写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, nên thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

範例: Yes, I enjoy writing quite a lot because it helps me relax. When I was younger, I used to write short stories that many people read online.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để giải thích lý do bạn thích viết tiểu thuyết.

範例: I like to write novels because they allow me to express my feelings clearly. Also, novels have many readers, so I can connect with others through my stories.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn không trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, giải thích quan điểm của mình và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I'm not sure if my writing will change, but I usually keep my stories on social media, and they have stayed the same since I first posted them.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn rất khó hiểu và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và giải thích lý do bạn thích đánh máy hơn viết tay.

範例: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient. Also, I can easily share my writing on social media when I type.

× I was a little outer when I was young and I have some stories which so many, which have so many reader.

✓ I was a little outer when I was young and I have some stories which have so many readers.

The word 'reader' should be plural 'readers' because it refers to multiple people reading the stories. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I'd like to write a novel because I think novel can't solve my feeling so clearly and novel have so many reader.

✓ I'd like to write a novel because I think a novel can't express my feelings so clearly and novels have so many readers.

The word 'novel' should be preceded by an article 'a' when singular. Also, 'novel' should be plural 'novels' when referring generally. 'Reader' should be plural 'readers'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× When I write novel I can connect with other people and it makes me feel.

✓ When I write a novel, I can connect with other people and it makes me feel good.

'Novel' should have the article 'a' when singular. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'good' completes the thought. This is a singular and plural issue and sentence structure issue.

× Not sure, I buy so many stories and it never changed in my eyes.

✓ Not sure, I have bought so many stories and they have never changed in my eyes.

The verb 'buy' should be in present perfect 'have bought' to indicate past actions with relevance to present. 'It' should be 'they' to agree with plural 'stories'. 'Changed' should be in present perfect 'have changed'. This is a present tense issue and singular and plural issue.

× I keep it in my social media app and now it's still like the beginning.

✓ I keep them in my social media app and now they're still like at the beginning.

'It' should be 'them' to agree with plural 'stories'. 'It's' should be 'they're' for plural. Adding 'at' before 'the beginning' is more natural. This is a present tense and singular and plural issue.

× I like all of them waiting to make me really stressed faster, but when I writing it's more convenient than handle writing and I can post it in social media app more easily.

✓ I like all of them, although they sometimes make me really stressed faster, but when I write, it's more convenient than handwriting and I can post it on social media apps more easily.

The sentence has incorrect conjunction use and sentence structure. 'Waiting' should be 'although they sometimes make me stressed'. 'When I writing' should be 'when I write'. 'Handle writing' should be 'handwriting'. 'In social media app' should be 'on social media apps'. This is an incorrect conjunction use and sentence structure issue.