写作— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you write a lot?
考生
Yes, I write a lot because my major is Chinese literature and language so my major asked me to read a lot and do some writing to pass the exams.
考官
What do you like to write? Why?
考生
I like to write some Diaries. Keeping Diaries can record my life and capture some special moments in my life. And also I think writing a diary is a way for me to relax myself.
考官
Do you think the things you write would change?
考生
Yes, I believe things will change in the future because with the development of the economy and technology, some new topics or themes will emerge and it may change. Things are right.
考官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
考生
I prefer handwriting when I do some writing because handwriting is very convenient for me to write something and also handwriting can help me to. Prevent some mistakes.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答较为直接，但句子结构较为简单，且有些重复。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复“my major”。
範例: Yes, I write frequently because my major in Chinese literature requires extensive reading and writing to succeed in exams.
What do you like to write? Why?
分數: 80.0建議: 回答内容较丰富，但句子连接不够流畅，且“some Diaries”表达不自然。建议使用连词使表达更连贯，并注意名词单复数。
範例: I enjoy writing diaries because they help me record special moments and also serve as a way to relax and reflect on my day.
Do you think the things you write would change?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“Things are right”不合适。建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点。
範例: Yes, I think my writing will change as new topics emerge due to economic and technological developments.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答中断句不完整，表达不够流畅。建议使用连贯的句子，并具体说明为什么手写更方便和如何减少错误。
範例: I prefer handwriting because it allows me to write quickly and helps me avoid mistakes by focusing more on each word.
文法
× I like to write some Diaries.
✓ I like to write some diaries.
“Diaries”是可数名词，复数形式首字母不需要大写，除非是专有名词。这里应使用小写“diaries”。
× Keeping Diaries can record my life and capture some special moments in my life.
✓ Keeping diaries can help me record my life and capture some special moments in my life.
“Keeping diaries”本身不能直接作为主语完成“record”动作，需加“help me”表示帮助完成动作，语义更通顺。
× And also I think writing a diary is a way for me to relax myself.
✓ And also I think writing a diary is a way for me to relax.
“relax”是及物动词，这里不需要反身代词“myself”，直接用“relax”即可。
× Yes, I believe things will change in the future because with the development of the economy and technology, some new topics or themes will emerge and it may change. Things are right.
✓ Yes, I believe things will change in the future because with the development of the economy and technology, some new topics or themes will emerge and things may change accordingly.
原句“and it may change. Things are right.”结构混乱，语义不清。应将“it”明确指代“things”，并将“Things are right”改为更合适的表达。
× I prefer handwriting when I do some writing because handwriting is very convenient for me to write something and also handwriting can help me to. Prevent some mistakes.
✓ I prefer handwriting when I do some writing because handwriting is very convenient for me to write something and also handwriting can help me prevent some mistakes.
“help me to. Prevent”中“to”后不应有句号，且“help”后接动词时“to”可省略，且“Prevent”首字母不应大写。
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