写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cần giảm tiếng ngập ngừng (umm), rút gọn ý để tự nhiên hơn và sửa ngữ pháp. Nên mở đầu trực tiếp, dùng một hoặc hai câu hỗ trợ cụ thể (ví dụ tần suất, loại bài viết). Tránh câu quá dài và lỗi cấu trúc như "in order to not being out of touch" (sửa thành "to stay in touch").

範例: Yes, I write quite a lot. I usually write essays and assignments for school every day, and I also send messages or letters to friends who live far away to stay in touch.

建議: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng: "writing theories" có vẻ không phù hợp với ý muốn biểu đạt cảm xúc. Cần dùng từ chính xác (ví dụ: "poetry" hay "personal essays") và giải thích cụ thể lý do. Hạn chế lặp từ ("it it") và dùng 1–2 câu hỗ trợ.

範例: I enjoy writing poetry because it feels like the most natural way to express my emotions. I find it easy to choose words and images that reflect how I feel, so I rarely struggle when I write poems.

建議: Thí sinh không hiểu câu hỏi nên trả lời lúng túng. Cần yêu cầu làm rõ khi không chắc ("Could you clarify?") hoặc đưa ra quan điểm rõ ràng. Sửa ngữ pháp và từ không phù hợp ("by pants" nên là "by hand" hoặc "put in a notebook"). Tránh lặp và làm câu mạch lạc với liên từ hợp lý.

範例: I'm not sure I understand — do you mean whether my opinions change over time? If so, I think some things I write do change because I revise my thoughts later, but factual notes I write down, like lists or plans, usually stay the same.

建議: Trả lời rõ ràng, có lý do và ví dụ. Cần gọn hơn một chút, tránh bắt đầu nhiều câu bằng "Actually". Có thể thêm một câu so sánh ngắn để tự nhiên hơn.

範例: I prefer typing because it's faster and more convenient for editing. For example, when I write essays or practise for exams I can reorganise paragraphs and correct mistakes quickly, which saves time compared to handwriting.

建議: Ý chính rõ nhưng cần sửa ngữ pháp và chữ viết hoa không cần thiết (diaries, to-do list). Giảm tiếng ngập ngừng và tách thành 1–2 câu mạch lạc, cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về nội dung nhật ký hoặc thời gian có lợi.

範例: I try to keep a diary once a week because of my busy school schedule. It was hard at first, but using a to-do list and better time management has made it much easier.

建議: Câu trả lời tốt, cụ thể và tự nhiên. Cần sửa một vài lỗi nhỏ ("pic" -> "pictures", grammar: "more easily" -> "easier") và nối ý mạch lạc hơn bằng một liên từ ngắn.

範例: Besides handwriting, I often use photos and videos to record my life. Pictures help me capture special moments like family gatherings or trips, so when I look back it's easier to remember how I felt.

× I write letters and messages to my friends who live far away in order to not being out of touch.

✓ I write letters and messages to my friends who live far away in order not to be out of touch.

Incorrect use of 'being' after 'in order to'. After 'in order to' we need the base form of the verb (infinitive) without 'to' repeated; use 'be' rather than 'being'. Suggestion: use 'in order not to be' or simply 'so as not to be'.

× Actually, I enjoy writing theories because I think it it is the most natural way to express my emotions that I like.

✓ Actually, I enjoy writing essays because I think it is the most natural way to express the emotions I feel.

The word 'theories' is likely incorrect contextually; 'essays' or 'writing' fits better. Also 'it it' is duplicated; remove one. The phrase 'that I like' is awkward; use 'I feel' or omit. Suggestion: choose the correct noun and avoid duplicate words.

× I will not feel difficult or have any trouble with writing theories.

✓ I do not find writing essays difficult or troublesome.

'Feel difficult' is incorrect: 'find something difficult' is the correct structure. 'Writing theories' should be 'writing essays' to match previous correction. Use present simple to describe general ability. Suggestion: use 'find + object + adjective' or 'have trouble doing'.

× I'm actually I don't understand the question well, but from my perspective I guess that whatever I wrote down would not change because I tend to write things down by pants which can which can keep them stay for so long time.

✓ Actually, I don't understand the question well, but from my perspective I guess that whatever I write down will not change because I tend to write things down in my pants pockets, which can keep them for a long time.

Multiple errors: 'I'm actually I don't' has extra 'I'm' — remove it. Tense: 'wrote down' should be present 'write down' for habitual/general statements; 'would not change' better as 'will not change' to match current belief. Preposition/use: 'by pants' is incorrect; use 'in my pants pockets'. Redundancy 'which can which can keep them stay' — simplify to 'which can keep them'. Use 'a long time' instead of 'so long time'. Suggestion: clean up extra words, use correct tense for general statements, and correct prepositions.

× For example, when I write essays for school or practice for exams.

✓ For example, when I write essays for school or practice for exams, typing allows me to correct mistakes quickly without starting over.

This sentence fragment lacks completion; it's a dependent clause and should be connected to the main clause. Ensure the participle/clause is linked to its main clause. Suggestion: combine with the following sentence to form a complete sentence.

× Actually because of my busy school work, I try to keep Diaries once a week.

✓ Actually, because of my busy schoolwork, I try to keep a diary once a week.

'School work' should be 'schoolwork' as one word. 'Diaries' is plural but 'once a week' implies one diary/journal entry; use 'a diary' (or 'diary entries') and lowercase 'diaries'. Also add commas after introductory adverb. Suggestion: use 'keep a diary' or 'write diary entries once a week'.

× Umm it it was so hard at first but due to my To Do List and my improved time management skills I find it not hard as it was.

✓ It was very hard at first, but thanks to my to-do list and improved time management skills, I now find it easier than before.

Duplicate 'it it' should be removed. 'Due to' can be used but 'thanks to' is more natural here. 'I find it not hard as it was' is awkward; use comparative 'easier than before'. Capitalization: 'To Do List' should be 'to-do list'. Suggestion: use natural comparative structures and tidy capitalization.

× Taking pic helps me capture special moments like family gatherings or trips with my friends.

✓ Taking pictures helps me capture special moments like family gatherings or trips with my friends.

'Pic' is informal and uncountable here; use 'pictures' (plural) or 'photos'. Also include the verb agreement 'Taking pictures helps'. Suggestion: use 'photos' or 'pictures' in formal speech.

× So whenever I look back, I find it more easily to remember how I felt at that time.

✓ So whenever I look back, I find it easier to remember how I felt at that time.

'More easily' is an adverb; the intended meaning requires the adjective 'easier' to modify 'to remember' conceptually. Use 'easier' not 'more easily'. Suggestion: use 'easier' for comparative adjective in this structure.