写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and has some grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, correct the exam name to 'IELTS' and avoid redundancy like 'improves my handwriting as well increases my vocabulary too'.

範例: Yes, I write quite often because it helps improve both my handwriting and vocabulary. For instance, as I am preparing for the IELTS exam, I write two to three pages daily to enhance my writing speed and vocabulary.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you like writing your daily schedule. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid confusing phrases.

範例: I like to write my daily work schedule because it helps me stay organized and confident. Every night, I review my tasks and note down any mistakes I made during the day to improve myself.

建議: Your answer is somewhat vague and lacks clarity. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid incomplete sentences.

範例: Yes, I think what I write can change over time because my interests and priorities evolve. Therefore, I often write notes to remember important things, but I update them as situations change.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain why you prefer handwriting and give a relevant example.

範例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me improve my writing skills and vocabulary. For example, while preparing for the IELTS exam, I practice writing by hand to enhance my speed and accuracy.

建議: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and slightly unclear. Try to make your response more concise and structured. Use linking words to contrast traditional diaries with modern technology clearly.

範例: I rarely keep a diary nowadays because technology has advanced. Most people, including me, prefer using phones to quickly note down things, which is more convenient than writing on paper.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your sentences and provide a clear example. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid repetition.

範例: Besides writing, I use my phone to take photos and videos to record special moments. For example, during trips, I capture videos so I can relive those memories anytime.

× Yes, I like writing a lot because it improves my handwriting as well increases my vocabulary too.

✓ Yes, I like writing a lot because it improves my handwriting as well as increases my vocabulary too.

The phrase 'as well increases' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'as well as increases' to properly connect two verbs in parallel. This is a common error in verb + -ing form usage where conjunctions are involved.

× For example, recently I am preparing myself for eyelets exam and I should write 2 to 3 pages every day to increase my vocabulary and to increase my writing speed.

✓ For example, recently I have been preparing myself for the IELTS exam and I should write 2 to 3 pages every day to increase my vocabulary and writing speed.

The present continuous 'I am preparing' is less appropriate here; present perfect continuous 'I have been preparing' better expresses an action started in the past and continuing now. Also, 'eyelets' is a misspelling of 'IELTS', and 'the' is needed before 'IELTS exam' as it is a specific exam.

× I think writing is the best example to improve yourself.

✓ I think writing is the best way to improve yourself.

The phrase 'best example to improve yourself' is awkward. 'Best way to improve yourself' is more natural and correct. This is an issue with pronoun and phrase usage.

× It makes me give more power or more confidence.

✓ It gives me more power and more confidence.

The conjunction 'or' is incorrect here because the sentence intends to add both 'power' and 'confidence'. 'And' is the correct conjunction to connect two positive attributes.

× What should I date full day?

✓ What should I do the whole day?

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Date' is wrongly used instead of 'do', and 'full day' should be 'the whole day'. This is a sentence structure error.

× And I have noticed my mistakes but I did wrong.

✓ And I have noticed my mistakes but I did wrong things.

The phrase 'I did wrong' is incomplete and awkward. Adding 'things' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'did wrong' is past tense and correctly used here.

× So every day I make before sleeping 2 to 3 pages notes.

✓ So every day before sleeping, I make 2 to 3 pages of notes.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'Before sleeping' should come before the main verb phrase, and 'pages notes' should be 'pages of notes'. This is a conjunction and sentence structure issue.

× Whatever I like, sometimes it changes.

✓ Whatever I like sometimes changes.

The subject 'Whatever I like' is singular, so the verb should be 'changes' without 'it'. The original sentence has an unnecessary pronoun causing subject-verb disagreement.

× So I usually write the things which I forget and I make a note so that I can remember whenever it is required.

✓ So I usually write the things I forget and make a note so that I can remember them whenever required.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect referring to plural 'things'. 'Them' is the correct pronoun. Also, 'which' can be omitted for smoother sentence.

× So sometime it get changed according to the condition or according to the substances.

✓ So sometimes it gets changed according to the condition or the circumstances.

The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb should be 'gets' not 'get'. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes', and 'substances' is likely a wrong word choice; 'circumstances' fits better.

× So I think it is.

✓ So I think so.

The phrase 'I think it is' is incomplete and unclear. 'I think so' is the correct expression to agree or confirm.

× I only prefer handwriting when I am writing because I think when you write with your hand you it can improve your writing skill and enhance your vocabulary.

✓ I only prefer handwriting when I am writing because I think when you write with your hand, it can improve your writing skills and enhance your vocabulary.

The phrase 'you it can improve' is incorrect. The pronoun 'you' should be removed or replaced with 'it' as the subject. Also, 'writing skill' should be plural 'writing skills'.

× For example, nowadays I am preparing myself for islets exam and for that I am improving or enhancing myself for the exam for writing more and.

✓ For example, nowadays I am preparing myself for the IELTS exam and for that, I am improving and enhancing my writing skills for the exam.

'Islets' is a misspelling of 'IELTS'. The sentence is incomplete and awkward; 'improving or enhancing myself for the exam for writing more and' is unclear. Corrected to a complete and clear sentence.

× Nowadays I believe nobody is using Diaries because science is so advanced and everybody have phone in their pockets and all the time whenever we have to note it down however it's on paper or what we use phone only that makes us writing more easily and remember in our pocket.

✓ Nowadays I believe nobody is using diaries because science is so advanced and everybody has a phone in their pockets and all the time whenever we have to note something down, whether it's on paper or we use the phone only, that makes writing easier and helps us remember in our pocket.

'Diaries' should be lowercase unless a proper noun. 'Everybody have' should be 'everybody has' for subject-verb agreement. The sentence is long and confusing; corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Everybody have phone in their pockets and it's very easy to record beautiful memories so that we can see the lifetime.

✓ Everybody has a phone in their pockets and it's very easy to record beautiful memories so that we can see them for a lifetime.

'Everybody have' should be 'everybody has' for subject-verb agreement. 'See the lifetime' is incorrect; 'see them for a lifetime' is correct.