写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid redundancy and use linking words to make your response more natural and effective. For example, instead of repeating 'handwriting' multiple times, you can combine ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I write quite often because I want to improve my handwriting. Therefore, I make it a habit to write two pages daily to make my writing clearer and more beautiful.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and structure. Try to start with a clear topic sentence and then add specific supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid repeating the same idea and improve sentence structure for better coherence.

範例: I like to copy texts from books I find in the library or at college because this practice helps me improve my handwriting. Additionally, I do this to prepare for handwriting competitions.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and logically, using linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid vague phrases and focus on specific benefits.

範例: Yes, the way I write will change as my handwriting improves. This will be especially helpful during exams because I can write faster and more clearly under time pressure.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and better structured. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary.

範例: I prefer typing because it allows me to easily spot and correct grammar mistakes. Moreover, I don't have to worry about messy handwriting, and computers help me check my work quickly.

× I always write 2 pages in a day so that I could improve my handwriting.

✓ I always write 2 pages a day so that I can improve my handwriting.

The phrase 'in a day' is less natural than 'a day' when expressing frequency. Also, 'could' should be 'can' to express ability in the present tense.

× I just picked a random book from the library or from my college book.

✓ I just pick a random book from the library or from my college books.

The verb tense should be present to match the context. 'College book' should be plural 'college books' to indicate multiple books.

× I just improve my handwriting clear so I can participate in handwriting competition.

✓ I just improve my handwriting to be clear so I can participate in handwriting competitions.

The adjective 'clear' needs to be connected properly with 'improve' using 'to be'. Also, 'handwriting competition' should be plural to indicate general participation.

× Yes, of course the thing I write would change because it will improve my handwriting with more than clear.

✓ Yes, of course the things I write would change because it will improve my handwriting to be clearer.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context. 'With more than clear' is incorrect; it should be 'to be clearer' to express improvement.

× It will be your rush and so it will help me to write fast and clear.

✓ It will be your rush, so it will help me to write fast and clearly.

The phrase 'your rush' is unclear and likely incorrect. Possibly intended 'in a rush'. Also, 'clear' should be the adverb 'clearly' to modify 'write'.

× I prefer typing because when we type on the computer or laptop, it will be easy for us to recognize our grammar mistakes and we don't need to worry about the handwriting a bad handwriting.

✓ I prefer typing because when we type on the computer or laptop, it is easy for us to recognize our grammar mistakes and we don't need to worry about bad handwriting.

'It will be easy' should be 'it is easy' for present general truth. 'The handwriting a bad handwriting' is incorrect; it should be 'bad handwriting' without article.

× So yeah, we can check easily and quickly through the help of computer.

✓ So yeah, we can check easily and quickly with the help of a computer.

'Through the help of computer' is incorrect; it should be 'with the help of a computer' to use correct preposition and article.