写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有语法错误，如“we have to finish writing”应为“we had to finish writing”，“I used to writing”应为“I used to write”。建议注意时态一致和动词形式的正确使用。此外，回答可以更简洁自然，避免重复。

範例: I don't write much now, but when I was in high school, we had to write a lot for tests. I used to write many messages back then.

建議: 回答中存在语法和表达不自然的问题，如“something what I experienced”应为“something I have experienced”。句子结构较复杂且不够连贯，建议使用简单句并合理使用连接词，使表达更清晰。

範例: I like to write about my experiences because they are familiar and meaningful to me. Writing helps me remember these moments in the future.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，如“the writing will regarding the something I experienced”不符合英语习惯。建议简化句子结构，注意词汇搭配和时态使用，使表达更自然。

範例: Yes, my writing changes as I grow older. I write about different experiences now, and when I was younger, my writing was simpler.

建議: 回答表达基本清楚，但有重复和语法问题，如“I can't, I can't find it right away”重复。建议避免重复，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: I prefer typing on a computer or phone because it is more convenient. If I write on paper, I often forget where I put it and can't find it quickly.

× Actually, I don't write a lot now, but when I was a high school student we have to finish writing in every test.

✓ Actually, I don't write a lot now, but when I was a high school student we had to finish writing in every test.

这里描述的是过去的情况，应该使用过去时态'had'，而不是现在时态'have'。

× So I used to writing so many messages when I at high school.

✓ So I used to write so many messages when I was at high school.

'used to'后面应接动词原形，不能接动名词'writing'。另外，'when I at high school'缺少动词，应改为'when I was at high school'。

× when I at high school

✓ when I was at high school

主语'I'后缺少动词，完整表达应为'when I was at high school'。

× I like to write something what I experienced because the experience is more familiar and it's more meaningful that I want to write and one day I maybe forgot and it can remind me to think of it.

✓ I like to write about something I experienced because the experience is more familiar and it's more meaningful that I want to write, and one day I might forget, so it can remind me to think of it.

'something what I experienced'应改为'something I experienced'，去掉多余的'what'。'maybe forgot'时态和语态不对，应改为'might forget'。句子结构复杂，适当添加逗号使句意更清晰。

× My writing will change as I get older and I learn more about knowledge and I experience a lot the writing will regarding the something I experienced.

✓ My writing will change as I get older and I learn more knowledge and experience a lot; the writing will be about the things I experienced.

'regarding the something'表达不正确，应改为'be about the things'。'learn more about knowledge'中'about'可省略，'experience a lot'后应连接分号或句号分开句子。

× the writing will regarding the something I experienced.

✓ the writing will be about the things I experienced.

'something'是不可数或单数，前面加了定冠词'the'不合适，应改为复数'things'。

× But when I was younger maybe the things were more simple.

✓ But when I was younger, maybe the things were simpler.

'more simple'比较级应使用'simpler'，而不是'more simple'。

× maybe the things were more simple.

✓ maybe the things were simpler.

形容词'simple'的比较级应为'simpler'，而不是'more simple'。

× I prefer typing and actually computer typing or phone typing is more convenient because if I write something on paper I will forget where I put it and I can't, I can't find it right away.

✓ I prefer typing, and actually computer typing or phone typing is more convenient because if I write something on paper, I will forget where I put it and I can't find it right away.

句中缺少逗号，导致句子结构不清晰。'I can't, I can't find it right away'重复，应合并为'I can't find it right away'。