写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有點重複，且語法不夠自然。建議你可以用更簡潔且流暢的句子來表達，例如避免重複說「I like to writing」和「I like to write」，並且注意動詞形式。

範例: Yes, I write a lot because it helps me relax and organize my emotions. Also, I enjoy sharing my thoughts with friends through writing.

建議: 回答中語法錯誤較多，且句子結構不清晰。建議你先直接回答問題，再用連接詞補充細節，並注意時態和語法的正確性。

範例: I like to write in my diary because it helps me organize my emotions and feelings from the day. Also, I can share interesting events with my friends, and we often discuss funny things that happened.

建議: 你的回答有點重複且語法不正確。建議你用更清楚的句子表達想法，並使用連接詞使句子更流暢。

範例: Yes, I believe what I write changes over time because my emotions and thoughts evolve, so my notes reflect those changes.

建議: 回答中有語法錯誤和重複。建議你簡潔表達偏好，並用連接詞連接原因，使句子更自然。

範例: I prefer typing because my handwriting is poor. Also, typing is more convenient for me to express my feelings and share them online.

建議: 句子結構不夠清晰且有語法錯誤。建議你用簡潔的句子說明頻率和原因，並使用連接詞使語意連貫。

範例: I usually keep my diary about once a week because I need time to reflect on my feelings and thoughts before writing them down.

建議: 回答中有語法錯誤和重複，且句子不流暢。建議你用正確的時態和簡潔的句子描述，並用連接詞連接細節。

範例: Sometimes, I record videos to document my life. For example, during my last trip to Vietnam, I made a vlog to capture my experiences, which I found very interesting.

× So I like to writing.

✓ So I like writing.

The verb 'like' is followed by either the base form or the gerund (-ing form) without 'to'. 'Like to writing' is incorrect; it should be 'like writing'. In English (Taiwan): 動詞 'like' 後面接動名詞時，不需要 'to'，所以應該說 'like writing' 而非 'like to writing'。

× I can share to my friend through the words.

✓ I can share with my friend through words.

The verb 'share' is usually followed by 'with' when indicating the person you share something with. Also, 'through the words' is better as 'through words' without 'the'. In English (Taiwan): 動詞 'share' 後面接人時，應使用介系詞 'with'，且 'through words' 不需加定冠詞 'the'。

× Why I like to write my diary?

✓ Why do I like to write my diary?

In questions, the auxiliary 'do' is needed for present simple tense questions. The correct structure is 'Why do I like...?' not 'Why I like...?'. In English (Taiwan): 疑問句中，現在簡單式需要助動詞 'do'，所以應為 'Why do I like...'。

× I can share to my friends that my friends will come with me and we can discuss about The funny thing that we I happened today.

✓ I can share with my friends, and my friends will come with me and we can discuss the funny things that happened today.

Again, 'share' should be followed by 'with'. 'Discuss' does not need 'about'. Also, 'The funny thing that we I happened today' is ungrammatical; it should be 'the funny things that happened today'. In English (Taiwan): 'share' 後面接人用 'with'，'discuss' 不用加 'about'，且句子結構需調整使語意清楚。

× I like to writing.

✓ I like writing.

Same as previous explanation: 'like' is followed by gerund without 'to'. In English (Taiwan): 'like' 後面接動名詞時，不用 'to'。

× I think that the things I write would change because I think that it through my emotion and feelings that my thoughts would change.

✓ I think that the things I write will change because through my emotions and feelings, my thoughts change.

'Would' implies conditional or past; here, 'will' is better for future prediction. Also, sentence structure is awkward and needs rephrasing. In English (Taiwan): 'would' 用於假設或過去，預測未來用 'will'，句子結構需更清楚。

× my emotion and feelings

✓ my emotions and feelings

'Emotion' is usually plural when referring to multiple feelings; 'emotions' fits better with 'feelings'. In English (Taiwan): 'emotion' 複數形 'emotions' 與 'feelings' 搭配較自然。

× my thought notes would change.

✓ my thoughts and notes would change.

'Thought notes' is unclear; likely intended 'thoughts and notes'. Also, plural 'thoughts' is more natural. In English (Taiwan): 'thought notes' 不自然，應分開為 'thoughts and notes'。

× my handwriting are really bad

✓ my handwriting is really bad

'Handwriting' is uncountable singular noun, so verb should be 'is' not 'are'. In English (Taiwan): 'handwriting' 是不可數名詞，動詞用單數 'is'。

× I like to type my feelings and the thing I want to write on the Internet.

✓ I like to type my feelings and the things I want to write on the Internet.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match context. Also, 'on the Internet' is correct. In English (Taiwan): 'thing' 應用複數 'things'，因為指多項內容。

× I think that I would keep my Diaries about once a week

✓ I think that I would keep my diary about once a week

'Diary' is usually singular when referring to a personal journal; 'Diaries' is plural and less common here. In English (Taiwan): 'diary' 單數較常用於個人日記。

× there is a little time that I could think that what I want to write

✓ there is little time for me to think about what I want to write

'Little' without 'a' means 'not much'. Also, 'think about' is the correct phrase. In English (Taiwan): 'little' 用於否定意義時不加 'a'，且 'think about' 是正確用法。

× I take a video took a video for the vlog that record my life through the trip.

✓ I took a video for the vlog that records my life during the trip.

Past tense 'took' is correct. 'Record' should be 'records' to agree with 'vlog'. 'During the trip' is better than 'through the trip'. In English (Taiwan): 動詞時態要一致，vlog 為單數，動詞用 'records'，介系詞用 'during'。