写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且注意动词时态和单复数形式。

範例: Yes, I write a lot of documents for my manager and advisor because they often assign me projects. I usually prepare applications and other related materials for these projects.

建議: 回答中表达有些重复且不够流畅，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且注意冠词和时态的正确使用。

範例: If I don't have to write official documents, I enjoy writing novels. I especially like long novels, so I plan to spend a lot of time writing a new one for myself.

建議: 回答不够清晰，存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，建议简化句子并明确表达观点。

範例: I don't think my writing style will change because I prefer focusing on specific topics rather than many different projects.

建議: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，建议简化表达，注意比较级的正确使用，并保持句子流畅。

範例: I definitely prefer typing on the computer because it is more convenient and faster than writing by hand.

× I write many materials about my manager, my advisor, because my advisor usually give me some projects, so I must rest the application for it and some other document, document, document about it.

✓ I write many materials about my manager and my advisor, because my advisor usually gives me some projects, so I must prepare the application for them and some other documents about them.

这里的'materials'和'documents'是复数形式，必须与动词和代词保持一致。'advisor usually give'中的've'应改为's'，因为主语是第三人称单数。'rest the application'应为'prepare the application'，但根据题目只纠正语法错误。

× my advisor usually give me some projects

✓ my advisor usually gives me some projects

主语'advisor'是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加's'，即'gives'。

× some other document, document, document about it.

✓ some other documents about them.

'document'应为复数形式'documents'，且代词应与复数保持一致，使用'them'。

× I like to write the novels.

✓ I like to write novels.

'novels'前不需要定冠词'the'，且复数形式直接使用。

× I think I will spend a lot of time to write a new novel for myself.

✓ I think I will spend a lot of time writing a new novel for myself.

动词'spend'后应接动名词形式，故'to write'应改为'writing'。

× I afraid that I my sense that I write wouldn't change because I'm a Foxman.

✓ I am afraid that my sense of what I write wouldn't change because I'm a Foxman.

缺少系动词'am'，且句子结构混乱，调整为正确表达。

× I enjoy Fox in something rather than various projects, so I won't write.

✓ I enjoy foxes in something rather than various projects, so I won't write.

'Fox'应为复数形式'foxes'，以符合语境。

× I absolutely like like to type on the computer rather than use a paper to write, because it is much more convenient than use the pen to write and the type is more quick, more quicker than.

✓ I absolutely like to type on the computer rather than use paper to write, because it is much more convenient than using a pen to write and typing is quicker.

'use a paper'应为'use paper'，'than use the pen'应为'than using a pen'，'more quick, more quicker'重复且错误，改为'quicker'。