写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然流畅，存在语法错误和重复词汇，且表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，直接表达观点。

範例: No, I don't write a lot because I feel I lack the skills needed to be a good writer. Also, I don't enjoy writing articles on paper.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并具体说明写报告的原因。

範例: I like to write reports based on research because they help me organize information clearly. Moreover, reports allow me to share my views and skills with others.

建議: 表达不清晰且语法错误较多，建议简化句子，明确表达写作内容会随着成长和能力提升而改变。

範例: Yes, I believe my writing will change as I grow older. It will reflect my improved skills and more mature viewpoints.

建議: 回答中有重复和不完整句子，表达不够连贯。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词，并避免重复。

範例: I prefer typing because most people have laptops now, making it more convenient than handwriting. Also, typed documents are easier to share with others.

× I think I currently lack the skills and ability which the right would be a writer, be a good writer needs.

✓ I think I currently lack the skills and ability that a good writer needs.

句中使用了错误的动词形式“would be”，应使用关系代词“that”引导定语从句，且动词用一般现在时“needs”，因为描述的是普遍事实。

× So I think I'm all the talents to to to write a lot and also I don't like to write down some articles in the paper.

✓ So I think I don't have all the talents to write a lot, and also I don't like to write articles in the paper.

“I'm all the talents”结构错误，应为“I don't have all the talents”，且“articles”应为复数形式，表示泛指。

× I like to I like to write some reports based on researches because I think report writing reports can help me to organize my information clearly and also writing reports can show others my researchers views and my skills to other people.

✓ I like to write some reports based on research because I think writing reports can help me organize my information clearly, and also writing reports can show others my research views and my skills.

“based on researches”中“research”作为不可数名词不加复数；“report writing reports”重复且冗余，应简化为“writing reports”；“my researchers views”应为“my research views”。

× Yes, I think the things I write would change because it can tells others I'm grown up and also can use treat my skills and ability and capability have improved.

✓ Yes, I think the things I write would change because it can tell others I've grown up and also can show that my skills, ability, and capability have improved.

“can tells”中动词应为原形“tell”；“I'm grown up”应为完成时态“I've grown up”；“can use treat”表达不清，应改为“can show that”。

× For example, it can shows my article have the more vigorous viewpoints so.

✓ For example, it can show that my articles have more vigorous viewpoints.

“can shows”中动词应为原形“show”；“article”应为复数“articles”；“the more vigorous viewpoints”中“the”多余，应去掉。

× I prefer typing when I am writing because nowadays there are more and more people have their own laptops or computers, so it's more convenient than before to tap to tap the lighters in the computers.

✓ I prefer typing when I am writing because nowadays more and more people have their own laptops or computers, so it's more convenient than before to type on the keyboards of the computers.

“there are more and more people have”结构错误，应为“more and more people have”；“tap to tap the lighters”表达错误，应为“type on the keyboards”。

× So I think it's more convenient than handwriting. Also you can share the.

✓ So I think it's more convenient than handwriting. Also, you can share the documents easily.

句子不完整，缺少宾语，补充“documents”使句子完整；“Also”后应加逗号。