天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答较为简洁，但缺少连接词使句子显得有些生硬。建议使用连接词如"but"或"however"来使句子更连贯，同时可以增加一些具体细节描述天气特点。

範例: The weather in my city is mostly sunny from January to September; however, it rains briefly in October, which helps to cool down the temperature.

建議: 回答表达了个人喜好和原因，但句子结构稍显重复，且"feel relax"应为"feel relaxed"。建议使用更丰富的词汇和更准确的语法表达。

範例: Personally, I prefer cold weather because it feels cozy and comfortable, helping me to relax and stay calm.

建議: 回答表达了偏好和原因，但缺少连接词使句子显得断裂。建议使用连接词如"because"和"moreover"来增强句子连贯性，同时可以具体说明皮肤问题。

範例: I prefer wet weather because it helps improve my skin condition; moreover, I find dry weather very uncomfortable and hard to tolerate.

建議: 时态使用不准确，"checked"应为"check"，"sometimes a week"表达不清晰。建议使用正确时态和更自然的表达方式。

範例: To be honest, I check the weather forecast a few times a week. Whenever I want to go outside, I always check it to prepare my outfit accordingly.

建議: 回答表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用有误。建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用准确的词汇。

範例: I believe climate change has complex effects, especially on the environment, and it negatively impacts human health and society.

建議: 回答表达了意愿和原因，但"climbers"应为"climates"，且句子结构可以更自然流畅。建议注意词汇拼写和使用连接词。

範例: Of course, I would like to visit cities with different climates because it helps me broaden my perspective and learn more about diverse weather conditions.

× The weather in my city is always sunny from January to September, but there is a short time for rain in October.

✓ The weather in my city is always sunny from January to September, but there is a short time of rain in October.

介词短语中应使用“of”来表示“短暂的降雨时间”，而不是“for”。

× Personally, I prefer cold weather because cold weather is cozy and comfortable which can help me calm down and feel relax.

✓ Personally, I prefer cold weather because cold weather is cozy and comfortable, which can help me calm down and feel relaxed.

“feel”后应使用形容词“relaxed”而非动词原形“relax”，表示感受状态。

× Personally I prefer wet weather because it is better for my skin problem. More importantly, I cannot stand any dry weather. It is very uncomfortable.

✓ Personally, I prefer wet weather because it is better for my skin problems. More importantly, I cannot stand dry weather. It is very uncomfortable.

“skin problem”应为复数形式“skin problems”，且“any dry weather”中“any”不合适，直接使用“dry weather”更自然。

× To be honest, I checked the weather forecast sometimes a week. Whenever I wanna go outside, I will check the weather and prepare my outfit properly.

✓ To be honest, I check the weather forecast sometimes a week. Whenever I want to go outside, I will check the weather and prepare my outfit properly.

描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时，“checked”改为“check”；“wanna”是口语缩写，应改为正式表达“want to”。

× Well, I believe the climate change is complicated, especially in our society from an environmental perspective. It exerts negative in facts about the human being.

✓ Well, I believe climate change is complicated, especially in our society from an environmental perspective. It has negative effects on human beings.

“the climate change”中“the”不必要；“exerts negative in facts about the human being”结构错误，应改为“has negative effects on human beings”。

× Of course, I want to visit other cities with different climbers because it can help me widen my outlook and explore more about diversity of weather.

✓ Of course, I want to visit other cities with different climates because it can help me widen my outlook and explore more about the diversity of weather.

“climbers”应为“climates”，表示气候；“diversity of weather”前应加定冠词“the”。