写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Говорите короче и яснее: начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте 1–2 предложения с конкретной причиной. Избегайте повторов и пауз (uh). Исправьте грамматику: "I'm an IT student", "I don't write by hand", "I prefer typing/texting."

範例: No, I don't write a lot because I'm an IT student. I usually use a computer to type or send messages instead of writing by hand, so handwriting is rare for me.

建議: Отвечайте прямо и давайте конкретный пример: скажите, что именно вы записываете и зачем. Уберите неуверенные фразы и повторения. Используйте связку: "for example" правильно и кратко.

範例: I like writing short notes, especially keywords and reminders. For example, I write brief lists of tasks or important terms when I study to remember them better.

建議: Дайте ясный вывод и объяснение: используйте связки (because, so) и корректную грамматику ("while writing", "I make mistakes"). Избегайте чисел "5050" — скажите "maybe" или "probably".

範例: Maybe my writing will change over time because when I write I often make mistakes and then correct them. So I prefer typing on a computer because it's easier to edit.

建議: Начните с краткого утверждения, затем объясните причину с подробностью и без повторов. Исправьте порядок слов и артикли ("I prefer typing to handwriting", "most of my time I spend typing").

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because I'm an IT student and I spend most of my time working on a computer. Also, my handwriting is not very neat, so typing is more efficient for me.

建議: Отвечайте прямо на вопрос о частоте (e.g., "never", "rarely", "daily"). Объясните альтернативный способ записи: используйте правильную грамматику ("I don't keep a diary", "I post on my Telegram channel").

範例: I don't keep a handwritten diary. Instead, I rarely post short entries about my day on my Telegram channel, so I record my life digitally rather than writing by hand.

建議: Будьте конкретнее: назовите методы и приведите короткий пример использования каждого. Уберите тавтологию и исправьте словосочетания ("record my thoughts", "in digital format").

範例: I record my life mainly in digital form: I post short written updates and sometimes short videos on my Telegram channel. For example, I often upload a 1–2 minute video summarising my day.

× To be honest, uh, no, I don't, uh, write a lot because I'm a IT student.

✓ To be honest, uh, no, I don't, uh, write a lot because I'm an IT student.

Use 'an' before words beginning with a vowel sound. 'IT' is pronounced 'eye-tee', which begins with a vowel sound, so the correct article is 'an'. Provide practice choosing 'a' vs 'an' based on initial sound.

× I ride on a computer for on.

✓ I spend a lot of time on the computer.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Use the verb 'spend' with 'time' to express duration and the prepositional phrase 'on the computer'. Suggest practicing common expressions for time and activity (e.g., 'spend time on', 'use the computer').

× I am do not writing on a hand, I write.

✓ I do not write by hand; I type.

Combination of auxiliary forms is incorrect ('am do not writing' mixes continuous and negative auxiliaries). Use simple present negative 'do not write' and correct preposition 'by hand'. Use 'type' to describe using a keyboard. Practice forming negatives and collocations like 'write by hand' and 'type on a computer'.

× I am I am texting on a computer and I prefer texting.

✓ I am texting on the computer, and I prefer typing.

Repetition 'I am I am' is redundant. Use 'the computer' for a specific device previously mentioned. Use 'typing' rather than 'texting' if referring to general keyboard input; 'texting' often implies phone messages. Suggest removing duplicates and choosing consistent verbs.

× No, one of my favorite hobbies, it's writing notes.

✓ One of my favorite hobbies is writing notes.

Original has unnecessary 'No' and an inverted structure with extra 'it's'. Use a clear subject-predicate structure: 'One of my favorite hobbies is...'. Practice forming clearest subject-verb order.

× For example, I love, uh, I like writing notes, uh, for example, keywords that type of words, but not a.

✓ For example, I like writing notes with keywords, short phrases rather than full sentences.

Sentence contains repetition and incorrect phrase 'keywords that type of words, but not a.' Clarify meaning: 'keywords' and 'short phrases' are correct collocations. Remove redundant fillers and use parallel structures. Practice concise expression and noun phrases.

× Maybe it can change 5050 but when I writing I do some mistakes and I correct it and then I think it's texting on a computer better than writing on a hand.

✓ Maybe it could change 50/50, but when I write I make some mistakes and correct them, and I think typing on a computer is better than writing by hand.

Several errors: 'can' should be 'could' for possibility in context (modal usage), numeric '5050' should be '50/50', verb form 'writing' should be 'write' after 'when', 'do some mistakes' should be 'make some mistakes', pronoun agreement 'it' -> 'them' for plural 'mistakes', and 'writing on a hand' -> 'writing by hand'. Also use 'typing' for computer input and 'is better than' for comparison. Practice modals, verb forms after time clauses, collocations 'make mistakes' and pronoun agreement.

× I prefer typing, uh, note handwriting because I am an IT student and uh, more my time I typing on a computer and my uh, handwriting is very, uh, not beautiful, very uh.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because I am an IT student and most of my time I type on a computer, and my handwriting is not beautiful.

Use the correct preposition 'prefer X to Y'. 'More my time' is incorrect; use 'most of my time'. Verb form 'I typing' should be 'I type'. Avoid redundant fillers. Practice comparative structures and common time expressions.

× OK, I'm really, uh, keep Diaries because, uh, the handwriting not for me and I don't like it.

✓ OK, I don't really keep a diary because handwriting is not for me and I don't like it.

'Keep Diaries' is plural and unusual; use 'keep a diary' (or 'keep diaries' if habitual but singular more natural). 'I'm really keep' mixes tenses; use simple present negative 'I don't really keep'. Also article with 'diary' and word order corrected. Practice negation and noun number with 'a'.

× I have an A channel on my telegram and I typing about my day in this channel and I'm do not keeping Diaries.

✓ I have a channel on my Telegram where I type about my day, and I do not keep a diary.

Misuse of articles: 'an A channel' -> 'a channel', capitalization 'Telegram'. Verb forms: 'I typing' -> 'I type', 'I'm do not keeping' -> 'I do not keep'. Also 'Diaries' should be singular 'a diary' in this context. Practice relative clauses ('where I...') and correct verb forms for present habitual actions.

× I post short interviews about my day on my Telegram channel, so I still record my touts button at digital format.

✓ I post short videos about my day on my Telegram channel, so I still record my thoughts in digital format.

'Interviews' is unlikely; 'videos' or 'posts' fits better. 'Touts button' is unclear; likely 'thoughts'. Use 'in digital format' rather than 'at'. Articles adjusted and word choices corrected. Practice vocabulary and prepositions 'in digital format'.

× Uh, for example, I can uh, do a video, take a video, take a look for me.

✓ For example, I can make a video, record a video, or take a video of myself.

Use collocations: 'make a video' or 'record a video' and 'of myself' for filming oneself. 'Take a look for me' is incorrect. Practice verb+noun collocations with 'video' and reflexive object 'myself'.