写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and slight redundancy. For example, "it help me" should be "it helps me". Also, avoid repeating similar ideas like "organize my thoughts" and "keep track of everything" without linking them smoothly. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and check subject-verb agreement.

範例: Yes, I often enjoy writing as it is one of my favourite hobbies. I especially like to write during quiet moments because it helps me organise my thoughts. For instance, when I have tasks to complete, I write them down in my To Do List so that I can keep track of everything and stay organised.

建議: Your answer covers various types of writing, which is good, but there are several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases, such as "do lists when I have tax complete" and "write message or call to my friends". Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent and avoid repetition. Pay attention to plural forms and verb agreement.

範例: I enjoy writing different types of texts. For example, I love writing short stories because they allow me to express my creativity and imagination. I also like to make to-do lists when I have tasks to complete, as they help me stay organised and keep track of my progress. Additionally, I sometimes write messages or call my friends when they are celebrating special occasions.

建議: Your answer addresses the question well and provides examples, but there are grammatical errors such as "contents are right tends to change" and "positive reflection" (should be plural). Also, use linking words like "however" appropriately and ensure subject-verb agreement. Try to be more precise and natural in your phrasing.

範例: Yes, the content I write tends to change quite often depending on my mood. For example, when I'm feeling happy or energetic, I usually write uplifting stories or positive reflections. However, during lonely or difficult times, my writing often explores the more negative or melancholy aspects of life, which helps me process my emotions.

建議: Your answer is relevant and includes examples, but there are some grammatical errors such as "allow me" instead of "allows me" and inconsistent spelling (organize vs organise). Also, avoid filler sounds like "Mm-hmm" in your answer. Use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me feel more connected to my thoughts and allows me to focus better. For example, when I write with a pen and paper, I find it easier to organise my ideas and remember information. Additionally, handwriting feels more personal and creative compared to typing on a keyboard.

建議: Your answer attempts to provide personal details, which is good, but there are many grammatical errors and unclear phrases such as "I have written a my journal dream both positive and negative time" and "gave birth to my face baby". Try to organise your answer more clearly, use correct grammar, and avoid confusing expressions. Also, keep your answer concise and coherent.

範例: I keep a diary quite often and have even kept some since my childhood. Throughout my life, I have written in my journal during both positive and difficult times. For example, two weeks ago, I found some old entries where I wrote many letters to my husband when I gave birth to my first baby.

建議: Your answer includes relevant content but contains grammatical errors such as "several method" instead of "several methods", "A to Do list app", and "important thanks" which is unclear. Also, "details entries" should be "detailed entries". Use linking words to improve flow and check vocabulary for accuracy.

範例: I use several methods to record important moments in my life. For instance, I often take pictures with my smartphone to capture special occasions, and I also use a to-do list app to type and save important tasks or reminders. Additionally, I keep a diary where I write detailed entries about my daily experiences and thoughts.

× I especially like writing during my quiet moments because it help me organize my thoughts.

✓ I especially like writing during my quiet moments because it helps me organize my thoughts.

The verb 'help' must agree with the singular subject 'it'. Therefore, 'help' should be 'helps' to match the third person singular subject.

× I also like to do lists when I have tax complete.

✓ I also like to do lists when I have tasks to complete.

The noun 'tax' is incorrect here; the plural noun 'tasks' is appropriate to indicate multiple items to complete.

× It also help me to stay organize and keep track of my progress.

✓ It also helps me to stay organised and keep track of my progress.

The verb 'help' must agree with the singular subject 'It', so it should be 'helps'. Also, 'organize' should be 'organised' in British English spelling.

× Additionally, sometimes I write message or call to my friends when they are celebrating special occasions.

✓ Additionally, sometimes I write messages or call my friends when they are celebrating special occasions.

The noun 'message' should be plural 'messages' to match the context. Also, 'call to my friends' is incorrect; it should be 'call my friends' without 'to'.

× Yes, the contents are right tends to change quite often depending on my mood.

✓ Yes, the contents tend to change quite often depending on my mood.

The phrase 'are right tends' is incorrect. The correct verb phrase is 'tend' to agree with the plural subject 'contents'.

× However, during lonely or difficult times, my writing often explores the more negative or melancholy aspects of life, which help me process my emotions.

✓ However, during lonely or difficult times, my writing often explores the more negative or melancholy aspects of life, which helps me process my emotions.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'my writing' (singular), so the verb should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject.

× I prefer handwriting because it helps me feel more connected to my thoughts and allow me to focus better.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it helps me feel more connected to my thoughts and allows me to focus better.

The verb 'allow' must agree with the singular subject 'it', so it should be 'allows'.

× Throughout my life. I have written a my journal dream both positive and negative time.

✓ Throughout my life, I have written in my journal about both positive and negative times.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correct sentence structure requires combining the fragments and clarifying the meaning with proper prepositions and plural forms.

× For example, two weeks ago I found some old entries where I've written many letter to my husband when I gave birth to my face baby.

✓ For example, two weeks ago I found some old entries where I've written many letters to my husband when I gave birth to my first baby.

The noun 'letter' should be plural 'letters' to match 'many'. Also, 'face baby' is incorrect; it should be 'first baby'.

× I use several method to record important moments in my life.

✓ I use several methods to record important moments in my life.

The noun 'method' should be plural 'methods' to agree with 'several'.

× I also use A to Do list app to type and save important thanks or reminders.

✓ I also use a To Do list app to type and save important tasks or reminders.

The noun 'thanks' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'tasks'. Also, 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'To Do' should be capitalised as a proper noun.

× Additionally, I keep a diary where I write details entries about my daily experience and thoughts.

✓ Additionally, I keep a diary where I write detailed entries about my daily experiences and thoughts.

The adjective 'details' should be 'detailed' to modify 'entries'. Also, 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' to match the plural 'entries' and 'thoughts'.