写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to respond directly and clearly, using simple and correct sentences. Avoid redundancy and filler words. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add a reason or example using linking words.

範例: I don't write much because I find it boring and frustrating. Instead, I prefer typing on my cell phone since it's faster and more convenient for me.

建議: Your answer has good content but is a bit unclear and repetitive. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler words. Also, try to be more specific and concise in your explanation.

範例: I usually write my schedule because it's important to keep track of my daily tasks. Also, in emergencies, I write down important phone numbers either on my phone or on paper.

建議: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly and clearly, using correct verb tenses and sentence structures. Use linking words to explain your ideas logically.

範例: I don't think the things I write usually change. However, once my teacher asked me to correct some information I had written, which was difficult because I had worked hard on it.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and contains many errors. Try to use simple, correct sentences and avoid repetition. Use linking words to compare your preferences clearly.

範例: I prefer typing because I find it more interesting and comfortable, especially for long writing tasks. On the other hand, handwriting feels boring and frustrating to me.

× Suddenly not, it is not my cup of tea.

✓ Not really, it is not my cup of tea.

The phrase 'Suddenly not' is incorrect in this context. The speaker likely meant to say 'Not really' to express a negative response. Modal verbs or expressions like 'not really' are used to soften or negate statements appropriately.

× Whenever someone had told me to write anything, I just avoided it because I really feel bored or frustrating while writing a things on paper regularly.

✓ Whenever someone told me to write anything, I just avoided it because I really felt bored or frustrated while writing things on paper regularly.

The past perfect 'had told' is unnecessary here; simple past 'told' is correct for repeated past actions. Also, 'feel' should be in past tense 'felt' to match the past context. 'Frustrating' is an adjective describing something that causes frustration; the correct form here is 'frustrated' to describe the speaker's feeling. 'A things' is incorrect; 'things' is plural and does not need an article.

× So despite of it, I prefer to use my uh cell phone where I prefer to do a ride, uh, riding on buyer typing rather than by pen via.

✓ So despite it, I prefer to use my cell phone where I prefer to do typing rather than by pen.

'Despite' is used without 'of' in this context. The phrase 'do a ride, uh, riding on buyer typing' is unclear and incorrect; likely the speaker meant 'do typing'. 'By pen via' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'by pen' or 'with a pen'.

× Most of the times I prefer to write my, uh, schedules, which is quite significant for me because if I forget in my whole timetable will be all disturbed and tomorrow over.

✓ Most of the time I prefer to write my schedules, which are quite significant for me because if I forget, my whole timetable will be disturbed and my day will be over.

'Most of the times' should be 'Most of the time' as 'time' is uncountable here. 'Schedules' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. The phrase 'if I forget in my whole timetable will be all disturbed and tomorrow over' is awkward; it should be 'if I forget, my whole timetable will be disturbed and my day will be over' for clarity and correctness.

× Whenever there is some something, any type of emergency that we have to write the number of anything that I prefer to write, uh, on it via cell phone or by on a paper.

✓ Whenever there is some kind of emergency and we have to write down a number or anything, I prefer to write it on my cell phone or on paper.

The phrase 'some something' is incorrect; 'some kind of' is appropriate. 'Write the number of anything' is unclear; 'write down a number or anything' is better. 'On it via cell phone or by on a paper' is incorrect; correct prepositions are 'on my cell phone' and 'on paper'.

× No, I didn't think so that whatever I have right in my life that it will be good change.

✓ No, I don't think that whatever I have right now in my life will change for the better.

The question is about future change, so present tense 'don't think' is appropriate. 'Have right' should be 'have right now' for clarity. 'It will be good change' is awkward; 'will change for the better' is clearer.

× But I vividly remember that one of the incidents I have written the information about a person but suddenly my teacher had told me to change such a information related to it.

✓ But I vividly remember one incident where I wrote information about a person, but suddenly my teacher told me to change that information related to it.

'I have written' should be simple past 'I wrote' to match the past narrative. 'Had told' is past perfect but simple past 'told' is sufficient here. 'Such a information' is incorrect; 'information' is uncountable and does not take 'a'.

× And I suffer a lot because I did a lot of hard work to write such a things and rewrite again it.

✓ And I suffered a lot because I did a lot of hard work to write such things and rewrite them again.

'Suffer' should be past tense 'suffered' to match the past context. 'Such a things' is incorrect; 'things' is plural and does not take 'a'. 'Rewrite again it' is awkward; 'rewrite them again' is correct.

× It was really tough for me.

✓ It was really tough for me.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× Well, most of most of the times I prefer to do typing because it was really interesting task and if I have to be right wire typing or for a long time I can do it peacefully and calmly.

✓ Well, most of the time I prefer typing because it is a really interesting task and if I have to write by typing for a long time, I can do it peacefully and calmly.

'Most of the times' should be 'most of the time'. 'Do typing' is better as 'prefer typing'. 'It was' should be 'it is' to match present tense preference. 'Have to be right wire typing' is incorrect; likely meant 'have to write by typing'.

× But someone had told me to write on a paper with the help of pen.

✓ But someone told me to write on paper with the help of a pen.

'Had told' is past perfect but simple past 'told' is sufficient. 'On a paper' should be 'on paper' as 'paper' is uncountable here. 'With the help of pen' should be 'with the help of a pen'.

× That is really frustrating to me because it's not my cup of tea.

✓ That is really frustrating for me because it's not my cup of tea.

'Frustrating to me' is less common; 'frustrating for me' is the correct collocation.

× I really felt boring.

✓ I really felt bored.

'Boring' describes something that causes boredom; 'bored' describes the feeling of the person. The speaker is describing their feeling, so 'bored' is correct.