写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise and directly responsive. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and subject-verb agreement, avoid filler sounds, and give one brief supporting detail. Use linking words like 'but' or 'now' to show contrast.

範例: I used to write a lot when I was at university because professors assigned lengthy reports, sometimes up to 10,000 words. However, now I write much less since I don’t have those assignments.

建議: Provide a clear topic sentence and then specific, well-structured reasons. Use correct collocations (keep a journal / self-reflect), avoid awkward phrasing, and link ideas with words like 'because' and 'so'. Limit to 2–3 concise sentences.

範例: I like keeping a journal because it helps me reflect on my progress and identify areas to improve. For example, by reviewing past entries I can track habits and decide which strengths to develop further.

建議: Answer directly and logically. State your opinion clearly, then give a concise explanation with a concrete example. Avoid fillers and informal metaphors like 'plot twist' unless briefly explained.

範例: Yes, I think what I write will change because plans and priorities often shift over time. For example, a goal I wrote last year to travel more changed when I started a demanding job and had to focus on my career instead.

建議: State your preference clearly, give 1–2 specific reasons, and use correct vocabulary (be familiar with / comfortable with, holding a pen). Avoid hesitations and finish the comparison sentence. Keep it concise.

範例: I prefer typing because I’m more comfortable with a keyboard and it lets me write much faster. Also, editing is easier on a computer than crossing out handwriting.

建議: Give a clear frequency statement first, then a brief reason or example. Use natural adverbs of frequency (rarely / once a month) and concise supporting detail to show purpose.

範例: I rarely keep a diary — usually only once a month. I write monthly summaries to record important events and reflect on my personal growth.

建議: Give a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition (phone camera), and use precise phrases (capture memories, special moments). Limit to two sentences and give one specific example of how you use photos.

範例: I usually use my phone camera to capture memories, especially when I travel or during special events. For instance, I take short videos at family gatherings so I can revisit those moments later.

× Uh, I used to write a lot back, back when I were in universities seeing my professor assigning a lot of projects that I need to write a report with like 10,000 word.

✓ Uh, I used to write a lot back when I was at university, because my professors assigned many projects that I needed to write reports of about 10,000 words.

The sentence has multiple past-tense errors and agreement issues. 'were' should be 'was' for singular 'I' in past tense. Use 'at university' rather than 'in universities' for general past study. 'seeing my professor assigning' is awkward and tense-inconsistent; change to 'because my professors assigned'. 'I need' should be past 'I needed'. 'a report with like 10,000 word' needs plural 'reports' and 'words' and a clearer phrasing 'reports of about 10,000 words'. Improve by keeping verbs consistently in past tense and matching plural forms.

× So I think in the past I write a lot, but now, uh, it's 10.

✓ So I think in the past I wrote a lot, but now I don't write much.

The speaker mixes present tense 'write' with reference to the past; it should be past 'wrote'. 'it's 10' is unclear and informal; replace with a clear statement 'I don't write much' to fit the meaning. Ensure tense matches the time reference.

× Actually, recently I tend to foster my habit in writing a journal.

✓ Actually, recently I have been trying to develop the habit of writing a journal.

'tend to foster my habit in writing a journal' is unidiomatic. Use the present perfect continuous 'have been trying' to show recent tendency. 'foster my habit in' should be 'develop the habit of'. Gerund 'writing' is fine but better as 'of writing a journal'. Keep verb forms natural and match aspect.

× I want to do myself reflect so I can see how far I have been and also what I already improve myself and how should I straighten my strength more.

✓ I want to reflect on myself so I can see how far I have come, what I have already improved, and how I should strengthen my strengths further.

Problems include incorrect phrase order and reflexive pronoun misuse 'do myself reflect' should be 'reflect on myself'. 'how far I have been' should be 'how far I have come'. 'what I already improve myself' should be 'what I have already improved'. 'how should I straighten my strength' word order and verbs are wrong; use 'how I should strengthen my strengths further'. Maintain correct verb tense (present perfect) and proper reflexive use.

× Yes, I believe so because, umm, we cannot predict for the future sometime when we write on our paper that we want to do this or to do that, but in the future, it's like a plot twist.

✓ Yes, I believe so because we cannot predict the future; sometimes when we write on paper that we want to do this or that, later it turns out differently, like a plot twist.

Remove unnecessary 'for' after 'predict' and correct adverb placement 'sometime' to 'sometimes'. Keep tense consistent and clarify 'in the future, it's like a plot twist' to 'later it turns out differently, like a plot twist'. Ensure sentence flow and proper adverb usage.

× It change like, uh, 180°.

✓ It changes, like, 180 degrees.

Subject-verb agreement requires 'changes' (third-person singular). Use 'degrees' rather than the symbol and keep present tense 'changes' since speaking generally. Also add commas for natural pauses.

× Uh, recently I prefer typing.

✓ Recently I have preferred typing.

'Prefer' is simple present but with 'recently' a present perfect 'have preferred' is more natural to indicate a recent change. If keeping simple present, 'I prefer typing' is acceptable, but context suggests a recent shift. Ensure tense matches timeframe.

× It's more convenient with me because I family with the keyboard compared then when I holding the pants and writing on the paper and I can see my speed writing on umm, computer or keyboard, it's uh, faster than.

✓ It's more convenient for me because I am familiar with the keyboard compared to holding a pen and writing on paper, and I can see that my typing on a computer or keyboard is faster.

Multiple preposition and word choice issues: 'with me' should be 'for me'; 'I family with' should be 'I am familiar with'; 'compared then' should be 'compared to'; 'holding the pants' is incorrect—should be 'holding a pen'; 'writing on the paper' -> 'writing on paper'; 'I can see my speed writing on computer or keyboard, it's faster than' is ungrammatical—rephrase to 'I can see that my typing on a computer or keyboard is faster'. Use correct prepositions and compare phrases clearly.

× I would say not often that I keep my diary, uh, only like once per month, so I can write what I have been through and also reflect about myself.

✓ I would say I don't keep my diary often; I only write in it about once a month so I can record what I have been through and reflect on myself.

Use negative form 'I don't keep my diary often' rather than 'not often that I keep'. 'Only like once per month' should be 'only about once a month'. 'reflect about myself' is better as 'reflect on myself'. Maintain natural verb forms and prepositions.

× I typically use a camera from my phone, my phone camera in order to record myself when I traveling to other places or in the, uh, special moment.

✓ I typically use my phone's camera to record myself when I travel to other places or during special moments.

Use possessive 'my phone's camera' rather than 'a camera from my phone'. 'in order to' can be simplified to 'to'. 'when I traveling' needs the infinitive or correct tense 'when I travel'. 'in the special moment' should be 'during special moments'. Correct prepositions and verb forms for natural English.

× So it can keep this as the countless memory and I can keep it forever and I can watch what whenever I want.

✓ This lets me preserve countless memories that I can keep forever and watch whenever I want.

Sentence had awkward pronoun use and article problems: 'keep this as the countless memory' is ungrammatical—use 'preserve countless memories'. 'I can watch what whenever I want' should be 'I can watch them whenever I want' or rephrase as above. Ensure pronouns agree with antecedents and use appropriate articles.