写作— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you write a lot?
考生
Yes, I always write because I have right class at school and I always write the e-mail to my friends. I think it's very interesting and special. I enjoy the writing.
考官
What do you like to write? Why?
考生
I like write e-mail and stories because I always write the e-mail with my friend, it can improve our friendship and I always write the story. I think write story can improve my imagination.
考官
Do you think the things you write would change?
考生
Yes, definitely I believe I right would be change over time because I have reached her knowledge with my grow up and I think I will have new ideas, new style so.
考官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
考生
I pray for handwriting because I think handwriting is more comfortable and natural and if I handwriting can express my thinking more feel so I like.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
分數: 60.0建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“right class”应为“writing class”，且表达不够自然。建议注意语法准确性，使用更地道的表达方式，并避免重复。
範例: Yes, I write quite often because I attend a writing class at school. Besides, I frequently send emails to my friends, which I find both interesting and enjoyable.
What do you like to write? Why?
分數: 55.0建議: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构不完整，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议加强语法练习，使用连接词使表达更流畅，并具体说明写作的原因。
範例: I enjoy writing emails and stories. Writing emails helps me stay connected with my friends, which strengthens our friendship. Also, writing stories allows me to enhance my imagination.
Do you think the things you write would change?
分數: 50.0建議: 回答中语法和表达错误较多，句子不完整且难以理解。建议学习正确的时态和表达方式，清晰表达观点，并使用连贯的句子。
範例: Yes, I definitely believe that my writing will change over time because as I grow and gain more knowledge, I will develop new ideas and styles.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
分數: 45.0建議: 回答中词汇使用错误，如“pray”应为“prefer”，句子结构混乱，表达不清。建议加强词汇准确性和句子结构练习，使表达更自然流畅。
範例: I prefer handwriting because it feels more comfortable and natural to me. When I write by hand, I can express my thoughts more freely.
文法
× I enjoy the writing.
✓ I enjoy writing.
动词enjoy后应接动名词形式，不能加定冠词the。这里应使用writing而非the writing。
× I like write e-mail and stories because I always write the e-mail with my friend, it can improve our friendship and I always write the story.
✓ I like writing e-mails and stories because I always write e-mails with my friends; it can improve our friendship and I always write stories.
动词like后应接动名词writing。email应复数形式e-mails，friend应复数friends。句子中story也应为复数stories。
× I think write story can improve my imagination.
✓ I think writing stories can improve my imagination.
动词think后接动名词writing，story应为复数stories。
× I right would be change over time because I have reached her knowledge with my grow up and I think I will have new ideas, new style so.
✓ I think my writing would change over time because I have gained more knowledge as I grow up, and I think I will have new ideas and new styles.
此句中right应为writing，动词change前应加助动词would，句子结构需调整以符合语法。grow up应为动词短语，需用as引导。
× I pray for handwriting because I think handwriting is more comfortable and natural and if I handwriting can express my thinking more feel so I like.
✓ I prefer handwriting because I think handwriting is more comfortable and natural, and if I write by hand, I can express my thoughts more clearly, so I like it.
动词pray用法错误，应为prefer。句子中缺少动词write，表达更清晰。表达思想应用express my thoughts。
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