写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a direct, natural short answer and then add one specific reason. Use correct grammar (use contractions or auxiliary verbs) and avoid contradiction (first say no then say will try). Keep within 1–3 sentences.

範例: Not really — I don’t write much because my English isn’t very strong. However, I’m trying to practice more by writing short notes and emails every week.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence naming what you write, then give specific reasons using linking words (because, so, and). Use correct verb forms and reduce filler words.

範例: I enjoy writing short stories because they let me be creative and explore different characters. Also, stories have a clear sequence, so it’s easier for me to organize my ideas.

建議: Answer directly and clearly. Explain one or two specific reasons why you would revise your writing, using linking words (for example, because, so) and correct grammar. Avoid hesitation and repetition.

範例: Yes, I often revise my writing because I find grammar or vocabulary mistakes. For example, I usually edit sentences to make the meaning clearer and check word choice.

建議: Give a clear preference and specific reasons. Use correct grammar and avoid vague words like 'maybe' when expressing a preference. Provide one or two concise supporting details connected with linking words.

範例: I prefer handwriting in Thai because it feels more personal and I can easily cross out and rewrite sentences. I don’t like typing as much because I make more careless mistakes on a keyboard.

建議: Answer with a clear time expression (e.g., rarely, often) and give a specific reason for the change. Use past tense for past habits and present tense for current habits; avoid repetition.

範例: I don’t keep a diary now, but I used to write one almost every week in high school. I stopped because I’m busier now and I don’t find the time or inspiration to write daily entries.

建議: Give a clear answer and mention specific alternatives (photos, apps, notes) if any, or state clearly you don’t use methods and explain why. Reduce hesitations and use concise sentences with linking words.

範例: I don’t really use any method to record my life. Instead of journaling, I sometimes take photos on my phone to remember events, but generally I prefer not to keep records.

× No, because my English not good and I will try my best to write a lot.

✓ No, because my English is not good and I will try my best to write a lot.

Missing verb 'is' (therefore sentence lacks a linking verb) and article/or structure: 'my English not good' is ungrammatical. This is a sentence structure and verb-to-be error. Suggestion: Always include the correct form of 'to be' with adjectives describing a subject: 'my English is not good.'

× Maybe I would like to write a story because story is easy and you can, uh, think a lot like you want and then story have a sequence that you can write.

✓ Maybe I would like to write a story because a story is easy and you can think a lot as you want, and then a story has a sequence that you can follow when you write.

Problems: missing articles before 'story', incorrect verb form 'have' (should be 'has' for singular noun), and awkward adverb/phrase 'think a lot like you want'. Use article 'a' for singular countable nouns. Use third-person singular 'has' for 'a story.' Rephrase 'think a lot as you want' or 'think as much as you want.'

× Maybe it will, maybe I'll like exam. I will change because there is incorrect or uh, maybe the meaning is not good, maybe not correct and then and it need change also there umm.

✓ Maybe it will. Maybe I'll like edit. I will change it because there are incorrect parts, or maybe the meaning is not good or not correct, and it needs changes.

Errors: wrong word 'exam' likely intended 'edit'; subject-verb agreement 'there is incorrect' should be 'there are incorrect parts'; 'it need change' should be 'it needs changes' or 'it needs to be changed.' Use third-person singular present 'needs.' Ensure clarity: refer to 'it' (the writing) and plural/singular agreement.

× Maybe I will using Thai, uh, handwriting because handwriting you can change, uh, because typing I'm not prefer because.

✓ Maybe I will use Thai handwriting because, with handwriting, you can change things more easily. I don't prefer typing.

Incorrect verb form 'will using' should be 'will use' (modal + base verb). 'I'm not prefer' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I don't prefer' or 'I don't like.' Also add articles and clarify 'Thai handwriting.'

× Now I don't have keep Diaries but my umm when I was in high school I will keep a Diaries but now I don't have to keep Diaries because now I have no idea to to write the Diaries and this.

✓ Now I don't keep a diary, but when I was in high school I kept a diary. Now I don't keep one because I have no idea what to write in it.

Multiple issues: incorrect verb forms ('don't have keep' should be 'don't keep'), incorrect article and plural use ('Diaries' vs 'a diary'), wrong tense ('will keep' should be past 'kept'). Also remove repetition and clarify the reason. Use simple past for past habit and present simple for current habit.

× I don't have, I don't have method to record my life because I'm, I did not like to record and I also, uh, also, uh, not, not, not, uh, dislike to take photo and then, but I will try my best to.

✓ I don't have a method to record my life because I don't like to record. I also don't like to take photos, but I will try my best to do so.

Problems: missing article 'a method', inconsistent tense ('did not like' should be 'don't like' to match present), double negatives and repetitions. Use plural 'photos' and consistent present tense. Streamline repetition and finish the thought 'try my best to do so.'