天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp để mô tả thời tiết một cách cụ thể và tự nhiên hơn.

範例: The weather where I live is usually very hot throughout the year. Currently, it is the rainy season, so it rains quite often, but the temperature remains high.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp. Hãy giải thích lý do thích thời tiết lạnh một cách cụ thể và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng của mình.

範例: I prefer cold weather because it is more comfortable for me. In cold weather, I can wear warm clothes, and I don't feel uncomfortable like in hot and humid conditions.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng thiếu sự mạch lạc và hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, thêm liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

範例: I prefer dry weather because I don't like getting wet. For example, when I have extra classes and it rains, I get wet and feel uncomfortable.

建議: Bạn trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng chính xác hơn để diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

範例: Honestly, I don't usually check the weather forecast. However, when I travel with my family, I always check it to make sure there won't be any problems with our plans.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, từ vựng chính xác và cung cấp các ví dụ cụ thể về tác động của biến đổi khí hậu.

範例: I think climate change has caused the weather to become hotter in recent years. Also, natural disasters like earthquakes happen more often, making life difficult for many people.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt mong muốn của bạn về việc đến thăm các thành phố có khí hậu khác biệt.

範例: Yes, I live in Vietnam where it is very hot, and I don't like such hot weather. If I have a chance, I would like to visit Tokyo in Japan because it has a cooler climate that I enjoy.

× The weather in my living is. Always hard.

✓ The weather where I live is always harsh.

The original sentence lacks proper sentence structure and clarity. 'My living' is incorrect; it should be 'where I live'. Also, 'always hard' is unclear; 'harsh' or 'difficult' is more appropriate. The sentence needs to be complete and coherent.

× I mean is a.

✓ I mean, it is a...

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. It seems the speaker is trying to say 'I mean, it is a...' but did not finish the thought. Proper sentence completion is necessary.

× Now is is the rainy season, so is whom it but always in the year is is so hot.

✓ Now it is the rainy season, but throughout the year it is always very hot.

The sentence has repeated words and unclear phrasing. 'Is is' is a repetition error. 'So whom it' is incorrect and unclear. The sentence should clearly state the current season and general weather conditions.

× I sing I prefer cold weather because I like the asthma fear.

✓ I think I prefer cold weather because I have asthma.

'I sing' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'I think'. 'Asthma fear' is incorrect; the speaker likely means they have asthma and prefer cold weather because of it.

× I mean when the cold weather I can wear a lot of Co close is that are cool an.

✓ I mean, when the weather is cold, I can wear a lot of cool clothes.

The sentence is fragmented and contains unclear words like 'Co close is that are cool an'. It should be rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Hard water is so humid and I don't like the this.

✓ The hot weather is so humid and I don't like it.

'Hard water' is incorrect in this context; likely meant 'hot weather'. 'The this' is incorrect; should be 'it'. The sentence needs correction for meaning and grammar.

× I prefer dry weather. I mean, I don't like the. Wet so much because for example I go to the extra classes and if it is rainy I will be wet and I don't like this so much.

✓ I prefer dry weather. I don't like wet weather because, for example, when I go to extra classes and it is rainy, I get wet and I don't like that.

The sentence is fragmented and has misplaced periods. 'The. Wet' is incorrect. The sentence should be continuous and clear.

× It makes me feel.

✓ It makes me feel uncomfortable.

The sentence is incomplete. 'It makes me feel' needs an object or complement to complete the thought.

× I will check the weather forecast to ensure that there is no problem with my blend.

✓ I will check the weather forecast to ensure that there is no problem with my plan.

'Blend' is a wrong word here; the correct word is 'plan'. This is a vocabulary error affecting pronoun reference.

× The effect of climate change in recent years is, uh, the weather is more hotter than hot to an.

✓ The effect of climate change in recent years is that the weather is hotter than before.

'More hotter' is incorrect because 'hotter' is already a comparative form. Also, 'than hot to an' is unclear and incorrect. The sentence should use correct comparative form and clear phrasing.

× The earthquake or something like that, or often occur in it makes the living of people or difficult.

✓ Earthquakes and similar events often occur, making people's lives difficult.

The sentence is fragmented and has incorrect word order. 'Or often occur in it' is incorrect. The sentence should be restructured for clarity and grammar.

× Yes, I mean, now I live in Vietnam and is so hard that I really don't like the hot like that.

✓ Yes, I mean, now I live in Vietnam and it is so hot that I really don't like it.

'Is so hard' is incorrect; likely meant 'so hot'. 'The hot like that' is incorrect phrasing. The sentence needs proper subject-verb agreement and clearer expression.

× So if uh, I have a chance, I want to go to Tokyo in Japan because it is Kohane is had the. Cool weather that I really like.

✓ So if I have a chance, I want to go to Tokyo in Japan because it has cool weather that I really like.

'Kohane is had the' is incorrect and unclear. The sentence should use 'it has' to indicate possession. The sentence needs to be clear and grammatically correct.