写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I write quite often because it helps me memorize and understand information better than just listening. Once I write something down, I tend to remember it for a long time.

建議: Try to make your answer more structured and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about the types of topics you write about.

範例: I like to write about academic topics or any ideas that come to my mind because writing helps me remember them and explore the topics more deeply.

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically.

範例: Yes, the things I write can change over time, especially if there are new findings or updates. Writing allows me to improve and refine my ideas accordingly.

建議: Your answer is clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more natural. Use linking words to explain your preference.

範例: I prefer handwriting over typing because I have practiced writing with pen and paper since childhood, so it feels easier and more convenient for me.

建議: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to be more concise and clear, and use linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: I don't keep a daily diary, but I do take notes of important tasks and ideas that come to my mind.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and can be more fluent. Avoid unnecessary phrases and use linking words to make your response coherent.

範例: I haven't thought about this before, but if I were to record my life, I would prefer to do it on my phone for convenience.

× I tend to write a lot generally than most of other people.

✓ I tend to write more than most other people generally.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'generally than' which is not a proper comparative structure. The correct comparative form is 'more than' to compare quantities. Also, 'most of other people' should be 'most other people' for natural phrasing.

× Usually writing helps me memorize and understand stuff easily than just listening.

✓ Usually, writing helps me memorize and understand stuff more easily than just listening.

The sentence lacks the comparative adverb 'more' before 'easily' to correctly compare the two actions. Also, a comma after 'Usually' improves clarity.

× Once I write something down, it helps me keep that specific term remembered for a long time.

✓ Once I write something down, it helps me remember that specific term for a long time.

The phrase 'keep that specific term remembered' is awkward and incorrect. The verb 'remember' should be used directly to express retaining information.

× Any academic topics or something that I'm studying or anything that comes up in my mind or any ideas that just swings by my mind, I just write them down.

✓ Any academic topics or something that I'm studying or anything that comes up in my mind or any ideas that just swing by my mind, I just write them down.

The verb 'swings' does not agree with the plural subject 'ideas'. It should be 'swing' to match the plural subject.

× It helps me remember them them and also look deep into that topic.

✓ It helps me remember them and also look deeply into that topic.

The word 'them' is repeated unnecessarily. Also, 'look deep' should be 'look deeply' to use the correct adverb form modifying the verb.

× Well, nothing is constant when things I write down may change or depending on the recent findings or the updated version of that topic.

✓ Well, nothing is constant; the things I write down may change depending on recent findings or the updated version of that topic.

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks proper connectors. Adding a semicolon and removing 'or' before 'depending' clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× Writing down also helps me to improvise things or improvise the idea work more on to it so it becomes more refined.

✓ Writing down also helps me to improve things or improve the idea by working more on it so it becomes more refined.

The verb 'improvise' is incorrectly used; the correct verb is 'improve'. Also, 'work more on to it' is incorrect; it should be 'working more on it'.

× That way it can be changed.

✓ That way, it can be changed.

A comma after 'That way' improves readability and clarity.

× So it's very easier and convenient for me to do handwriting than typing.

✓ So it's much easier and more convenient for me to do handwriting than typing.

'Very easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is a comparative adjective and should be modified by 'much' or 'far'. Also, 'more convenient' is the correct comparative form.

× Well, I don't usually keep a log of my activities on daily basis.

✓ Well, I don't usually keep a log of my activities on a daily basis.

The phrase 'on daily basis' is missing the article 'a' which is necessary before 'daily basis'.

× I only keep notes of the important thing I need to do or I have I have done or the ideas that pass by my mind.

✓ I only keep notes of the important things I need to do or have done or the ideas that pass by my mind.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match the plural context. Also, the repeated phrase 'I have' is an error and should be removed.

× So I normally don't take keep Diaries that.

✓ So I normally don't keep diaries like that.

The phrase 'take keep Diaries that' is incorrect and unclear. The corrected sentence uses 'keep diaries like that' for clarity and correct structure.

× That's an interesting question, I never thought about that like that previously.

✓ That's an interesting question; I have never thought about it like that previously.

The original sentence is a comma splice. Using a semicolon and correcting 'that' to 'it' improves grammar and clarity.

× I actually don't keep a log of my life, but if I have to find a way that I can keep a log or record, I would much rather record it on phone.

✓ I actually don't keep a log of my life, but if I had to find a way to keep a log or record, I would much rather record it on my phone.

The conditional 'if I have to' should be 'if I had to' for hypothetical situations. Also, 'on phone' should be 'on my phone' to use the correct possessive pronoun.