写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and direct response with proper sentence structure. For example, start with a topic sentence and then add supporting details using linking words.

範例: Yes, I write quite a lot because I have been writing since school. Currently, I write many work-related entries as part of my job, so writing is a regular activity for me.

建議: Your answer is confusing and repetitive. Use clear sentences and avoid redundancy. Start with a direct answer and then explain with specific details using linking words.

範例: When I was a child, I used to write my school homework. However, now I enjoy writing novels and keeping a daily diary because it helps me express my thoughts.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples. Keep sentences concise and relevant.

範例: Yes, the things I write have changed over time. In my childhood, I mainly wrote school assignments, but now I focus more on novels and recording my daily routine in a personal diary.

建議: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Clearly state your preference and explain why, using linking words to connect ideas.

範例: When I was a child, I preferred handwriting. However, nowadays I prefer typing on my PC because it is faster and more convenient.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and contains filler words. Try to be concise and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: I keep a personal diary daily because I like to record my daily routine and important events.

建議: Your answer repeats the same idea and lacks variety. Mention other methods if any, and use linking words to explain why you prefer them.

範例: Besides writing in my personal diary, I also take photos and use a mobile app to record important moments because they help me preserve memories effectively.

× Yes, I write a from my school to today time because I am doing a job in my in the first area, so I do write all things offer entries, so I write a lot.

✓ Yes, I have been writing since my school days until now because I am doing a job in my first area, so I write all kinds of entries, so I write a lot.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the simple present tense 'write' to describe an action continuing from the past to the present. The present perfect continuous tense 'have been writing' is appropriate to express this ongoing action. Also, some phrases were unclear and corrected for clarity.

× In my childhood I write a homework of my school, but to the time I wrote, I wrote many kind of write many kind of novels and daily diary routine of me.

✓ In my childhood, I wrote my school homework, and over time, I wrote many kinds of novels and kept a daily diary of my routine.

The sentence incorrectly uses the present tense 'write' when referring to past actions. The past tense 'wrote' is required to indicate completed actions in the past. Also, the sentence structure was improved for clarity.

× Yes to the time all things are changed from. In my childhood I wrote many kind of my school work, but today time I lot. I write a lot of novels and my daily routine on my personal diary.

✓ Yes, over time, all things have changed. In my childhood, I wrote many kinds of school work, but nowadays, I write a lot of novels and record my daily routine in my personal diary.

The original sentence mixes tenses incorrectly. Present perfect 'have changed' is used to express change over time. 'Nowadays' is used to indicate the present time. Also, sentence structure and word choice were corrected for clarity.

× In my childhood I prefer writing, but in two daytime I like to write. I like to typing in my PC and my personal.

✓ In my childhood, I preferred writing by hand, but nowadays I like to type on my PC and for personal use.

The verb 'prefer' should be in past tense 'preferred' when referring to childhood. 'Like to typing' is incorrect; it should be 'like to type'. Also, 'in two daytime' is unclear and replaced with 'nowadays' to indicate current preference.

× I I like to write all things in my personal diary, so I use uh, daily write a daily routine of me in my personal diary.

✓ I like to write everything in my personal diary, so I write my daily routine in it every day.

The sentence had redundant and awkward phrasing. 'Use uh, daily write' is incorrect; it is corrected to 'write my daily routine every day' to express habitual action in present tense clearly.

× It is a dairy because I like to write all things of my daily routine in my personal diary because it is memorable memory for me.

✓ It is a diary because I like to write all aspects of my daily routine in my personal diary as it holds memorable memories for me.

The word 'dairy' is a misspelling of 'diary'. Also, 'all things of my daily routine' is awkward; 'all aspects of my daily routine' is clearer. 'Memorable memory' is redundant; 'memorable memories' is correct. Pronoun use was adjusted for clarity.