写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'I ate autumn' which seems incorrect. Try to be more precise and avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases. Also, organize your answer logically and use correct verb tenses.

範例: Yes, I write quite a lot, especially because I have been learning French for over six months. During this time, I have taken many notes to help me remember vocabulary and grammar. Additionally, I practice writing regularly to prepare for my IELTS exam, along with listening and reading exercises.

建議: Your answer is a bit repetitive and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific examples using correct grammar and linking words to improve coherence.

範例: I enjoy writing different things depending on the situation. For example, when I prepare for exams, I write study notes and labels. On the other hand, if I go shopping, I usually write a grocery list to help me remember what to buy.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain how your writing changes daily with specific examples.

範例: Yes, the things I write change frequently. For instance, some days I enjoy writing poems, while on other days, especially when preparing for exams, I focus on writing study notes. Therefore, my writing topics vary depending on my daily activities.

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use linking words to contrast your preferences and explain reasons more clearly.

範例: I use both typing and handwriting depending on the situation. For example, when I prepare for exams, I prefer handwriting with a pen or pencil because it helps me understand the content better. However, for tasks like sending text messages or working on school projects, I usually type because it is faster and more convenient.

建議: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct sentence structures. Also, avoid repetition and provide specific reasons for your change in diary-keeping habits.

範例: I don't keep diaries as often as I used to. When I was in high school, I loved writing in my diary and recorded everything important. However, nowadays, I find it difficult to keep my diary safe, so I prefer to write important notes on my phone instead.

建議: Your answer is generally good but could be improved by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and be more specific about how you record your life.

範例: I use several methods to record my life. Firstly, I often take pictures with my cell phone to save memories. Secondly, when I have time, I write important events or thoughts in a notes app on my phone to avoid forgetting them.

× So in this six months I ate autumn.

✓ So in these six months I have studied a lot.

The original sentence uses 'ate autumn' which is incorrect and unrelated to the context. The student likely meant to express that they studied a lot during these six months. Also, 'this six months' should be 'these six months' to agree in number. The correct past tense and expression is 'have studied a lot' to indicate ongoing action over the period.

× Apart from this, to prepare for my IELTS exam, I did return practice and listening, writing and reading.

✓ Apart from this, to prepare for my IELTS exam, I practiced speaking, listening, writing, and reading.

The phrase 'did return practice' is incorrect and unclear. The student likely meant 'practiced speaking'. Also, the verb 'did' is unnecessary here. The correct past tense verb is 'practiced' and the list of skills should be clear and parallel.

× It's hard to say one thing that what I enjoy, right?

✓ It's hard to say one thing that I enjoy, right?

The phrase 'that what I enjoy' is incorrect. The word 'what' is unnecessary and causes redundancy. The correct phrase is 'that I enjoy' to properly connect the clause.

× I can write anything depend on the situation.

✓ I can write anything depending on the situation.

The verb 'depend' should be in the '-ing' form 'depending' after 'anything' to correctly express the condition. This is a common verb + -ing form usage.

× if I am preparing my exam, I would write my exams labels.

✓ If I am preparing for my exam, I would write my exam labels.

The phrase 'preparing my exam' is incorrect; it should be 'preparing for my exam'. Also, 'exams labels' should be singular possessive 'exam labels' to match the singular 'exam'. The modal 'would' is acceptable here for hypothetical situations.

× let's say if I'm going to grocery for shopping, I will I could write to the grocery list.

✓ Let's say if I'm going to the grocery store for shopping, I could write a grocery list.

The phrase 'going to grocery' is missing the article 'the' and the noun 'store' to be correct. Also, 'I will I could write to the grocery list' is incorrect and redundant; it should be 'I could write a grocery list'. The preposition 'to' before 'the grocery list' is unnecessary.

× Yeah, they it's all depend on the situation.

✓ Yeah, it all depends on the situation.

The phrase 'they it's' is incorrect and confusing. The correct pronoun is 'it' referring to the situation, and the verb should be 'depends' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× I believe that I write every different thing every day.

✓ I believe that I write different things every day.

The phrase 'every different thing' is awkward and ungrammatical. It should be 'different things' to express variety. The present tense 'write' is correct here.

× I sometime I like to write a poem the other day.

✓ Sometimes I like to write a poem.

The phrase 'I sometime I' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'Sometimes'. Also, 'the other day' conflicts with present tense 'like'; it should be omitted or changed to past tense if referring to a specific past day.

× I am preparing for my exam so I write the exams labels.

✓ I am preparing for my exam, so I write the exam labels.

'Exams labels' should be singular possessive 'exam labels' to match 'my exam'. The present tense usage is appropriate here.

× So overall yes I whenever I write it always change the next day.

✓ So overall, yes, whenever I write, it always changes the next day.

The verb 'change' should be in third person singular 'changes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× I use both typing as well as handwriting.

✓ I use both typing and handwriting.

The phrase 'both typing as well as handwriting' is awkward. The correct correlative conjunction is 'both... and...' to connect two items.

× It would easy for me to understand the contest.

✓ It would be easy for me to understand the content.

The verb 'be' is missing after 'would'. Also, 'contest' is a wrong word here; the correct word is 'content'.

× then I would definitely use that.

✓ then I would definitely use that.

This sentence is incomplete in context but grammatically correct. No correction needed.

× I avoid Diaries these days as compared to the past.

✓ I avoid diaries these days compared to the past.

'Diaries' should not be capitalized. Also, 'as compared to' is wordy; 'compared to' is sufficient.

× When I was in high school, I loved Diaries so much and everything I important I always wrote on a diary.

✓ When I was in high school, I loved diaries so much and I always wrote everything important in a diary.

'Diaries' should be lowercase. The phrase 'everything I important' is incorrect; it should be 'everything important'. Also, 'wrote on a diary' should be 'wrote in a diary'.

× These days I believe that it's hard for me to keep my diary in A at a safe place, so I always write and and useful thing on myself.

✓ These days I believe that it's hard for me to keep my diary in a safe place, so I always write useful things for myself.

The phrase 'in A at a safe place' has an unnecessary capital 'A' and redundant prepositions. 'Write and and useful thing on myself' is incorrect; it should be 'write useful things for myself'.

× I always take pictures in my cell phone to keep the memories saved.

✓ I always take pictures with my cell phone to keep the memories saved.

The correct preposition is 'with' when referring to the device used to take pictures, not 'in'.

× if I have time, I always write it down and my cell phone not to forget something important.

✓ If I have time, I always write it down on my cell phone so I don't forget something important.

The phrase 'write it down and my cell phone' is missing the preposition 'on'. Also, 'not to forget' should be 'so I don't forget' for clarity and correctness.