写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中时态混用，且表达不够自然。建议统一时态，避免重复表达，并且句子结构更简洁。

範例: Yes, I write almost every day. When I was in primary school, my Chinese teacher often assigned a lot of writing homework.

建議: 回答时态不一致，表达不够清晰。建议用现在时描述现在的习惯，并且说明喜欢写作的原因。

範例: I enjoy writing novels with my friends, a habit I started when I was about 11 years old and still keep today because it allows me to express my creativity.

建議: 表达不够连贯，语法错误较多。建议使用连词连接句子，表达更流畅，并且注意语法准确。

範例: I think my writing style has changed as I have matured, but sometimes I still write in a childlike way depending on my mood.

建議: 语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使用更地道的表达方式。

範例: I prefer typing because most people use their phones nowadays. Typing feels more relaxed and is more convenient and practical than handwriting.

× I write a lot, especially when I was in primary school, our Chinese teacher asked us to finish lot of homework about writing.

✓ I wrote a lot, especially when I was in primary school, our Chinese teacher asked us to finish a lot of homework about writing.

这里描述的是过去的情况，应该使用过去时态“wrote”而不是现在时态“write”。另外，“lot of”前面缺少冠词“a”，应为“a lot of”。

× I write a lot, especially when I was in primary school, our Chinese teacher asked us to finish lot of homework about writing.

✓ I wrote a lot, especially when I was in primary school, our Chinese teacher asked us to finish a lot of homework about writing.

“lot of”前面需要加冠词“a”，正确表达为“a lot of”，表示大量的意思。

× What do you like to write? Why?

✓ What do you like to write? Why?

该句无明显介词错误，保持原句。

× I really like to write when I was about 11 years old.

✓ I really liked to write when I was about 11 years old.

描述过去的喜好，动词“like”应使用过去时“liked”。

× I often write the novels with my friends.

✓ I often wrote novels with my friends.

“write the novels”中“the”不合适，应该去掉冠词，且描述过去习惯用过去时“wrote”。

× Until now, I keep the right habits almost every day.

✓ Until now, I have kept the right habits almost every day.

“Until now”表示从过去持续到现在，应该用现在完成时“have kept”。

× Normally my writing style should change a lot because I have become mature, but sometimes I still think I'm a child.

✓ Normally my writing style has changed a lot because I have become mature, but sometimes I still think I'm a child.

“should change”表达不准确，描述事实变化应使用现在完成时“has changed”。

× I'm a kid. I really retain the childlike writing style and this many depend on my mood.

✓ I'm a kid. I really retain the childlike writing style and this may depend on my mood.

“many”用错，应为“may”，表示可能性。

× I prefer typing when I writing because nowadays most of people usually to use the iPhone to type.

✓ I prefer typing when I am writing because nowadays most people usually use the iPhone to type.

“when I writing”缺少助动词“am”；“most of people”应为“most people”；“usually to use”应为“usually use”。

× Typing is not only made me feel relaxed but also it was really convenient and practical than writing.

✓ Typing not only makes me feel relaxed but is also really more convenient and practical than writing.

“is not only made me”时态和结构错误，应为“not only makes me”；“it was”时态不一致，应为“is”；比较级缺少“more”。