a trip. This helps me prepare and ensure my plans go smoothly.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác như "pollution" thay vì "littering distress" và cấu trúc câu đơn giản, có từ nối để ý tưởng được trình bày mạch lạc.

範例: I think climate change is caused by pollution and industrial emissions. As a result, we have experienced prolonged droughts, floods, and unusual cold weather for several months.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm, ví dụ "even it have" nên là "even if it has". Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, tránh lỗi và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: I would love to visit other cities even if they have different climates. I enjoy exploring their culture, food, literature, and history, so the climate doesn't affect me much.

× The weather like where I live, like a capricious girl.

✓ The weather where I live is like a capricious girl.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' to correctly link the subject and complement. In English, 'there is/are' or 'be' verbs are necessary to form complete sentences describing states or conditions.

× It will raining in the morning and then stop in the evening and the next day it will sunny in the morning an.

✓ It will rain in the morning and then stop in the evening, and the next day it will be sunny in the morning.

The modal verb 'will' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'sunny' requires the verb 'be' to form 'will be sunny'.

× I prefer cold weather because I can where I can style it the clothes from myself I like wearing check it with layers inside an I don't like hot weather because it's make me sweat, sting an yeah is feel unconfortable.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I can wear and style clothes myself. I like wearing checked shirts with layers inside, and I don't like hot weather because it makes me sweat, sting, and feel uncomfortable.

The verb 'wear' was misspelled as 'where'. The phrase 'style it the clothes from myself' is incorrect; it should be 'style clothes myself'. 'Check it' should be 'checked shirts'. Also, 'it's make' should be 'it makes' to agree with the singular subject. 'Unconfortable' is misspelled; correct spelling is 'uncomfortable'.

× I don't prefer both of them because if it's too dry my skin will crotches.

✓ I don't prefer either of them because if it's too dry, my skin will crack.

'Both' is used for two items, but 'prefer' with 'both' is awkward; 'either' is more appropriate. 'Crotches' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'crack' when referring to skin.

× I will get scrapped an if it where it will make me laugh you like uncompatible an it will make me feel sting with the gloves.

✓ I will get scraped, and if it is wet, it will make me feel uncomfortable and sting when I wear gloves.

'Scrapped' should be 'scraped'. 'Where' is incorrect; it should be 'wet'. 'Laugh you like uncompatible' is unclear and likely meant 'feel uncomfortable'. 'Sting with the gloves' should be 'sting when I wear gloves'.

× I don't have a habit of checking the weather forecast, but I usually use it before I have a trip for two or three days.

✓ I don't have a habit of checking the weather forecast, but I usually check it before I have a trip lasting two or three days.

'Use it before I have a trip for two or three days' is awkward; 'check it before I have a trip lasting two or three days' is clearer and more natural.

× I will have to check the forecast before I go for make sure the cheap will go well.

✓ I will have to check the forecast before I go to make sure the trip will go well.

'Go for make sure' is incorrect; it should be 'go to make sure'. 'Cheap' is a misspelling of 'trip'.

× I think is because of the littering distress an industrial emissions is caused the climate changes in recent years it make the weather like draft prolonged drought and can and sometime it will be cold weather for months like it not you sure as usual.

✓ I think it is because of littering, deforestation, and industrial emissions that have caused climate changes in recent years. These changes make the weather like droughts, prolonged droughts, and sometimes it is cold for months, which is unusual.

The original sentence is a run-on with missing subjects and verbs. 'Littering distress' likely means 'deforestation'. 'Is caused' should be 'have caused' to agree with plural subjects. 'Make the weather like draft prolonged drought' is unclear; corrected to 'make the weather like droughts, prolonged droughts'. 'It not you sure as usual' is unclear; corrected to 'which is unusual'.

× I would love to visit other city even it have different climates, I enjoyed the cuter of that place for them or food or some literary literature or history of that place.

✓ I would love to visit other cities even if they have different climates. I enjoy the culture of that place, its food, literature, or history.

'Other city' should be plural 'other cities'. 'It have' should be 'they have' to agree with plural subject. 'Enjoyed' should be present tense 'enjoy' to match the context. 'Cuter' is a misspelling of 'culture'. 'Them or food or some literary literature' is unclear; corrected to 'its food, literature'.

× So I think it's not affect me at all.

✓ So I think it doesn't affect me at all.

'It's not affect' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it doesn't affect' to express negation in present tense.