写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a direct response with clear sentences and avoid unnecessary words. Use simple and correct grammar to express your ideas.

範例: Yes, I write quite often, especially for work and personal notes. However, I don't write long pieces very frequently.

建議: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Try to clearly state what you like to write and explain why. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: I like to write emails and notes for my work because it helps me organize my tasks and communicate with my colleagues effectively.

建議: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your opinion clearly and provide specific reasons or examples about how your writing might change.

範例: Yes, I believe my writing will improve over time, especially in grammar and vocabulary, as I practice more and learn new words.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and redundancy. Use correct verb forms and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, try to add a reason with linking words.

範例: I prefer typing when I write because it is easier and faster than handwriting, which helps me finish my work quickly.

× Yes I do but sometimes I feel so bad it in but usually I'm not writing portion but sometimes he as I do.

✓ Yes, I do, but sometimes I feel bad about it. Usually, I don't write much, but sometimes I do.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper sentence structure. It contains unclear phrases like 'feel so bad it in' and 'I'm not writing portion but sometimes he as I do.' The correction clarifies the meaning by breaking it into clear sentences and using appropriate expressions.

× When it comes to write I added sometimes like uh when, whenever I using e-mail and I note for my work.

✓ When it comes to writing, I sometimes use email and take notes for my work.

The phrase 'When it comes to write' should be 'When it comes to writing' because 'come to' is followed by a gerund (-ing form). Also, 'I added sometimes like uh when, whenever I using e-mail' is incorrect; it should be simplified to 'I sometimes use email.'

× Yes, I think I have to change the in my head writing skills and have it and like her grammar, vocabulary and sometimes that's it.

✓ Yes, I think I have to improve my writing skills in my head, including grammar and vocabulary, and sometimes that's it.

The phrase 'change the in my head writing skills' is incorrect; 'change the' is unnecessary and confusing. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correctness, removing the incorrect article usage and improving word choice.

× Whenever I writing some things, I always prefers to typing because it it is so easy and faster than handwriting.

✓ Whenever I write something, I always prefer typing because it is easier and faster than handwriting.

'Whenever I writing' is incorrect; it should be 'Whenever I write' (base verb after 'whenever'). 'I always prefers' is wrong because 'I' takes 'prefer' without 's'. 'To typing' should be 'typing' without 'to'. Also, 'it it is so easy and faster' is corrected to 'it is easier and faster' for proper comparative form.

× I always prefers that, that's why.

✓ I always prefer that; that's why.

The subject 'I' requires the base form of the verb without 's', so 'prefers' should be 'prefer'. The sentence is corrected for subject-verb agreement.