写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且内容有些混乱。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复和不必要的内容，同时注意语法和时态的正确使用。

範例: Yes, I write quite a lot, especially academic papers because I am a master's student. Besides studying, I also work in a research laboratory where I often write reports.

建議: 回答时应避免断断续续的句子，尽量连贯表达。可以用连接词使句子更流畅，同时提供更具体的细节来丰富内容。

範例: In my daily life, I like to write diaries to express my emotions, especially when something special happens. Additionally, I often write reports for my work.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并用具体例子支持观点。

範例: Yes, I think what I write may change over time. For example, some ideas that I find interesting now might seem different when I review them later.

建議: 回答不完整且语法错误较多。建议完整表达观点，使用连贯的句子，并说明原因。

範例: I prefer typing on a computer rather than handwriting because it is more convenient and easier to save and edit my work.

× Yes, my daily life I read alot, specially in academic writing.

✓ Yes, in my daily life I read a lot, especially academic writing.

这里的'alot'应为'a lot'，且'specially'应为副词形式'especially'，表示特别地。句子中缺少介词'in'来引导时间状语。

× Because I I study in university.

✓ Because I study at university.

这里应使用介词'at'表示在大学学习，且去掉重复的'I'。

× As a master student, meanwhile, I work I'm working in a research laboratory.

✓ As a master's student, meanwhile, I am working in a research laboratory.

'master student'应为'master's student'表示硕士生，'I work I'm working'重复，应使用现在进行时'I am working'表示正在进行的动作。

× Wait, you requires me to write some report?

✓ Wait, do you require me to write some reports?

'you'作为第二人称，动词应用原形'require'，且'report'应为复数'reports'表示一些报告。

× I like to write Diaries.

✓ I like to write diaries.

'Diaries'不需要大写，且应为复数形式表示日记。

× Especially if something is special happens.

✓ Especially if something special happens.

'is'和'happens'不能同时出现，应去掉'is'，'something special'作主语。

× And in addition I also need to write a report.

✓ And in addition, I also need to write reports.

根据上下文，'reports'应为复数，表示多份报告。

× These things I write might be change in the future.

✓ These things I write might change in the future.

'might be change'结构错误，'might'后直接接动词原形'change'。

× Maybe later I write it again.

✓ Maybe later I will write it again.

表示将来动作，应使用将来时'will write'。

× I prefer to. Writing on computer rather than handwriting be 'cause I found it more convenient and typing on computer is easily to be kept.

✓ I prefer writing on the computer rather than handwriting because I find it more convenient and typing on the computer is easier to keep.

'Writing'前不应有句号，'on computer'应为'on the computer'，'be 'cause'应为'because'，'found'应为现在时'find'，'easily to be kept'应为'easier to keep'。