写作— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you write a lot?
考生
Yes, definitely. I usually write English essays on a daily basis to improve my writing skills and expand my vocabulary. In addition, I find that writing both on digital devices and on paper helps me stay focused on my tasks.
考官
What do you like to write? Why?
考生
I have a big passion for writing an accounting article because my leisure at university is accounting auditing. I find it particularly interesting because it helps me expand my horizon about my industry.
考官
Do you think the things you write would change?
考生
Yes, definitely. For instance, the change in the accounting regulations has changed over time and I reckon that in the foreseeable future it will continuously be improved and upgraded following to the development of our country. So everything that I write at the moment will definitely be changed.
考官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
考生
I prefer both typing and handwriting depending on different situations. Typing helps me save time and energy because it is fast, especially when I need to write long passage. On the other hand, handwriting helps me stay focused on my thought and remember information better, for instance when I take notes.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
分數: 85.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn đã khá tự nhiên và hiệu quả, tuy nhiên bạn có thể tránh lặp từ "writing" quá nhiều và sử dụng các từ đồng nghĩa hoặc cấu trúc khác để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.
範例: Yes, definitely. I usually compose English essays daily to enhance my writing skills and broaden my vocabulary. Moreover, I find that using both digital devices and traditional paper helps me maintain concentration on my tasks.
What do you like to write? Why?
分數: 70.0建議: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "my leisure at university is accounting auditing". Hãy nói rõ sở thích và lý do một cách mạch lạc hơn.
範例: I am passionate about writing articles on accounting because I enjoy studying auditing at university. It interests me as it broadens my understanding of the industry.
Do you think the things you write would change?
分數: 75.0建議: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý đến cách dùng giới từ như "following to" nên là "following" hoặc "according to".
範例: Yes, definitely. For example, accounting regulations have evolved over time, and I believe they will continue to improve as our country develops. Therefore, the content I write now will certainly change in the future.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
分數: 80.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng các từ nối để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi nhỏ như "long passage" nên là "long passages" hoặc "a long passage".
範例: I prefer both typing and handwriting depending on the situation. Typing saves time and energy because it is fast, especially when I need to write long passages. On the other hand, handwriting helps me focus my thoughts and remember information better, such as when I take notes.
文法
× I have a big passion for writing an accounting article because my leisure at university is accounting auditing.
✓ I have a big passion for writing accounting articles because my leisure at university is accounting auditing.
The phrase 'an accounting article' is singular, but the context suggests a general interest in multiple articles, so the plural form 'accounting articles' is more appropriate. This corrects the singular and plural mismatch.
× I reckon that in the foreseeable future it will continuously be improved and upgraded following to the development of our country.
✓ I reckon that in the foreseeable future it will continuously be improved and upgraded following the development of our country.
The preposition 'following to' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'following' without 'to'. This fixes the preposition usage error.
× Typing helps me save time and energy because it is fast, especially when I need to write long passage.
✓ Typing helps me save time and energy because it is fast, especially when I need to write long passages.
The word 'passage' should be plural 'passages' to match the general context of writing multiple passages, correcting the singular/plural mismatch.
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