天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and contains several grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to give a direct and clear description of the weather, using correct sentence structures and relevant vocabulary. Avoid unnecessary or confusing words and keep your answer concise and coherent.

範例: I live in Kuwait, which is one of the hottest countries. During summer, the weather is very hot with high humidity and frequent dust storms. Temperatures can reach up to 50 degrees Celsius. However, rain is quite rare in my country.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your preference clearly and support it with specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and keep your sentences concise.

範例: I prefer cold weather because it allows people to be more active and enjoy outdoor activities without discomfort. For example, during winter in my country, my family and I often go camping in the desert, which is very enjoyable.

建議: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear vocabulary and sentence structure. Focus on giving a clear opinion and explain your reasons with relevant and accurate vocabulary. Avoid unrelated or confusing terms.

範例: I prefer dry weather because wet weather often brings high humidity, which can make me feel uncomfortable. For instance, humidity can cause my skin to feel sticky and affect my breathing.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer directly whether you check the weather forecast, and if not, explain who does and how often. Use correct sentence structures and linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: I usually don't check the weather forecast myself, but my mother does it every morning. She uses an international weather app to keep track of the weather and inform us, especially to protect us from extreme conditions.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to give a clear opinion about the effects of climate change, using specific examples and correct grammar. Avoid vague or fragmented sentences.

範例: In recent years, climate change has caused more frequent dust storms and higher temperatures in Kuwait. These changes have affected people's health and the environment negatively.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to express your interest in visiting places with different climates clearly, and explain why. Use appropriate vocabulary and sentence structures to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I enjoy travelling. For example, I want to experience places with cooler weather and more rainfall, especially during spring, which is very different from my home country.

× There is a lot of dust and humidity and also halts the sillies is around 35250.

✓ There is a lot of dust and humidity, and also the heat is around 35 to 50 degrees.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'halts the sillies' which seems to be a mishearing or misspelling. The phrase 'There is' is correct for singular noun phrases, but the sentence structure is confusing. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and uses 'There is' appropriately for singular noun phrases like 'a lot of dust and humidity'. The temperature is expressed clearly as '35 to 50 degrees'.

× And usually my country is rare in the hernia.

✓ And usually my country is rare in the heat.

The phrase 'rare in the hernia' is incorrect and likely a mispronunciation or misspelling. The intended meaning seems to be about the heat. The pronoun usage is not the main issue, but the phrase is unclear. Correcting to 'rare in the heat' makes the sentence meaningful. However, the sentence still lacks clarity and could be improved further for meaning.

× I prefer cold, because cold make all people interesting, because there is not nothing stop them too continues his life or them life and the city.

✓ I prefer cold weather because cold makes all people more active, as nothing stops them from continuing their lives and activities in the city.

The original sentence has multiple issues including subject-verb agreement and double negatives. 'Cold make' should be 'cold makes' (third person singular). 'There is not nothing' is a double negative and should be 'nothing'. 'Continues his life or them life' is incorrect pronoun usage and verb form; it should be 'continuing their lives'. The correction addresses these issues and clarifies the meaning.

× So am I country we usually and their winter goes to the desert and camping with my family.

✓ So in my country, we usually go to the desert and camp with my family during winter.

The original sentence has incorrect pronouns and word order. 'Am I country' should be 'in my country'. 'Their winter goes' is incorrect; it should be 'during winter'. 'Camping' should be 'camp' to match the verb form. The correction fixes pronoun use and sentence structure.

× Are usually like a dry weather because with Twitter there is alot disadvantages like.

✓ I usually like dry weather because with wet weather there are a lot of disadvantages like...

The sentence incorrectly uses 'Are usually like' instead of 'I usually like'. 'Twitter' is likely a mishearing of 'wet weather'. 'There is alot disadvantages' should be 'there are a lot of disadvantages' to match plural noun 'disadvantages'. The correction fixes pronoun and verb agreement and clarifies meaning.

× Are humidity and there is a a lot of value dilation and my face and blood vessels and it can confuse me.

✓ There is humidity and a lot of dehydration which affects my face and blood vessels, and it can confuse me.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun and article usage. 'Are humidity' should be 'There is humidity'. 'Value dilation' is likely a mishearing of 'dehydration'. The correction uses correct pronouns and articles and clarifies the meaning.

× I didn't check the weather, but I know who's checking the weather for us.

✓ I don't check the weather, but I know who is checking the weather for us.

The question is about current habits, so present tense is appropriate. 'Didn't check' is past tense and should be 'don't check'. 'Who's' is a contraction for 'who is' or 'who has'; here 'who is' is correct. The correction aligns tense with the question and clarifies meaning.

× My mother usually checking there without a from that international weather company in Kuwait's there usually my mother in the morning.

✓ My mother usually checks the weather from that international weather company in Kuwait in the morning.

The sentence has incorrect verb form 'checking' instead of 'checks'. 'There without a from that' is incorrect and unclear; corrected to 'from that'. 'Kuwait's there usually my mother' is incorrect word order and pronoun use; corrected to 'in Kuwait in the morning'. The correction fixes verb form, prepositions, and word order.

× She looking for the wither and this week to protect us from the NEC.

✓ She looks at the weather this week to protect us from the heat.

'She looking' should be 'She looks' (third person singular). 'Wither' is a misspelling of 'weather'. 'This week' is used correctly. 'NEC' is unclear; assuming 'heat' or 'extreme weather conditions' is intended. The correction fixes verb form and spelling.

× In 1999 in Kuwait. This Sears see a huge different and climbs change.

✓ In 1999 in Kuwait, there was a huge difference and climate change.

'This Sears see' is incorrect; likely intended 'there was'. 'Different' should be 'difference'. 'Climbs change' is a misspelling of 'climate change'. The correction uses past tense 'was' appropriate for 1999 and corrects spelling.

× In Kuwait in 1999 increase in them have not significantly.

✓ In Kuwait, since 1999, the increase has not been significant.

The sentence has incorrect tense and pronoun use. 'Increase in them have not' is incorrect; corrected to 'the increase has not been'. The present perfect tense 'has not been' is appropriate to describe a change from 1999 to now.

× There is a see a lot of dust and.

✓ There is a lot of dust.

The sentence 'There is a see a lot of dust and.' is ungrammatical and incomplete. Removing 'a see' and the trailing 'and' corrects the sentence to a proper structure.

× Yes, of course, firstly because I like traveling around the world, especially in the war in the country that has allowed of.

✓ Yes, of course, firstly because I like traveling around the world, especially in countries that have a lot of rain.

The phrase 'especially in the war in the country that has allowed of' is unclear and likely a mishearing. Corrected to 'especially in countries that have a lot of rain' to make sense. Pronoun and article use corrected accordingly.

× Uh oh, rain and specialize in humidity and there is a lot of spring.

✓ I like places with rain and high humidity, and there is a lot of spring.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Uh oh' is an interjection and should be removed. 'Specialize in humidity' is incorrect; corrected to 'places with high humidity'. The correction improves clarity and pronoun use.