写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류와 불명확한 표현이 많습니다. 자연스럽고 효과적인 영어 사용을 위해 간결하고 명확한 문장으로 답변을 구성하세요. 예를 들어, 불필요한 단어나 문장은 제거하고, 주제에 직접적으로 답하세요.

範例: No, I don't write a lot these days. I used to write more often in the past, but now I don't have much time for it.

建議: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 구체적인 이유와 내용을 명확하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: I like to write about my daily life because it helps me remember important moments and experiences.

建議: 문장이 불완전하고 의미가 모호합니다. 과거와 현재의 차이를 명확히 설명하고, 연결어를 사용해 논리적인 흐름을 만들어 보세요.

範例: Yes, I think what I write has changed. In the past, I often wrote about sad or negative things, but now I focus more on positive experiences.

建議: 답변이 다소 어색하고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 문장을 명확하고 자연스럽게 구성하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: I prefer handwriting when I plan my writing because it helps me organize my ideas. However, I type when I write the final draft because it's faster and more convenient.

× I used to write a lot before, but I don't write a lot nowadays.

✓ I used to write a lot before, but I don't write a lot nowadays.

The sentence is correct in tense usage; 'used to' indicates past habit and 'don't write' indicates present habit, so no correction needed.

× I became lazy to write. So I just to. Liquored. Is Ted over?

✓ I became lazy to write, so I just stopped. Is it over?

The original sentence has fragmented and unclear phrases. 'So I just to. Liquored.' is incorrect and unclear. It should be connected properly with a conjunction and use correct verbs. 'Is Ted over?' seems to be a mishearing or typo; corrected to 'Is it over?' for clarity.

× I like to write my ordinary life. Or my little It's just life. To remember what cuts. Does in my life to remember? I don't wanna forget.

✓ I like to write about my ordinary life, or my little life. To remember what happens in my life. I don't want to forget.

The original sentences have pronoun and sentence structure issues. 'my little It's just life' is unclear and incorrect. 'what cuts. Does in my life to remember?' is fragmented and incorrect. Corrected to proper pronoun use and clearer sentence structure.

× In the past I write too. Something really sad or negative? Negatively, but nowadays I write too. Something really positive or really just.

✓ In the past, I wrote things that were really sad or negative, but nowadays I write things that are really positive or just.

The verb tense 'write' should be past tense 'wrote' when referring to the past. Also, sentence fragments and unclear phrases were corrected for clarity.

× When I start at the beginning of the writing, I'm for making structure I make. Handwriting, but for writing I type. It's more faster, it's better.

✓ When I start writing, I make a structure by handwriting, but for writing I type. It's faster and better.

The phrase 'I'm for making structure I make' is incorrect and unclear. 'It's more faster' is incorrect; 'faster' is a comparative adjective and does not need 'more'. The sentence was restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.