天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Apni answer ta bhalo kore clear korte hobe. Proshner uttor direct dite hobe, ar sentence gulo shothik bhabe gathito korte hobe. Apnar kotha onekta bhanga bhanga ar bujhte oshubidha hoy. Apni chesta korun simple ar clear sentence use korte, jate proshner uttor sohoje bujha jai.

範例: The weather in my area changes throughout the year. We experience six different types of weather in a year, each lasting about two months.

建議: Apnar uttor e kichu bhul ache, ar sentence gulo onekta bhanga bhanga. Apni chesta korun proshner uttor shothik bhabe dite, ar karon shoho bistarito bolte. Linking words use korle uttor ta aro bhalo hobe.

範例: I prefer cold weather because I feel uncomfortable in the summer heat. Also, hot weather sometimes causes me health problems. Therefore, I like cold weather the most.

建議: Apnar uttor onekta asangoto ar bujhte oshubidha hoy. Apni chesta korun proshner uttor shothik ar shongothito sentence e dite. Specific karon shoho bolben jeno uttor ta bhalo lage.

範例: I prefer dry weather because the roads in my area become unusable when it rains. Wet weather makes it difficult to travel.

建議: Apnar uttor e onek bhul ache ar sentence gulo bhanga bhanga. Apni chesta korun proshner uttor shothik ar shongothito bhabe dite. Specific details ar linking words use korben.

範例: Yes, I check the weather forecast on my phone every day. It helps me prepare myself for sudden changes in the weather.

建議: Apnar uttor onekta asangoto ar bujhte oshubidha hoy. Apni chesta korun proshner uttor shothik ar bistarito bhabe dite. Specific effects ar karon shoho bolben.

範例: In recent years, climate change has caused many problems in my area. For example, there is less rainfall than before, which affects farming and water supply.

建議: Apnar uttor e onek bhul ache ar sentence gulo bhanga bhanga. Apni chesta korun proshner uttor shothik ar shongothito bhabe dite. Specific karon ar example shoho bolben.

範例: Yes, I have visited several places with different climates. I enjoy visiting places during rainy days because the natural beauty is perfect at that time.

× In my area there are several. Weather. Every two months. Hey, weather, come. That's mean. Is 6 different car type of weather in a year?

✓ In my area, there are several types of weather every two months. That means there are six different types of weather in a year.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. Combining the fragments into complete sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Is 6 different car type of weather in a year?

✓ There are six different types of weather in a year.

The phrase 'car type' is incorrect here; it should be 'types' to correctly describe the variety of weather. Also, the sentence structure is incorrect; it should be a statement rather than a question.

× Must be 'cause. In summer with weather. I feel very uncomfortable and I also have a logical problem.

✓ It must be because in summer weather, I feel very uncomfortable and I also have a health problem.

The modal verb 'must be' should be used in a complete sentence. Also, 'logical problem' is likely a mishearing or misstatement; 'health problem' fits better in this context.

× That's why I prefer cold weather most.

✓ That's why I prefer cold weather the most.

The superlative form requires the definite article 'the' before 'most' to be grammatically correct.

× Mostly I preferred driver turn over. Wait wait Don, becauses in my area street are very bad.

✓ Mostly, I prefer dry weather because in my area the streets are very bad.

The verb 'preferred' is past tense but the context suggests a present preference, so 'prefer' is correct. Also, 'driver turn over' is unclear and likely incorrect; it was omitted for clarity.

× When drain. Anne. The roads are really. Unusable. Distant.

✓ When it rains, the roads become really unusable and distant.

The phrase 'when drain' is incorrect; it should be 'when it rains'. Also, 'distant' is unclear here; possibly 'muddy' or 'damaged' would be better, but kept as 'distant' for minimal correction.

× Yeah. Are you? Check every day weather condition on my phone. It's Henry mean to prepare. Myself. Terrain. Suddenly, APL.

✓ Yes, I check the weather conditions on my phone every day. It helps me prepare myself for sudden changes in terrain and weather.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Combining them into coherent sentences improves understanding and grammatical correctness.

× In recent year. He's so many changes. Because I am in my area. There are more. Less ring then. Others here.

✓ In recent years, there have been many changes. In my area, there is more rain than in other places.

The original sentences have tense errors and unclear phrases. 'He's so many changes' is incorrect; 'there have been many changes' is correct. 'Less ring then' is likely 'more rain than'.

× I visit several places in different climate. Because. Different places are switchable for different climates such as a select.

✓ I have visited several places with different climates because different places are suitable for different climates.

The verb tense should be present perfect 'have visited' to indicate experience. 'Switchable' is incorrect; 'suitable' is the correct adjective here.

× There are perfect time to go on rainy days because this time natural beauty.

✓ There is a perfect time to go on rainy days because at this time, the natural beauty is enhanced.

The sentence lacks articles and proper structure. 'There are perfect time' should be 'There is a perfect time'. Adding 'at this time' and 'is enhanced' clarifies the meaning.