写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but it has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. For example, avoid repeating the same idea and use correct verb forms. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I write a lot because I am preparing for my IS exam next month. Therefore, I practice writing tasks regularly and take notes carefully so that I can find information easily. I really enjoy doing this.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and has some unclear parts. Try to avoid repeating the same information and clarify your points. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, check your grammar and sentence structure for better clarity.

範例: I like to write essays because I am preparing for my IELTS exam next month. Writing tests require a lot of practice, especially managing time. For example, I need to write about 250 words in 40 minutes, so I practice regularly to improve my speed and accuracy.

建議: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical mistakes and some unclear expressions. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer sentences. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide more specific details.

範例: Yes, I usually write based on my own thoughts, but others may have different opinions. For example, I am currently writing an essay about my favorite place, Dhaka city, while other people might prefer different cities.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains some confusing phrases and grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

範例: I mostly prefer handwriting because my exams are written on paper with a pen. Therefore, I practice writing by hand to improve my skills.

× Yes, I write a lot because I am preparing for my IS exam in next month.

✓ Yes, I write a lot because I am preparing for my IS exam next month.

The phrase 'in next month' is incorrect; the preposition 'in' is not used with 'next month'. The correct form is simply 'next month'. This is a common preposition usage error in English (Bangladesh).

× That's why I have to write down a few things and noted it very well so that I can found easily.

✓ That's why I have to write down a few things and note them very well so that I can find them easily.

The verb 'noted' is incorrectly used here; after 'have to', the base form 'note' should be used. Also, 'found' is the past tense of 'find', but the present tense 'find' is needed here. Additionally, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with 'a few things'. This is a verb form and pronoun usage error common in English (Bangladesh).

× I am preparing for my IELTS exam which is which will be held in next month.

✓ I am preparing for my IELTS exam which will be held next month.

The phrase 'which is which will be held' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'in next month' should be 'next month'. This is a sentence structure and preposition usage error common in English (Bangladesh).

× Writing tests need a lot of practice especially in the timing section I have to cover 22 and few 250 words in 40 minutes.

✓ Writing tests need a lot of practice, especially in the timing section where I have to write about 250 words in 40 minutes.

The phrase '22 and few 250 words' is unclear and incorrect. It seems the student meant 'about 250 words'. Also, a comma and conjunction are needed to separate clauses properly. This is a quantifier and sentence structure error common in English (Bangladesh).

× Yes, actually I write the things which is based on my only own thoughts.

✓ Yes, actually I write things which are based only on my own thoughts.

The subject 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'my only own thoughts' is awkward; 'only on my own thoughts' is better. This is a subject-verb agreement and adjective order error common in English (Bangladesh).

× The things can be changed in other thoughts.

✓ The things can change with other thoughts.

The phrase 'can be changed in other thoughts' is awkward and incorrect. 'Can change with other thoughts' is clearer and grammatically correct. This is a conjunction and verb usage error common in English (Bangladesh).

× For example, now I'm working on a essay which is based on my favorite location Dhaka city and other people like other cities.

✓ For example, now I'm working on an essay about my favorite location, Dhaka city, while other people like other cities.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound. Also, the sentence needs commas for clarity and better conjunction usage. This is an article and sentence structure error common in English (Bangladesh).

× I mostly prefer handwriting rather than writing because I have to attend a written exam in my eyes which is based on paper and pen, so I have to practice with my own hand, so I prefer handwriting.

✓ I mostly prefer handwriting rather than typing because I have to attend a written exam on paper with pen, so I have to practice with my own hand; therefore, I prefer handwriting.

The phrase 'writing' should be 'typing' to contrast with handwriting. 'In my eyes' is incorrect; 'on paper' is correct. 'Based on paper and pen' is awkward; 'on paper with pen' is better. Also, 'practice with my own hand' is better than 'practice with my own hand'. This is a preposition and word choice error common in English (Bangladesh).