写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be more natural and clear. Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Try to give a direct answer first, then add specific reasons with linking words. For example, say how writing improves your knowledge and gives you pleasure, but avoid repeating the same idea.

範例: Yes, I write quite often because it helps me improve my knowledge. Moreover, writing keeps me engaged and gives me great pleasure by relaxing my mind.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to organize your ideas better and use linking words to connect them. Also, be specific about why you like writing poems, articles, or letters. Avoid grammatical errors and finish your sentences properly.

範例: I like to write poems, articles, and letters because they help me improve my knowledge. Additionally, writing allows me to connect with my friends and family, and it gives me a great sense of satisfaction and relaxation.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to express your ideas more smoothly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to connect your points about why you want to keep writing and how it benefits you.

範例: I would not like to change my writing habit because it is a good way to express my knowledge, thoughts, and feelings. Moreover, writing helps me enjoy and share my ideas with others.

建議: Your answer has some unclear words and grammatical mistakes. Please clarify your preference clearly and explain why you prefer handwriting over typing. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid redundancy.

範例: I always prefer handwriting to typing because it gives me satisfaction and helps me express my knowledge and thoughts more clearly. Furthermore, writing by hand allows me to share my feelings and ideas, which makes me feel relaxed and happy.

× Yes, definitely I write a lot.

✓ Yes, definitely I write a lot.

No correction needed here as the present tense is correctly used to express a habitual action.

× When I write that time it improve my knowledge and also engage a work.

✓ When I write, it improves my knowledge and also engages me in work.

The original sentence lacks proper subject-verb agreement and clarity. 'Improve' and 'engage' should be in third person singular form 'improves' and 'engages' to agree with 'it'. Also, 'engage a work' is incorrect; it should be 'engages me in work' to convey the intended meaning.

× And sometimes I feel that when I write I write a lot and at that time it gives me a lot of pleasure for my mind.

✓ Sometimes I feel that when I write a lot, it gives me a lot of pleasure and relaxes my mind.

The sentence is repetitive and awkward. 'I write I write a lot' is redundant. Also, 'pleasure for my mind' is better expressed as 'pleasure and relaxes my mind' for clarity and naturalness.

× I like to write a poem, article and also later which improve my knowledge and sometimes engage my the my friends as well as my family members and sometimes it gives me a great sense of satisfaction and relax my mind.

✓ I like to write poems, articles, and letters which improve my knowledge and sometimes engage my friends as well as my family members. Sometimes it gives me a great sense of satisfaction and relaxes my mind.

The nouns 'poem', 'article', and 'later' should be pluralized to 'poems', 'articles', and 'letters' to indicate general activities. 'Later' is likely a typo for 'letter'. Also, 'engage my the my friends' is incorrect; it should be 'engage my friends'. The verb 'relax' should be 'relaxes' to agree with 'it'.

× Sometime writing is very useful way for me to express my.

✓ Sometimes writing is a very useful way for me to express myself.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. The sentence is incomplete; 'express my' should be 'express myself' to correctly use the reflexive pronoun.

× I would say I, I, I would not like to change this habit because it is a very a good habit for me.

✓ I would say I would not like to change this habit because it is a very good habit for me.

Repetition of 'I' is unnecessary and should be removed. 'A very a good habit' has an extra 'a' which should be deleted.

× Actually it, it is the great way to express my knowledge and express my thoughts.

✓ Actually, it is a great way to express my knowledge and thoughts.

Repetition of 'it' is unnecessary. 'The great way' should be 'a great way' as it is one of many ways. 'Express my thoughts' can be combined for conciseness.

× Also share my feelings and it is very useful way for me share my feelings and ideas so I can enjoy.

✓ Also, it helps me share my feelings and ideas, so I can enjoy it.

The sentence is fragmented and repetitive. Adding 'it helps me' clarifies the subject. 'Very useful way for me share' should be 'helps me share' for grammatical correctness.

× I always prefer apne to handwriting rather than typing because writing handwriting gives me a satisfaction and also share my express my knowledge and sometimes share my thoughts clearly.

✓ I always prefer handwriting to typing because handwriting gives me satisfaction and also helps me express my knowledge and sometimes share my thoughts clearly.

'Apne' is incorrect and should be removed. 'Prefer apne to handwriting' is wrong; the correct phrase is 'prefer handwriting to typing'. 'Gives me a satisfaction' should be 'gives me satisfaction' without 'a'. 'Share my express my knowledge' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me express my knowledge'.

× Also writing help me to share my feelings idea which makes me feel relaxed and happy.

✓ Also, writing helps me share my feelings and ideas, which makes me feel relaxed and happy.

'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'writing'. 'Feelings idea' should be pluralized and separated as 'feelings and ideas' for clarity.