写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, chính xác và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc từ sai. Ngoài ra, hãy cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh những phần không liên quan hoặc khó hiểu.

範例: No, I don't write a lot because I prefer typing. Typing is faster and easier when I make schedules or timetables. Also, my handwriting is not very neat, so I avoid writing by hand.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và rõ ràng hơn, tránh những từ không đúng hoặc khó hiểu như 'Trawling Diary' hay 'To the List'. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và cung cấp lý do cụ thể cho sở thích viết của bạn, sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I like writing diaries and to-do lists because they help me organize my thoughts and tasks. Also, I enjoy blogging and writing long captions when I want to share important ideas.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ. Bạn cũng nên mở rộng câu trả lời với ví dụ hoặc giải thích cụ thể hơn.

範例: I don't think my writing topics will change much because I usually write about my personal experiences, such as in my diary or letters. Writing helps me express my thoughts and feelings clearly.

建議: Bạn trả lời khá rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên chú ý chính tả và từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ: 'channeling' nên là 'planning' hoặc 'scheduling'). Hãy sử dụng thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: It depends on the situation. For quick notes like planning or making timetables, I prefer typing because it's faster and easier to organize. However, for personal writing such as letters or diaries, I enjoy using paper and pen.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt với cấu trúc rõ ràng và sử dụng liên từ hợp lý. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên chú ý viết hoa đúng cách (ví dụ: 'diaries' không cần viết hoa) và tránh lặp từ. Bạn có thể thêm ví dụ cụ thể để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

範例: I keep a diary almost every day because writing helps me express my thoughts and feelings. Also, it allows me to reflect on my daily experiences and capture beautiful moments in my life.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'a affordable' nên là 'an affordable'. Ngoài ra, hãy mở rộng câu trả lời với thêm chi tiết hoặc ví dụ cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời phong phú và tự nhiên hơn.

範例: I have an affordable digital camera from the Sunny brand. I use it to take beautiful photos, like the street from my home to school and activities with my friends.

× Well, not really because I prefer to typing because it's either and faster to make a schedule or a timetable.

✓ Well, not really because I prefer typing since it's easier and faster to make a schedule or a timetable.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the gerund form without 'to'. Also, 'either' is incorrect here; 'easier' fits the context better.

× Well, not really because I prefer to typing because it's either and faster to make a schedule or a timetable.

✓ Well, not really because I prefer typing since it's easier and faster to make a schedule or a timetable.

The word 'either' is incorrectly used; the correct comparative adjective is 'easier'. Also, 'and' should connect two adjectives properly.

× And moreover, my writing is not beautiful, not easy to look. So that's a religion, key religion.

✓ Moreover, my writing is not beautiful and not easy to look at. So that's a personal reason.

The phrase 'not easy to look' is incomplete; it should be 'not easy to look at'. The phrase 'that's a religion, key religion' is unclear and likely a mishearing; 'personal reason' fits better.

× I enjoyed writing about something like Trawling Diary or To the List.

✓ I enjoy writing about things like a travel diary or to-do list.

The verb tense should be present 'enjoy' to match the context. 'Trawling Diary' is likely 'travel diary', and 'To the List' should be 'to-do list'. Also, 'about something like' is better as 'about things like'.

× Moreover, I do some blogging and post long captions when I have something important to share to say.

✓ Moreover, I do some blogging and post long captions when I have something important to say or share.

The phrase 'share to say' is incorrect; it should be 'say or share' to express both actions properly.

× Not really, because I guess almost my writings are about my personal experience, like diary or my letters.

✓ Not really, because I guess most of my writings are about my personal experiences, like diaries or my letters.

'Almost my writings' should be 'most of my writings'. 'Experience' should be plural 'experiences' to match 'writings'. 'Diary' should be plural 'diaries'.

× So it's a way for me to express my thoughts and feelings, so I think.

✓ So it's a way for me to express my thoughts and feelings, I think.

The phrase 'so I think' is redundant; 'I think' alone suffices.

× Well it depends. For a quick notes like channeling or timetable I prefer typing because it's easier and faster to organize.

✓ Well, it depends. For quick notes like scheduling or timetables, I prefer typing because it's easier and faster to organize.

'A quick notes' is incorrect; 'quick notes' is plural without 'a'. 'Channeling' is likely 'scheduling'. 'Timetable' should be plural 'timetables' to match 'notes'.

× But for personal writing like letters or Diaries, I enjoy using paper and pen.

✓ But for personal writing like letters or diaries, I enjoy using paper and pen.

'Diaries' should not be capitalized.

× I think it's pretty much every day. Writing is a good way for me to express my thoughts and feelings.

✓ I think it's pretty much every day. Writing is a good way for me to express my thoughts and feelings.

No grammatical error in this sentence.

× Moreover, I can reflect my experiences in my life through writing on paper.

✓ Moreover, I can reflect on my experiences in my life through writing on paper.

The verb 'reflect' requires the preposition 'on' to be correct.

× Therefore, keeping Diaries is a good way for me to capture my beautiful moments in daily life.

✓ Therefore, keeping diaries is a good way for me to capture my beautiful moments in daily life.

'Diaries' should not be capitalized.

× I have a affordable digital camera from Sunny brand.

✓ I have an affordable digital camera from the Sunny brand.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound. Also, 'Sunny brand' needs the definite article 'the'.

× I use it to photograph beautiful pictures such as my street from my home to my school or some activities with my friends.

✓ I use it to take beautiful pictures, such as my street from my home to my school or some activities with my friends.

The verb 'photograph' is less commonly used as a verb here; 'take pictures' is more natural. Also, 'beautiful pictures' is correct.