天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在拼写错误和语法错误，影响表达的自然性和准确性。建议注意单词拼写，如"Christ"应为"quite"，"cry"应为"very"，并简化句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

範例: The weather where I live is quite changeable. In summer, it is very hot and rainy, but in winter, it becomes cold and wet. However, people here have adapted well to these changes.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如"write a law"可能是表达错误，且句子结构不够连贯。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，并注意主谓一致。

範例: I prefer cold weather because I usually work during the summer. The heat makes me feel sticky and uncomfortable. However, in winter, the cold weather feels fresher and more comfortable.

建議: 回答内容较具体，但句子连接不够自然，且存在语法错误。建议合并短句，使用连接词使表达更流畅，同时注意主谓一致。

範例: Actually, I prefer wet weather because I have allergic rhinitis. When the air is too dry, my nose feels painful. However, in wet conditions, my nose feels better and more comfortable.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如"check in the weather forecast in regular mostly every evening"不符合英语习惯。建议简化表达，避免使用不正确的词组，并注意句子结构。

範例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every evening. I want to know if it will rain the next day so I can decide whether to bring an umbrella.

建議: 回答内容较准确，但句子连接略显生硬。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富表达。

範例: The effects of climate change in recent years include the rise in the annual average global temperature. This is mainly caused by the increasing emission of greenhouse gases.

建議: 回答中存在时态错误和表达不自然的问题，如"had different climate"应为"has a different climate"。建议注意时态一致，简化句子结构，使表达更自然。

範例: Yes, I would like to visit a city with a different climate because it never snows where I live. I am curious about what snow looks like, and I have planned to visit London for a long time.

× The weather where I live is Christ changeable.

✓ The weather where I live is quite changeable.

这里的“Christ”是拼写错误，应该是“quite”，表示“相当”的意思，用来修饰形容词“changeable”。

× In summer is cry hot and rainy, but during winter the weather becomes cold and wet.

✓ In summer, it is very hot and rainy, but during winter the weather becomes cold and wet.

句子缺少主语，应该加上“it is”来说明天气状况；“cry”是拼写错误，应为“very”，表示“非常”。

× I prefer cold weather because I usually write a law in summer.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I usually sweat a lot in summer.

“write a law”不符合语境，应该是“sweat a lot”（大量出汗），表达夏天出汗多导致不舒服。

× In makes my body really sticky and I feel uncomfortable.

✓ It makes my body really sticky and I feel uncomfortable.

句子缺少主语，应加“it”指代天气或环境。

× However, in winter, the cold weather feel more fresh and comfortable.

✓ However, in winter, the cold weather feels fresher and more comfortable.

主语是单数“weather”，动词应加-s；“fresh”比较级应为“fresher”。

× It means that when the air is too dry, my nose feel painful when I breathe in the air.

✓ It means that when the air is too dry, my nose feels painful when I breathe in the air.

主语“my nose”是单数，动词应加-s。

× However, in wet condition my nose feel better and more and more comfortable.

✓ However, in wet conditions my nose feels better and more and more comfortable.

“condition”应为复数“conditions”；主语单数，动词加-s。

× Yes, I like to check in the weather forecast in regular mostly every evening.

✓ Yes, I like to check the weather forecast regularly, mostly every evening.

“check in the weather forecast”中“in”多余，应去掉；“in regular”应改为副词“regularly”。

× Anne, if I should bring an umbrella when I go out?

✓ And, should I bring an umbrella when I go out?

“Anne”应为“and”，且句子结构应为疑问句“should I bring...?”。

× The effects of climate change in recent years is the rise of annual average global temperature.

✓ The effects of climate change in recent years are the rise of annual average global temperature.

主语“The effects”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。

× Yes, I'm willing to visit another city that had different climate because the city where I live never snow in winter.

✓ Yes, I'm willing to visit another city that has a different climate because the city where I live never snows in winter.

定语从句中应使用现在时“has”；“never snow”主语是单数，动词应加-s。

× Therefore, I'm very curious about what is the snow things look like and I had planned to visit London for long time.

✓ Therefore, I'm very curious about what snow looks like and I have planned to visit London for a long time.

“what is the snow things look like”结构错误，应为“what snow looks like”；“had planned”应为现在完成时“have planned”；“for long time”应加冠词“a”。