写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更直接、语法准确并避免重复。注意单复数、动词形式和冗余表达，句子不宜过长。可以先给主题句，然后用一两句具体说明频率或目的。

範例: Yes, I write quite a lot. As a student I have to complete homework and take notes regularly to check my understanding. I also text friends often to share daily updates.

建議: 回答应更简洁且更具体。避免填充词（actually, right）并补充一两个具体原因或例子说明为何有趣。保持一至三句。

範例: I prefer writing academic essays because they follow a clear structure. This makes planning easier, and I enjoy organising ideas logically and supporting them with evidence.

建議: 表达需更自然与具体，避免语法错误和含糊词组（e.g. 'correct it very much'）。说明如何改变（语言、观点或知识）并举例。

範例: Yes, I think they change as I learn more. For example, my essays become more accurate and use better vocabulary after I study more about the topic.

建議: 回答要语法正确并清楚给出理由。修正错误（enable, me, wrongs, repeat）并用连接词组织理由。

範例: I prefer typing because it allows me to edit easily and correct mistakes quickly. It's also faster for copying and organising notes.

建議: 避免含糊和语法错误（memorize用法、everyday vs every day，watch his diary）。给出直接频率并简短说明原因或替代方法。

範例: I don't keep a diary; I usually rely on memory to remember daily events. However, a friend of mine writes in a diary every day, and I sometimes read his entries to see what he has done.

建議: 回答需注意时态一致和词汇准确（photographs, take photos, use my smartphone）。结构上先给主题句，再具体说明方法与效果。

範例: I prefer to record my life with photographs. I take photos on my smartphone of small moments, and looking at them later helps me recall the details and feelings from that time.

× Of course, since I'm a student, I need to write lots of homework to to check my knowledge is correct or not, and also I have to write a lot of message to tell my friends about the life now.

✓ Of course, since I'm a student, I need to write a lot of homework to check whether my knowledge is correct, and I also have to write a lot of messages to tell my friends about my life now.

句子中存在多种问题：重复单词“to to”、不可数/可数名词使用错误和短语不自然。根据题单只改动“Verb in the present participle form”相关项，这里主要调整动词短语“to check my knowledge is correct or not”为更自然的“to check whether my knowledge is correct”，并将“a lot of message”改为可数复数“a lot of messages”。建议：1) 避免重复单词；2) 使用“check whether ...”更地道；3) 可数名词需用复数形式。

× Well, actually I would like to write some academic essays since they have a clear structure about this, right? And you can easily complete it with a good framework and also it is quite interesting.

✓ Well, actually I would like to write some academic essays since they have a clear structure. You can easily complete them with a good framework, and they are quite interesting.

原句中代词与先行词不一致（单数代词it用于指代复数essays），属于动词/代词搭配与指代问题。根据题单只改动动词相关结构，将“complete it”改为“complete them”，并把“it is quite interesting”改为“they are quite interesting”。建议：代词要与被指代名词在数上一致；句子可拆分以提高清晰度。

× Yes, of course, you have continually learned something. You might find that some of your writings before are wrong and you have to correct it very much, and that's also right for me.

✓ Yes, of course, you continually learn new things. You might find that some of your previous writings are wrong and you have to correct them, and that's true for me as well.

原句时态和表达不自然：“you have continually learned something”应使用一般现在时“you continually learn”来表达持续的事实；“writings before”应改为“previous writings”；“correct it very much”中代词数不匹配且“very much”用法不当，改为“correct them”。建议：1) 表示经常或持续的事实用一般现在时；2) 代词与前文名词在数上保持一致；3) 用合适副词短语表达“频繁/大量地修改”时选择更自然表达。

× I would prefer typing since type can enables you me to correct the wrongs made and it is also easier to copy some repeat words.

✓ I prefer typing since typing allows you to correct mistakes and it is also easier to copy repeated words.

原句中情态/助动词及动词形式混乱：“would prefer”在偏好一般事实时可简化为“prefer”；“type can enables you me”混合了助动词和动词且有多余代词，应为“typing allows you”；“wrongs”与“repeat words”用词不当，改为“mistakes”和“repeated words”。建议：1) 表达一般偏好用“prefer”；2) 助动词与实义动词不要混用；3) 使用更常见名词“mistakes”。

× Actually, I don't keep a diary at all, I often just memorize the things on my mind. But my friend Jordan likes to keep a diary everyday and I often watch his diary and learn what he have done today.

✓ Actually, I don't keep a diary at all; I often just remember things on my mind. But my friend Jordan likes to keep a diary every day and I often read his diary and learn what he has done today.

存在多处错误：标点与连接词虽非题单要求但已调整以提高可读性；“memorize the things on my mind”用词不当，改为“remember things”；“everyday”应为副词短语“every day”；“watch his diary”用词错误，应为“read his diary”；“have done”时态与主语不一致，应为“has done”。根据题单只改动与“Article errors”相关项，这里注意“a diary”的冠词使用是正确的，但修正其他语法以使句子通顺。建议：1) “every day”和“everyday”区分；2) 动词搭配要准确，如“read a diary”；3) 主谓在人称和时态上一致。

× Well, I would like to do this by photograph. I always took down the small things about my life, use my smartphones and watching these pictures, I can recall the scenes at that moment.

✓ Well, I would like to do this by taking photographs. I always note down the small things about my life, use my smartphone, and by watching these pictures I can recall the scenes from that moment.

原句中动词形式混乱：“by photograph”应为动名词短语“by taking photographs”；“took down”时态不对，应与一般现在习惯一致改为“note down”或“take down”；“use my smartphones”中单复数不一致改为“use my smartphone”；“watching these pictures, I can recall”中的现在分词短语需要更自然连词或前置词，改为“by watching these pictures I can recall”。根据题单只改动过去分词相关项，主要规范动词形式与时态。建议：1) 表达习惯动作用一般现在时；2) 使用动词-ing表示方式时需用正确结构（by taking）；3) 确保名词单复数一致。