写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar by using correct verb forms and tenses. Also, make the answer more natural and concise by avoiding redundancy and correcting sentence structure.

範例: I used to enjoy writing a lot when I was a child, but nowadays I'm quite busy, so I don't write as often.

建議: The answer does not directly address the question about what you like to write. Focus on answering the question clearly with a topic sentence, then add reasons or examples. Also, avoid vague phrases and improve sentence clarity.

範例: I like to write personal stories and essays because they allow me to express my thoughts and reflect on my experiences.

建議: The answer is relevant but could be clearer and more natural. Correct grammar errors and explain why your writing changes. Use linking words to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I think my writing changes over time because as I gain more experience and knowledge, my style becomes more detailed and thoughtful.

建議: Improve grammar by adding missing verbs and articles. Also, clarify the reason and avoid awkward phrasing. Use linking words to make the answer coherent.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is much faster and more convenient, especially when I need to study for tests.

建議: Correct grammar and sentence structure. Make the answer more natural by using appropriate expressions and linking words to connect ideas.

範例: I keep a diary only a few times a year because I'm usually busy. However, when I do write, it helps me reflect on my thoughts and experiences.

建議: This is a good answer with clear content and examples. To improve, you could add more variety in vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence.

範例: I often use digital tools such as smartphones and social media platforms to document my life. For example, I take photos and videos to capture memorable moments, which I then share with my friends and family online.

× When I was a child I like to writing things, but nowadays I'm a little busy so I don't writing things often.

✓ When I was a child I liked writing things, but nowadays I'm a little busy so I don't write things often.

The verb 'like' should be in past tense 'liked' to match 'When I was a child'. Also, after 'like to', the verb should be in base form 'write', or use gerund 'writing' without 'to'. The phrase 'I don't writing' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't write' because 'do' is followed by base verb form.

× Yes, I believe the things are right will change over time. As I gain more experience and knowledge, my writing style and ideas tend to evolve.

✓ Yes, I believe the things that are right will change over time. As I gain more experience and knowledge, my writing style and ideas tend to evolve.

The sentence is missing the relative pronoun 'that' to connect 'the things' and 'are right'. This clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.

× Yes, I believe the things I write would change over time as I gain more experience and knowledge. My writing style and idea tend to be long.

✓ Yes, I believe the things I write will change over time as I gain more experience and knowledge. My writing style and ideas tend to be long.

The modal verb 'would' is incorrect here; 'will' is appropriate for future certainty. Also, 'idea' should be plural 'ideas' to match 'style' and maintain parallelism.

× I prefer typing over handwriting when I'm writing because it much faster and more convenient, especially for learning tests.

✓ I prefer typing over handwriting when I'm writing because it is much faster and more convenient, especially for learning tests.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' before 'much faster'. Adjectives need a linking verb to connect them to the subject.

× I really keep Diaries, maybe just a few times a year. I find it hard to maintain the habit because I'm usually busy, but when I do write helps me reflect on my thoughts and experiences.

✓ I really keep diaries, maybe just a few times a year. I find it hard to maintain the habit because I'm usually busy, but when I do, writing helps me reflect on my thoughts and experiences.

'Diaries' should not be capitalized. Also, the sentence 'when I do write helps me' is incorrect; it should be 'when I do, writing helps me' to clarify the subject and verb.