写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваша відповідь не є природною і зрозумілою. Спробуйте давати чіткі, короткі речення, які безпосередньо відповідають на питання. Уникайте зайвих слів і намагайтеся будувати логічні речення.

範例: Yes, I write quite often, especially when I practice my English writing skills by taking notes and composing short texts.

建議: Ваша відповідь не є чіткою і містить граматичні помилки. Спробуйте сформулювати думку просто і зрозуміло, пояснюючи причину вашого ставлення до письма.

範例: I don't really enjoy writing, but I have to do it because I am a secondary school student and writing is part of my studies.

建議: Ваша відповідь не відповідає на питання і є незрозумілою. Намагайтеся зрозуміти питання і відповідати прямо, використовуючи прості речення.

範例: I'm not sure what you mean, but I think the things I write might change as I learn more and improve my skills.

建議: Ваша відповідь не є чіткою і граматично правильною. Спробуйте чітко висловити свої уподобання і пояснити їх, використовуючи зв'язні речення.

範例: Usually, I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember better, but sometimes I need to type texts, especially when I have to write for a long time.

× You say do you should have brought about texts on notes the last time I write it to text for practicing my writing in English language.

✓ You said you should have brought some texts or notes last time I wrote them to practice my writing in English.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unclear phrasing, making it difficult to understand. The correction rearranges the sentence to follow standard English sentence structure and clarifies the meaning. Suggestions: Use proper word order (subject-verb-object), and ensure clarity by using appropriate words like 'some texts or notes' and correct verb tenses.

× I don't like right, but I must write because I'm in a secondary school so I need doing not.

✓ I don't like writing, but I must write because I'm in secondary school, so I need to do it.

The original sentence misuses 'right' instead of 'writing' and has incorrect verb forms like 'need doing not'. The correction uses the gerund 'writing' after 'like' and corrects the phrase to 'need to do it'. Suggestions: Use gerunds after verbs like 'like' and use correct infinitive forms after 'need'.

× I don't understand that things you mean. But I don't really so.

✓ I don't understand what things you mean. But I don't really think so.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing words, making it unclear. The correction adds 'what' to form a proper question clause and completes the second sentence with 'think' to make it meaningful. Suggestions: Use correct question clauses and complete sentences with necessary verbs.

× Usually I prefer writing that sometimes I need to type in some texts for. Long time.

✓ Usually, I prefer writing, but sometimes I need to type some texts for a long time.

The original sentence has incorrect conjunction use and awkward phrasing. The correction adds 'but' to connect contrasting ideas and corrects the phrase to 'type some texts for a long time'. Suggestions: Use appropriate conjunctions to connect ideas and correct prepositional phrases.