写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且注意时态和主谓一致。可以尝试用简单明了的句子表达自己的观点。

範例: No, I don't write a lot because I am not confident in my writing skills. When I was young, I often got low scores in Chinese writing, which made me dislike writing.

建議: 回答中有发音错误和语法错误，句子不完整。建议注意发音，使用完整句子，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: I don't like writing much, but I have been keeping a diary for several years. It helps me record what happens every day, and I can look back when I feel stressed.

建議: 回答中语法混乱，句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议练习使用完整句子，注意时态和主谓一致，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, the things I write in my diary often depend on my age and mood. For example, when I am happy, I like to write about good experiences and achievements.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，建议注意冠词和代词的使用，句子结构要完整，表达更自然。

範例: Actually, I prefer handwriting. I have been writing my diaries by hand in small books for several years. I think handwriting helps me think more clearly and focus better.

× My Chinese writing are always get a very very low scores which makes me more in confidence and don't like writing.

✓ My Chinese writing always gets very, very low scores which makes me less confident and dislike writing.

这里的主语是不可数名词"writing"，应使用单数动词"gets"，而不是复数"are get"。此外，"scores"前的形容词应为单数形式，且表达"不自信"应使用"less confident"，而不是"more in confidence"。

× I'm not very confident with my writing skills when I was whenever young.

✓ I wasn't very confident with my writing skills when I was young.

描述过去的状态时，应使用过去时态"wasn't"，而不是现在时"I'm not"。此外，"whenever"用法不当，应去掉。

× No, I don't write off because I'm not good at writing and I'm not very confident with my writing skills when I was whenever young.

✓ No, I don't write often because I'm not good at writing and I wasn't very confident with my writing skills when I was young.

"write off"是固定短语，意思与句意不符，应改为"write often"。

× My Chinese writing are always get a very very low scores which makes me more in confidence and don't like writing.

✓ My Chinese writing always gets very, very low scores which makes me less confident and dislike writing.

"scores"是复数，前面应有适当的量词或形容词修饰，且动词应与主语一致。

× which makes me more in confidence and don't like writing.

✓ which makes me less confident and dislike writing.

"more in confidence"表达不正确，应使用"less confident"。此外，"don't like"应与主语"me"保持一致，改为"dislike"更合适。

× writing Diaries come helps me to record everything. Happened every day and I can look back when I feel very stressful and.

✓ writing diaries helps me to record everything that happens every day, and I can look back when I feel very stressed.

"come helps"用法错误，应去掉"come"。"Happened every day"缺少主语，应改为"that happens every day"。"feel very stressful"应改为"feel very stressed"，因为"stressful"形容事物，"stressed"形容人。

× writing Diaries come helps me to record everything. Happened every day and I can look back when I feel very stressful and.

✓ writing diaries helps me to record everything that happens every day, and I can look back when I feel very stressed.

"Diaries"应小写且与动词"helps"保持主谓一致。

× the things I write in my diary softens depend often depends on my age and my mood.

✓ the things I write in my diary often depend on my age and my mood.

"softens depend often depends"语序混乱，应改为"often depend"。

× if I'm very happy, I prefer to write a good experience. Happens these days. Happen these days and some achievement maybe by wherever if I've fell really.

✓ if I'm very happy, I prefer to write about good experiences that happen these days and some achievements, maybe wherever I have really felt.

"write a good experience"应改为"write about good experiences"。"Happens these days"缺少主语，应合并为定语从句。"fell"应为过去分词"felt"。

× maybe by wherever if I've fell really.

✓ maybe wherever I have really felt.

"fell"是过去式，句中应使用过去分词"felt"。

× I have been writing my Diaries. By hand in a small books for several years,

✓ I have been writing my diaries by hand in small books for several years,

"By hand"不应单独成句，应与前句合并。"a small books"中冠词与名词数不匹配，应改为"small books"。

× I have been writing my Diaries. By hand in a small books for several years,

✓ I have been writing my diaries by hand in small books for several years,

"Diaries"应小写，且"a small books"冠词与复数名词不匹配，应去掉"a"。

× I think her writing can make me think more clearly and makes me focus on this.

✓ I think handwriting can make me think more clearly and helps me focus on this.

"her writing"用词不当，应改为"handwriting"。动词"makes"应与主语一致，改为"helps"更合适。