写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够自然流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并直接回答问题。

範例: No, I don't write a lot because I prefer typing on the computer rather than using a pen.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，且句子冗长。建议使用清晰的句子结构，明确表达写日记的原因。

範例: I like to write diaries because I can record my daily experiences and look back on them in the future.

建議: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，逻辑不够清晰。建议使用连贯的句子，明确说明写作内容会随时间变化的原因。

範例: Yes, I think what I write will change because every day is different, so my diary entries will reflect those changes.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不连贯。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达偏好及原因，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: I prefer typing because handwriting can make my hand tired. Typing on the computer is more convenient and efficient for me.

× Actually no, because I don't really like to use the pen and I prefer to type on the computer.

✓ Actually no, because I don't really like using a pen and I prefer to type on the computer.

动词后面接动名词形式（-ing）表示喜欢或不喜欢某个动作，'like to use'虽然不错误，但在表达习惯时更常用'like using'。建议用动名词形式以符合习惯表达。

× But I but I don't like to write some article too, so yes.

✓ But I don't like to write articles either, so yes.

'article'是可数名词，表示多篇文章时应使用复数形式'articles'，且'write some article'搭配不当，应改为'write articles'。

× Hmm, if I need to choose a type of writing, I I think maybe the Diaries because I will just record everything happens today and I I want to I want me to sing in the future.

✓ Hmm, if I need to choose a type of writing, I think maybe diaries because I will just record everything that happens today and I want to read them in the future.

'Diaries'不需要大写，且'diaries'是复数形式。'everything happens today'缺少关系代词'that'。'I want me to sing'语义不清，应为'I want to read them'。

× Hmm of course yes because I said I would like to write some Diaries about everything.

✓ Hmm, of course yes, because I said I would like to write some diaries about everything.

'Diaries'不需要大写，且前面不需要定冠词'the'，应为'some diaries'。

× Today happens, every day is a different day so its might be changed but I prefer just to have a normal day and know something special.

✓ Today happens, every day is a different day so it might change but I prefer just to have a normal day and nothing special.

'its'应为'it'，'might be changed'被动语态不合适，应为主动语态'might change'。'know something special'语义不清，应为'nothing special'。

× I prefer typing because handwriting.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting.

'prefer'后面比较两个动作时应使用'prefer A to B'结构，缺少介词'to'。

× I need to use a pen and my hand might feel very tired.

✓ I need to use a pen and my hand might feel very tired.

此句无语法错误，符合语法规则。

× But if I type on my computer I will feel more convenient and I have a faster, I have a better efficiency on it.

✓ But if I type on my computer, I will feel more comfortable and I am faster; I have better efficiency when typing.

'feel more convenient'错误，'convenient'是形容物的，形容人的感觉应为'comfortable'。'I have a faster'不完整，应补充名词。'efficiency'前不加冠词，且表达更自然为'have better efficiency'。