写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议加强语法基础，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的句式。

範例: No, I don't write a lot because I find writing a bit boring. Also, when I have to write essays, it makes me feel quite stressed.

建議: 回答不完整且含糊，建议直接回答问题，表达清晰，避免语法错误。

範例: Actually, I don't really like writing much because I find it difficult and not very enjoyable.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整，建议练习完整句子表达，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

範例: Yes, what I write usually changes depending on my mood. If I feel happy, I tend to write positive things, but if I feel sad, my writing reflects that.

建議: 回答较为完整，但有语法和表达上的小错误，建议注意句子结构和用词准确性。

範例: I prefer handwriting because I type very slowly. My friends often say that I am a slow typer, so handwriting is more comfortable for me.

× No at not write a lot because I'm the kind of person who really don't like right and right make me feel a little boring.

✓ No, I do not write a lot because I'm the kind of person who really doesn't like writing and writing makes me feel a little bored.

这里的错误是代词和动词形式不匹配。'who really don't like'中的'don't'应改为'doesn't'，因为先行词是单数的'person'。另外，'right'应为'write'，且动词后应使用动名词形式'writing'。最后，'make me feel a little boring'应改为'makes me feel a little bored'，因为主语是单数，且'bored'表示感受，'boring'表示令人感到无聊的事物。

× And when I write a literature out, I will under a big stress.

✓ And when I write literature, I will be under a lot of stress.

这里'write a literature out'是不正确的表达，'literature'是不可数名词，不需要冠词'a'，且不需要'out'。'under a big stress'应改为'be under a lot of stress'，'stress'前用'lot of'表示大量，且需要动词'be'。

× In Let me think about truth I don't like right?

✓ Let me think about it. To be honest, I don't like writing.

原句中'In Let me think about truth'结构混乱，缺少代词'it'，且'truth'用法不当，应使用'To be honest'表达'说实话'。'right'应为'writing'。

× Yes, I think the things that rat oh would change depends on my emotions.

✓ Yes, I think the things that I write would change depending on my emotions.

'rat oh'应为'write'的误拼写。'depends'应改为'depending'，因为这里是表示条件的状语从句。

× If I have a good emotions I probably read something happy and positive.

✓ If I have good emotions, I probably read something happy and positive.

'a good emotions'中'emotions'是复数，不应加不定冠词'a'。

× However if I am side.

✓ However, if I am sad.

'side'应为'sad'，且句子不完整，需补充完整表达。

× Between the two, I would go for handwriting and all my friends said that I'm the kind of person who taps very slowly.

✓ Between the two, I would go for handwriting, and all my friends say that I'm the kind of person who types very slowly.

'said'应改为现在时'say'，因为这是一个普遍事实。'taps'应为'types'，因为这里指的是打字。

× So it turns out if I need to write him I I prefer to choose handwriting rather than typing.

✓ So it turns out that if I need to write, I prefer to choose handwriting rather than typing.

'write him'不合适，应去掉'him'。重复的'I'应删除。句子结构需调整使其通顺。