天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be clearer and more coherent. Try to use correct vocabulary and grammar, and avoid unclear phrases like 'pictures, skins' and 'humid undim'. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. For example, start by describing the weather, then explain the seasons, and finally mention your favorite season with reasons.

範例: The weather where I live is generally warm and pleasant. Nigeria has two main seasons: the rainy season and the dry season. My favorite is the dry season because the weather is cooler and less humid. Additionally, during this time, I enjoy hiking in the nearby mountains where the climate is refreshing and the scenery is beautiful.

建議: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid confusing expressions like 'Walmart clothes dump'. Instead, explain why you prefer cold weather with specific reasons and examples.

範例: I prefer cold weather because it feels more peaceful and comfortable. Although I used to like hot weather, my travels to colder regions changed my opinion. In cold weather, I can wear warm clothes and enjoy the fresh, cool air, which I find very relaxing.

建議: Your answer needs clearer vocabulary and grammar. Avoid unclear phrases like 'driver die' and 'very hott and region'. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons for your preference. For example, explain how dry weather affects your environment and lifestyle.

範例: I prefer dry weather because it creates a cool and calm atmosphere. Since I live in the northern part of Nigeria, which is generally hot, the dry season helps me feel more comfortable and refreshed compared to the wet season.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammar errors. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to explain how technology helps you check the weather forecast easily and how often you do it.

範例: Yes, I regularly check the weather forecast using a mobile application on my phone. Thanks to technology, the app provides daily updates and notifications, so I don't have to search for the information. This helps me plan my day better and dress appropriately.

建議: Your answer is vague and contains unclear phrases like 'Haughton months' and 'our liberty now'. Try to use specific vocabulary related to climate change and explain the effects clearly. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

範例: In recent years, climate change has caused noticeable effects such as longer dry seasons and shorter rainy periods. This has led to droughts and water shortages in many areas, affecting agriculture and daily life.

建議: Your answer has pronunciation and grammar issues, and some unclear words like 'Set an Lee' and 'code amounts'. Try to express your ideas clearly with correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons for your interest in visiting different climates.

範例: Certainly, I would like to visit cities with different climates. I enjoy experiencing new weather conditions, such as cold climates, and exploring scenic mountainous areas. This would give me a chance to see beautiful landscapes that are very different from my hometown.

× Will have two seasons in Nigeria, the reigning and dry season.

✓ There are two seasons in Nigeria, the rainy and dry seasons.

The sentence lacks the correct form of the verb 'to be' to indicate existence. 'Will have' is incorrect here; 'There are' is appropriate to state the existence of two seasons. Also, 'reigning' should be 'rainy' and 'season' should be plural to match 'two seasons'.

× Will have two seasons in Nigeria, the reigning and dry season.

✓ There are two seasons in Nigeria, the rainy and dry seasons.

The phrase 'dry season' should be plural 'dry seasons' to agree with 'two seasons'.

× This is because during the dry season you have a lot of pictures, skins.

✓ This is because during the dry season you have a lot of pictures and skins.

The sentence seems to misuse 'pictures, skins' which is unclear. Possibly a mispronunciation or wrong word choice. It should be clarified or corrected to meaningful terms. However, since it doesn't fit the grammar problem list, no correction is made here.

× You have also very humid undim.

✓ It is also very humid and dim.

The phrase 'humid undim' is incorrect; likely intended 'humid and dim'. The sentence needs conjunction 'and' to connect adjectives properly.

× I read areas where one can hike in the mountain and see beautiful climate.

✓ There are areas where one can hike in the mountains and see beautiful climates.

The sentence structure is awkward. 'I read areas' is incorrect; 'There are areas' is appropriate. 'Mountain' should be plural 'mountains' and 'climate' should be plural 'climates' to be grammatically correct.

× I prefer the cold weather at time.

✓ I prefer the cold weather at times.

The phrase 'at time' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'at times' to indicate occasionally.

× In the past I really used to like the hot weather until I experience very cold temperatures regions during my travels.

✓ In the past I really used to like the hot weather until I experienced very cold temperature regions during my travels.

The verb 'experience' should be in past tense 'experienced' to match the past context indicated by 'used to' and 'in the past'.

× During the cold season, I believe everything is just much more peaceful, cool, humid and beautiful.

✓ During the cold season, I believe everything is much more peaceful, cool, humid, and beautiful.

The word 'just' is unnecessary and awkward here; removing it improves clarity and correctness.

× Equally, during the cold seasons I'm able to dress in Walmart clothes dump.

✓ Equally, during the cold seasons I'm able to dress in warm clothes comfortably.

'Walmart clothes dump' is incorrect and unclear. Likely intended 'warm clothes comfortably'. Correction improves meaning and grammar.

× Preferably I will stick to the dry weather, this is because the driver die and keeps me gives me a cool, calm and refreshing environment.

✓ Preferably I will stick to the dry weather because the dry air keeps me cool, calm, and refreshed.

The phrase 'driver die and keeps me gives me' is incorrect and confusing. Corrected to 'dry air keeps me cool, calm, and refreshed' for clarity and grammar.

× I also live in northern part of Nigeria which is also a very hott and region in Nigeria so I prefer this weather.

✓ I also live in the northern part of Nigeria, which is a very hot region, so I prefer this weather.

'hott and region' is incorrect; 'hot region' is correct. Added missing articles and commas for clarity.

× No, this video advancement of technology I'm getting the weather forecast is pretty much an easy.

✓ No, with the advancement of technology, getting the weather forecast is pretty easy for me.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Corrected to proper sentence structure with correct prepositions and word order.

× I have an application in my phone that helps me get every details I need about the weather forecast daily.

✓ I have an application on my phone that helps me get every detail I need about the weather forecast daily.

'Every details' is incorrect; 'every' is used with singular nouns, so 'every detail' is correct.

× I don't even need to stress about looking for it because it's always popping up on my screen and this helps me to prepare my day ahead and also put myself in you in the.

✓ I don't even need to stress about looking for it because it's always popping up on my screen, and this helps me prepare my day ahead and also put myself in the right mood.

The phrase 'put myself in you in the' is incomplete and incorrect. Corrected to a meaningful phrase 'put myself in the right mood' for clarity.

× Generally we can agree that climate change in recent years has been significantly different from what we used to have say 5-10 years ago.

✓ Generally, we can agree that climate change in recent years has been significantly different from what we used to have 5-10 years ago.

The phrase 'say 5-10 years ago' is awkward; removing 'say' improves sentence flow and correctness.

× Now we have Haughton months than rainy and wet months and this has been because we have.

✓ Now we have hotter months than rainy and wet months, and this has been because of climate change.

'Haughton' is a misspelling of 'hotter'. The sentence is incomplete; added 'because of climate change' to complete the thought.

× Our liberty now.

✓ Our liberty now is affected.

The phrase 'Our liberty now.' is a sentence fragment without a verb. Added verb to complete the sentence.

× Set an Lee. I like to experience different weather and climate conditions.

✓ Certainly. I like to experience different weather and climate conditions.

'Set an Lee' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. Corrected to 'Certainly' to make sense.

× So definitely I'll be visiting in the future and I hope to experience code amounts and also hope to experience.

✓ So definitely I'll be visiting in the future, and I hope to experience cold amounts and also hope to experience new places.

'code amounts' is likely 'cold amounts' or 'cold climates'. The sentence is incomplete; added 'new places' to complete the thought.

× Places with scenic routes and very mountainous and in climates that are very different from what I'm coming from.

✓ Places with scenic routes, very mountainous areas, and climates that are very different from where I'm from.

The phrase 'very mountainous and in climates' is incorrect. Corrected to 'very mountainous areas, and climates' for clarity and grammar.