写作— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you write a lot?
考生
No, I don't write too much because I'm, I'm not good at in writing and also, umm, I'll, I think I can't express my feeling, but umm, I have the imagination of, of a lot of things like like, umm, I can get a feeling from the.
考官
What do you like to write? Why?
考生
Umm, I, I like to write some diary umm umm, it always contains my uh, the whole day. I umm, I the experience experience of my whole day and the feeling I I can get from.
考官
Do you think the things you write would change?
考生
Umm, no, because I, I always, uh, record the, the fact that I have throughout the day, umm, like the diary, umm, uh, so I, I, I all, I, I always umm, not change the writing after I write it down. I wrote down.
考官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
考生
Umm, I prefer typing umm, because umm, it is quite convenient for me to use keyboard. Umm, I uh, actually, umm, I'm, I'm quite good at typing umm, in the keyboard because umm, I always use computer to chatting.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
分數: 55.0建議: 你的回答中有较多的重复和犹豫词（如“umm”，“I, I”），影响了表达的流畅性。建议减少重复，使用更自然的表达方式，并且直接回答问题，例如说明写作的频率和原因。
範例: No, I don't write very often because I find it difficult to express my feelings clearly in writing, even though I have many ideas in my mind.
What do you like to write? Why?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够完整。建议使用完整句子，清晰描述写日记的内容和原因，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
範例: I like to write diaries because they help me record my daily experiences and the feelings I have throughout the day.
Do you think the things you write would change?
分數: 50.0建議: 回答中重复和犹豫较多，句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地表达观点，说明为什么不会修改已写内容，并使用连接词增强逻辑性。
範例: No, I don't usually change what I write because I want to keep an accurate record of my daily experiences as they happened.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答中有过多的填充词和重复，影响表达清晰度。建议减少“umm”等犹豫词，使用更自然流畅的句子，并具体说明喜欢打字的原因。
範例: I prefer typing because it's faster and more convenient for me, especially since I often use the computer to chat with friends.
文法
× I'm not good at in writing
✓ I'm not good at writing
介词短语中不需要同时使用两个介词“at”和“in”，正确用法是“good at writing”，表示擅长写作。
× I think I can't express my feeling
✓ I think I can't express my feelings
“feeling”应使用复数形式“feelings”，因为这里指的是多种感受。
× I have the imagination of, of a lot of things like like, umm, I can get a feeling from the.
✓ I have the imagination of a lot of things, and I can get a feeling from them.
原句结构混乱，缺少完整表达，需补充连词和宾语，使句子完整通顺。
× I like to write some diary
✓ I like to write a diary
“diary”是可数名词，通常用单数形式表示一本日记，不能用“some”修饰。
× it always contains my uh, the whole day
✓ It always contains my experiences of the whole day
原句缺少主语和宾语的明确表达，需补充“experiences”使句意完整。
× I the experience experience of my whole day
✓ I write about the experiences of my whole day
“experience”应使用复数形式“experiences”，且句子缺少谓语动词，需补充。
× the feeling I I can get from
✓ the feelings I can get from it
缺少宾语“it”，且“feeling”应为复数“feelings”，使表达完整。
× I wrote down
✓ I write down
根据上下文，描述习惯性动作应使用一般现在时“write down”，而非过去时“wrote down”。
× I always use computer to chatting
✓ I always use the computer to chat
“use”后应接宾语“the computer”，且动词“chat”应为不带-ing的原形，表示目的。
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