写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. For example, say 'It is my way of expressing feelings' instead of 'express feelings'. Also, keep sentences concise and avoid redundancy.

範例: Yes, I write quite a lot. It helps me express my feelings, and it's also part of my job since I need to write emails regularly. Additionally, I send text messages to my family and friends to stay connected.

建議: Provide clearer and more structured answers by using linking words and avoiding vague phrases like 'a lot of things'. Also, try to avoid repeating words such as 'actually'.

範例: I enjoy writing in my diary because it allows me to express my personal feelings and emotions. Moreover, I like to write about changes in society and culture, as this inspires me to be creative and explore new ideas.

建議: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Avoid incomplete or unclear sentences. For example, explain your opinion clearly and use correct verb forms.

範例: I think what I write might change over time because society and culture are constantly evolving. New technologies emerge, which influence my interests and the topics I choose to write about.

建議: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to compare both methods clearly and provide specific reasons.

範例: I prefer both typing and handwriting for different reasons. Typing is convenient because it allows me to easily edit my work, while handwriting helps me express my feelings more personally and creatively.

× It is my way of express feelings.

✓ It is my way of expressing feelings.

After the phrase 'way of', the verb should be in the '-ing' form to indicate the manner of doing something. Therefore, 'express' should be corrected to 'expressing'. This is a common structure in English where 'way of' is followed by a gerund.

× And I also text messages to my family and friends to stay connected with them.

✓ And I also text messages to my family and friends to stay connected with them.

The sentence is missing a verb to correctly express the action. The phrase 'I also text messages' is incorrect because 'text' is a verb and 'messages' is a noun. The correct form should be 'I also send text messages' or 'I also text my family and friends'. However, since the instruction is to only correct mistakes that meet the grammar problem types listed, and this is more of a sentence structure issue, no correction is made here.

× There are new technology comes and my personal preference is not because I am related and connected more.

✓ There is new technology coming and my personal preference is not because I am related and connected more.

'Technology' is an uncountable noun and should be treated as singular. Therefore, 'There are new technology' is incorrect; it should be 'There is new technology'. Also, 'comes' should be changed to 'coming' to fit the sentence structure. This correction addresses the singular and plural issue and verb form.

× There are new technology comes and my personal preference is not because I am related and connected more.

✓ There is new technology coming and my personal preference is not because I am related and connected more.

The verb 'comes' should be in the '-ing' form 'coming' to correctly follow 'There is new technology'. This is because the phrase describes an ongoing or recent occurrence, and the present participle is appropriate here.

× typing is very easy way as we can make changes and edit this uh.

✓ Typing is a very easy way as we can make changes and edit this uh.

The phrase 'very easy way' requires an article 'a' before 'very' because 'way' is a singular countable noun. Omitting the article is a common error with singular countable nouns.

× Also handwriting is more efficient way to express feelings which are more connected.

✓ Also handwriting is a more efficient way to express feelings which are more connected.

Similar to the previous correction, 'more efficient way' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it because 'way' is a singular countable noun. This article is necessary for grammatical correctness.