写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cavabınız təbii və aydın olsa da, bəzi qrammatik səhvlər və ifadə tərzi təkmilləşdirilə bilər. Məsələn, 'without boring' ifadəsi düzgün deyil, 'without getting bored' daha uyğundur. Həmçinin, 'prefer writing than reading' əvəzinə 'prefer writing to reading' demək daha doğrudur. Cümlələrinizi daha qısa və dəqiq etmək üçün təkrarlardan qaçın.

範例: Yes, I write quite often because I enjoy expressing my thoughts. I find writing more engaging than reading, which sometimes makes me feel tired.

建議: Cümlələrinizdə fikirlərinizi daha aydın və strukturlaşdırılmış şəkildə ifadə etməyə çalışın. Məsələn, fikirlərinizi bölmək və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə etmək cavabınızı daha anlaşılan edər. Həmçinin, 'like this' kimi qeyri-müəyyən ifadələrdən qaçın.

範例: I enjoy writing about my daily life and personal feelings. When I feel sad or tired, I write about what troubles me and what could make me feel better.

建議: Cavabınızda fikirlərinizi daha aydın və məntiqli şəkildə ifadə etməyə diqqət edin. 'Feel more better' kimi ifadələr qrammatik səhvdir, 'feel better' demək kifayətdir. Cümlələrinizi daha qısa və konkret edin və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.

範例: I don't believe that what we write changes over time. Writing helps me relax and feel better than before.

建議: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və təkrarlamalar var. Məsələn, 'when because' ifadəsi səhvdir. Cümlələrinizi daha sadə və aydın qurmağa çalışın. Həmçinin, fikirlərinizi tam ifadə edin və cümlələri tamamlayın.

範例: I prefer handwriting because typing often causes keyboard problems, which makes me feel stressed and impatient.

建議: Cavabınızda fikirlər qarışıq və anlaşılmazdır. Daha sadə və aydın cümlələr qurun. Məsələn, 'Tried directly' ifadəsi mənasızdır. Cavabınızı konkretləşdirin və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.

範例: I keep a diary occasionally, usually when I have free time and feel stressed. Writing helps me relax and feel relieved.

建議: Cavabınızda çoxlu 'uh' kimi dayaq sözlər var və cümlələr tamamlanmamışdır. Daha təbii və axıcı danışmağa çalışın. Fikirlərinizi tam ifadə edin və lazımsız sözlərdən qaçının.

範例: Besides writing, I enjoy taking photos and videos to record my life. It's a hobby of mine, and I often capture moments when I visit new places.

× I don't like reading a lot because it makes me tired than writing.

✓ I don't like reading a lot because it makes me more tired than writing.

The sentence compares 'reading' and 'writing' in terms of causing tiredness. The comparative form 'more tired' is needed before 'than' to correctly express the comparison.

× I prefer writing than reading.

✓ I prefer writing to reading.

The verb 'prefer' is followed by 'to' when comparing two things, not 'than'. So, 'prefer writing to reading' is correct.

× I like writing about myself, my daily routine, or maybe when I feel sad or tired I start writing something, maybe what makes me sad and what will make me happier like this.

✓ I like writing about myself, my daily routine, or maybe when I feel sad or tired, I start writing something, maybe about what makes me sad and what will make me happier like this.

The phrase 'maybe what makes me sad' is unclear and missing a preposition. Adding 'about' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× Actually, I don't think like this.

✓ Actually, I don't think like that.

The phrase 'like this' is incorrect in this context; 'like that' is the proper expression to refer to a previously mentioned idea or situation.

× I don't think the things we write would change because when we do something, it doesn't change.

✓ I don't think the things we write will change because when we do something, it doesn't change.

The modal verb 'would' is incorrectly used here; 'will' is appropriate to express future certainty in this context.

× Just be writing something because we feel relaxing and feel more better than today.

✓ Just write something because we feel relaxed and feel better than today.

'Be writing' is incorrect here; the imperative 'write' fits better. Also, 'relaxing' (present participle) should be 'relaxed' (adjective), and 'more better' is redundant; 'better' alone is correct.

× Even I say that I don't like typing very much.

✓ Even I say that I don't like typing very much.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× It makes me impatient because when because we can face like this keyboard problems, it makes me stress.

✓ It makes me impatient because we can face keyboard problems like this, and it makes me stressed.

The sentence has redundant 'because' and awkward phrasing. Removing the extra 'because' and reordering improves clarity. Also, 'makes me stress' should be 'makes me stressed'.

× But when I do handwriting.

✓ But I prefer handwriting.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb or object. Completing the sentence clarifies the meaning.

× I keep that as when I'm free and I feel stress because I don't have very much free time.

✓ I keep it when I'm free and feel stressed because I don't have much free time.

'Keep that as when' is incorrect; 'keep it when' is correct. Also, 'feel stress' should be 'feel stressed'.

× I don't have very much free time.

✓ I don't have much free time.

'Very much' is unnecessary here; 'much' alone is sufficient and more natural.

× Tried directly and I just use it three times because it allows me to feel relaxed and relieved.

✓ I tried directly and I just use it three times because it allows me to feel relaxed and relieved.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' at the beginning, which is necessary for correct sentence structure.

× Yeah, one of the methods is that I like to take a photo or take videos very much.

✓ Yeah, one of the methods is that I like to take photos or videos very much.

'A photo' is singular, but 'videos' is plural; for parallelism, both should be plural or singular. Using 'photos or videos' is correct.

× When I go somewhere I, uh, I have to record my, uh, plans, my uh.

✓ When I go somewhere, I have to record my plans.

The sentence is incomplete and contains filler words. Removing fillers and completing the sentence improves clarity.