天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer provides relevant information but lacks clarity and contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences more concise and clear, and avoid repeating words unnecessarily. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I live in Shenzhen, a city in southern China. The weather is very hot in summer, often reaching 40°C. Additionally, it is a subtropical climate, so the year-round weather is quite wet and humid.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct negative forms and improve sentence structure. Also, use linking words to make your reasoning clearer.

範例: Personally, I don't like either extreme because I prefer moderate weather. However, if I had to choose, I would prefer hot weather since I can use air conditioning. In contrast, winters are difficult here because we don't have heating systems.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words and ensure your vocabulary is accurate. Also, organise your ideas logically using linking words.

範例: I don't like extreme dry or wet weather, but if I had to choose, I would prefer dry weather. This is because I can use moisturizers to keep my skin hydrated. On the other hand, wet weather makes my hair and skin feel sticky, which is uncomfortable.

建議: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid unnecessary repetition. Also, improve sentence flow by using linking words appropriately.

範例: I don't check the weather forecast every day, but I usually do before outdoor activities like playing tennis. So, I check it about three times a week to ensure the weather is suitable, as I enjoy being active outdoors.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, with several grammatical errors and hesitations. Try to organise your ideas clearly, complete your sentences, and use appropriate vocabulary. Also, avoid filler words and ensure your answer is coherent.

範例: I believe climate change has greatly affected human life recently. For example, extreme weather events have become more frequent. In my city, winters used to be longer, but now they are shorter due to climate change.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid filler words. Use linking words to organise your answer logically and provide specific details.

範例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For instance, Beijing has a temperate climate with distinct seasons, which is quite different from my city. Experiencing these seasonal changes would be interesting.

× I live in the city of Shenzhen which is located in the South part of China

✓ I live in the city of Shenzhen which is located in the southern part of China

The phrase 'South part' is incorrect; the correct form is 'southern part' to describe a region. 'Southern' is the adjective form used before a noun to indicate direction or location.

× so the weather like here is pretty hot in summer, reaching about 40°C. Celsius.

✓ so the weather here is pretty hot in summer, reaching about 40°C.

The phrase 'weather like here' is ungrammatical. The correct structure is 'the weather here is'. Also, 'Celsius' after the degree symbol is redundant and should be omitted or integrated properly.

× Maxim it Lee which is pretty hot and yes as it is a culture CD so it's pretty wet and humid during the whole year.

✓ The maximum temperature is pretty hot, and yes, as it is a coastal city, it's pretty wet and humid throughout the year.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors such as 'Maxim it Lee' and 'culture CD'. The corrected sentence clarifies meaning and corrects vocabulary and sentence structure.

× Well personally I don't like neither I I like neither of them because I prefer a relatively moderate weather.

✓ Well, personally, I don't like either; I like neither of them because I prefer relatively moderate weather.

Using 'don't like neither' is a double negative and incorrect. The correct form is 'don't like either' or 'like neither'. Also, 'a relatively moderate weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is uncountable and does not take 'a'.

× But if I had to choose one I would go with hot weathers because I can use the air conditioners.

✓ But if I had to choose one, I would go with hot weather because I can use the air conditioner.

'Weather' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. 'Air conditioners' should be singular if referring generally or plural if multiple units are implied; here singular fits better.

× But in my city we don't have the heating system during winter so it's pretty struggling when you are having a cold winter.

✓ But in my city, we don't have a heating system during winter, so it's pretty difficult when you have a cold winter.

'The heating system' implies a specific system known to both speaker and listener; 'a heating system' is more appropriate here. Also, 'pretty struggling' is incorrect; 'pretty difficult' or 'quite hard' is correct.

× Well again I like neither of them extreme but again if I had to choose one I will go with the dry weather because I can use the moisturizers to keep my scheme watch erised.

✓ Well, again, I like neither of the extremes, but if I had to choose one, I would go with dry weather because I can use moisturizers to keep my skin moisturized.

'Neither of them extreme' is incorrect; it should be 'neither of the extremes'. 'Scheme watch erised' is a mispronunciation or typo; the correct phrase is 'skin moisturized'.

× However doing the wet weather's I often felt I often feel so sticky in terms of my hair and my skins which make me super uncomfortable.

✓ However, during wet weather, I often feel sticky in terms of my hair and skin, which makes me very uncomfortable.

'Doing the wet weather's' is incorrect; 'during wet weather' is correct. 'Skins' should be singular 'skin' as it is uncountable. Subject-verb agreement corrected from 'make' to 'makes'.

× Well, I wouldn't say I have to have it to check the weather forecast everyday, but when I would like to engage in some outdoor activities such as playing tennis, I would definitely check it in advance to make sure that the weather is suitable for these kind of outdoor activities.

✓ Well, I wouldn't say I have to check the weather forecast every day, but when I want to engage in some outdoor activities such as playing tennis, I definitely check it in advance to make sure that the weather is suitable for these kinds of outdoor activities.

'Have to have it to check' is redundant and incorrect; 'have to check' is correct. 'Would like to engage' is better as 'want to engage' for habitual actions. 'These kind' should be 'these kinds' to agree with plural 'activities'.

× So probably about three times a week because I'm quite an outgoing person and I do really.

✓ So probably about three times a week because I'm quite an outgoing person and I really do.

The phrase 'I do really' is awkward; the correct form is 'I really do' to emphasize the statement.

× Well, I think climate change has significantly impacted the human civilizations in recent years, and one of the most significant phenomena is the. You know, frequency increasing frequency of extreme butters, for instance, my CD, we don't actually have so long winter previously, but because of the climate change.

✓ Well, I think climate change has significantly impacted human civilisation in recent years, and one of the most significant phenomena is the increasing frequency of extreme weather events. For instance, in my city, we didn't used to have such long winters previously, but because of climate change...

The original sentence is fragmented and contains errors such as 'the human civilizations' (should be 'human civilisation'), 'frequency increasing frequency' (should be 'increasing frequency'), 'extreme butters' (likely 'extreme weather'), 'my CD' (should be 'my city'), and awkward phrasing. The correction improves clarity and grammar.

× Uh, I would definitely like to do so, and I particularly have a destination of Beijing where the temperate climate makes it. Makes the weathers in Beijing more explicit in different seasons to change it if it's so it usually have different types of scenarios in different season which makes it, you know, in it.

✓ Uh, I would definitely like to do so, and I particularly have Beijing as a destination where the temperate climate makes the weather more distinct in different seasons. It usually has different types of scenery in different seasons, which makes it, you know, interesting.

The original sentence contains many errors: 'have a destination of Beijing' should be 'have Beijing as a destination'; 'makes the weathers more explicit' should be 'makes the weather more distinct'; 'scenarios' should be 'scenery'; subject-verb agreement corrected from 'have' to 'has'; and overall sentence structure improved for clarity.