写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng, nhưng nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'a way of us' và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn. Bạn cũng có thể mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

範例: Yes, I write quite often because it helps me relieve stress and express my emotions clearly. For example, after a busy day, I usually jot down my thoughts in a journal to feel more relaxed.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý đến số nhiều và số ít (diary/diaries) và tránh lặp từ như 'help' hai lần liên tiếp. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc.

範例: I enjoy writing diaries because I have kept one since primary school. It not only improves my writing skills but also helps me reduce stress and record important events or thoughts.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp thì hiện tại và thì tương lai, cũng như cách dùng từ chính xác hơn. Tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I believe what I write will change as I grow older because my thoughts and experiences evolve over time, which influences my writing style and content.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp số ít số nhiều và cách diễn đạt chính xác hơn. Câu trả lời có thể thêm liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc và rõ ràng hơn.

範例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember things more effectively and I can preserve my notes longer. Although typing is convenient, it doesn't suit my personal style.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như 'uh' hay 'umm'.

範例: I usually write in my diary once a week because I don't always have enough ideas to write every day.

建議: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ thừa như 'uh' và 'I think' lặp lại nhiều lần. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

範例: Another method I use to record my life is taking pictures. It is more convenient than writing a diary and helps me recall memories more vividly.

× I think writing is a way of us to reduce stress and express emotion easily.

✓ I think writing is a way for us to reduce stress and express emotions easily.

The phrase 'a way of us to' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for' in this context. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' because it refers to expressing various feelings.

× I like writing diary.

✓ I like writing diaries.

The noun 'diary' should be plural 'diaries' when referring to the activity of writing diary entries in general.

× I have a habit of writing Diaries since I was in primary school.

✓ I have had a habit of writing diaries since I was in primary school.

The verb tense should be present perfect 'have had' to indicate an action continuing from the past to present. Also, 'Diaries' should be lowercase 'diaries' as it is a common noun.

× I love writing diary because it helps me to improve my writing skill and help me to reduce stress and I can note something I want to.

✓ I love writing diaries because it helps me improve my writing skills, helps me reduce stress, and allows me to note down things I want to.

'Diary' should be plural 'diaries' to match the general activity. 'Skill' should be plural 'skills' as writing involves multiple skills. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and parallelism.

× Yes, I think it will change because I grow up and everything in my brain is also change, so something I write is also change too.

✓ Yes, I think it will change because I grow up and everything in my brain also changes, so something I write also changes too.

The verb 'change' should be in present tense third person singular 'changes' to agree with singular subjects 'everything' and 'something'.

× I prefer handwriting because it help me to keep memory more flexibility and I can keep it longer.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it helps me keep my memory more flexible and I can keep it longer.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Memory' should be possessive 'my memory'. 'More flexibility' should be 'more flexible' as an adjective describing 'memory'.

× I think typing is also good but it not suitable for me.

✓ I think typing is also good but it is not suitable for me.

The verb 'is' is missing before 'not suitable' to form the correct present tense negative sentence.

× I keep their response a week.

✓ I keep them once a week.

'Their response' is incorrect here; the pronoun 'them' refers to the diaries. Also, 'once a week' is the correct expression for frequency.

× Umm, I think writing every day.

✓ Umm, I think about writing every day.

The original sentence lacks a verb to complete the thought. Adding 'about' clarifies the meaning.

× I uh, don't have much idea, so I just keep it once a week.

✓ I uh, don't have many ideas, so I just keep it once a week.

'Much idea' is incorrect; 'many ideas' is the correct plural form for countable noun 'ideas'.

× Uh, I think other method I use to record my life is taking picture.

✓ Uh, I think another method I use to record my life is taking pictures.

'Other method' should be 'another method' for singular countable noun. 'Picture' should be plural 'pictures'.

× It uh, allows me to uh, imagine more easily.

✓ It allows me to imagine more easily.

Removing unnecessary fillers 'uh' improves clarity and fluency.