写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你嘅回答有啲語法錯誤同埋用詞唔自然，例如「I always writing down everything」應該係「I always write down everything」。另外，句子結構唔完整，令意思唔清晰。建議你用簡單正確嘅句子，直接回應問題，並且避免冗贅。

範例: Yes, I write a lot because I like to record my thoughts and ideas. Writing helps me remember important things and organize my day better.

建議: 你嘅回答有多處語法錯誤，例如「I has been write a diary」應該係「I have been writing a diary」。另外，句子唔通順，詞彙使用唔準確，令意思難以理解。建議你用清晰嘅句子結構，並用適當嘅詞彙表達原因。

範例: I like to write a diary because I have been doing it since primary school. It helps me keep my memories and reflect on my daily experiences.

建議: 你嘅回答非常難以理解，語法錯誤多，詞彙使用混亂，句子結構不完整。建議你先理清思路，用簡單句子直接回答問題，並用連接詞連接想法，使回答更連貫。

範例: Yes, the things I write now are simple notes and quotes. In the future, if I have a job, I will write work-related documents and reports.

建議: 你嘅回答有多處語法錯誤同埋用詞唔準確，例如「I loved him writing」應該係「I love handwriting」。句子斷裂，令意思唔清楚。建議你用完整句子表達喜好，並解釋原因。

範例: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and helps me remember things better. Typing can be difficult and less comfortable for me.

× I always writing down everything because I think right and on my no boat is a safety way.

✓ I always write down everything because I think writing in my notebook is a safe way.

學生錯誤使用了動詞的 -ing 形式 'writing' 作為主動詞，正確應使用動詞原形 'write' 來表達習慣性動作。此外，'no boat' 應為 'notebook'，且 'right' 應為 'writing'。此句中動詞形式錯誤導致語意不清。

× I have the habit of writing in.

✓ I have the habit of writing in my notebook.

句子中 'writing in' 後缺少介詞賓語，應補充 'my notebook' 以完整表達寫作的對象。缺少介詞賓語造成句子不完整。

× Actually I has been write a diary.

✓ Actually, I have been writing a diary.

主詞為第一人稱單數 'I'，助動詞應為 'have' 而非 'has'。此外，'write' 應改為現在完成進行式 'been writing' 以符合語境。

× From my primary school, the blending of notables are really for a trial, but I delight to read font from time to time.

✓ Since my primary school, the collection of notes has really been a trial, but I enjoy reading them from time to time.

'From my primary school' 應改為 'Since my primary school' 表示時間起點。'blending of notables' 應為 'collection of notes'。'delight to read font' 語意不明，改為 'enjoy reading them'。介詞及詞彙使用錯誤導致句意不清。

× the blending of notables are really for a trial

✓ the collection of notes is really a trial

主詞 'collection' 為單數，動詞應用單數 'is'。'notables' 應為 'notes'。數量不一致造成主謂不一致。

× I delight to read font from time to time.

✓ I enjoy reading them from time to time.

'delight to read font' 用詞錯誤，'font' 不合語境，應用 'notes' 並用正確動詞 'enjoy reading'。代詞 'them' 指代筆記，使用正確代詞使句子通順。

× Oh yes, now day I just right.

✓ Oh yes, nowadays I just write.

'now day' 應為 'nowadays'，'right' 應為 'write'。時態及拼寫錯誤影響句意。

× Remember some quota from both.

✓ Remember some quotes from books.

'quota' 應為 'quotes'，'both' 用法錯誤，應為 'books' 或其他合適名詞。介詞及詞彙使用錯誤。

× Two thinking provoking but in the future if I have a job I will train right worker related of stuff.

✓ They are thought-provoking, but in the future, if I have a job, I will try to write work related stuff.

'Two' 應為 'They'，'thinking provoking' 應為 'thought-provoking'。'train right worker related of stuff' 語意不明，推測為 'try to write work related stuff'。代詞及詞彙使用錯誤。

× Maybe is Tom table old meeting minus.

✓ Maybe it is some old meeting minutes.

句子中詞彙錯誤，'Tom table old meeting minus' 應為 'some old meeting minutes'。介詞及詞彙使用錯誤導致句意不明。

× Actually, actually, I loved him writing.

✓ Actually, I really love handwriting.

'loved him writing' 用法錯誤，應為 'love handwriting'。代詞及動詞形式錯誤。

× Because I think her writing was very important for me.

✓ Because I think handwriting is very important for me.

'her writing' 應為 'handwriting'，代詞使用錯誤。

× In. Typing is. Matt is trouble for me.

✓ Typing is a matter of trouble for me.

句子結構錯誤，斷句不當，應合併為完整句子。詞彙 'Matt' 應為 'matter'。