写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有點冗長且語法不夠自然。建議你直接回答問題，並用簡潔的句子說明原因，避免重複。

範例: No, I don't write a lot because I usually use my phone to take notes or remember things.

建議: 回答內容豐富，但語法和用詞有些錯誤。建議注意冠詞和複數形式，並使用連接詞使句子更流暢。

範例: I like to write down quotes from books because they inspire me and help me remember important ideas. Writing them also allows me to reflect on their meaning and apply them in my daily life.

建議: 回答不夠清楚且語法錯誤較多。建議用更簡單明確的句子表達觀點，並注意主詞和動詞的一致性。

範例: Yes, I think what we write can change because they are based on people's perspectives, not absolute truths.

建議: 回答中有語法錯誤且表達不清楚。建議使用正確的詞彙和句型，並清楚說明原因。

範例: I prefer handwriting because it shows my personality through my writing style, and it feels warmer and more personal.

× No, I think I don't write a lot because nowadays there are diversity ways to note or remember something.

✓ No, I think I don't write a lot because nowadays there are diverse ways to note or remember something.

The word 'diversity' is a noun and cannot be used to describe 'ways'. The correct adjective is 'diverse' to describe the variety of ways. Use 'diverse' to modify plural countable nouns like 'ways'.

× So I sometimes write and sometimes just typing on my cell phone.

✓ So I sometimes write and sometimes just type on my cell phone.

The verb 'typing' is incorrectly used here without an auxiliary verb. The correct form is the base verb 'type' to parallel 'write'. Also, 'just typing' is a gerund phrase that does not fit the sentence structure. Use 'just type' to maintain parallelism.

× I like to write down many for quotes that I find in the books because they inspired me and helped me remember an important ideas.

✓ I like to write down many quotes that I find in books because they inspire me and help me remember important ideas.

The phrase 'many for quotes' is incorrect; 'for' should be removed. 'Books' should be plural without 'the' unless referring to specific books. 'An important ideas' is incorrect because 'ideas' is plural; remove 'an'. Also, verb tense should be present to match the general statement.

× because they inspired me and helped me remember an important ideas.

✓ because they inspire me and help me remember important ideas.

The verbs 'inspired' and 'helped' are in past tense but the sentence refers to a general truth, so present tense 'inspire' and 'help' should be used. Also, 'an important ideas' is incorrect; 'important ideas' is plural and does not need 'an'.

× I like to write down many for quotes that I find in the books because they inspired me and helped me remember an important ideas.

✓ I like to write down many quotes that I find in books because they inspire me and help me remember important ideas.

Remove 'for' which is unnecessary. Use 'books' without 'the' for general reference. 'An important ideas' is incorrect because 'ideas' is plural; remove 'an'.

× I think the sentence or the quote also come from the human beings and it is just the perspectives, not just 100% truth.

✓ I think the sentence or the quote also comes from human beings and it is just perspectives, not 100% truth.

The subject 'sentence or quote' is singular, so the verb should be 'comes' not 'come'. 'The human beings' is incorrect; 'human beings' without 'the' is better for general reference. 'The perspectives' should be 'perspectives' without 'the' for general meaning.

× I think I prefer handwriting because you can have your own personality by the way you write the street you take, so I think it is more warmly.

✓ I think I prefer handwriting because you can have your own personality in the way you write the street you take, so I think it is warmer.

The phrase 'by the way you write' should be 'in the way you write' to express manner. 'More warmly' is an adverb but the sentence needs an adjective 'warmer' to describe 'it'.