写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议练习使用完整句子，避免语法错误，并且回答时要紧扣问题，表达清楚具体内容。

範例: Yes, I write quite a lot, especially for my university assignments. For example, I often write research reports related to my studies. Besides academic writing, I sometimes keep a diary to record my daily thoughts.

建議: 回答缺乏完整句子和逻辑，表达模糊。建议练习用完整句子表达自己的喜好，并说明原因，使用连接词使回答更连贯。

範例: I like to write about topics related to social sciences because they are connected to my major. Writing about these subjects helps me understand my field better and improve my academic skills.

建議: 回答表达混乱，语法和词汇使用不当，难以理解。建议练习用清晰的句子表达观点，说明原因并举例，避免口语化和模糊表达。

範例: Yes, I believe the type of writing I do will change when I start working. For instance, instead of academic papers, I might write reports or emails related to my job in social economics.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议练习用完整句子表达偏好，并说明原因，避免重复和不必要的词汇。

範例: I prefer typing because most tasks nowadays require using software like Microsoft Word or PDFs. Typing is faster and more convenient, especially when I need to edit or share my work.

× Well, am I depends on what to write.

✓ Well, it depends on what to write.

这里主语是第三人称单数，应该用一般现在时的动词形式depends，而不是am I depends。原句主语和动词不一致，导致语法错误。建议使用it作为形式主语，符合英语表达习惯。

× For instance if the city.

✓ For instance, if it's about the city.

原句缺少谓语动词，导致句子结构不完整。需要补充谓语使句子完整。建议补充'if it's about the city'使句子通顺。

× And they say some research reports.

✓ And I do some research reports.

原句中主语和谓语不匹配，且表达不清晰。应使用第一人称'I'作为主语，且动词用do。

× Yeah. I'm doing that loss 'cause I'm in university students

✓ Yeah. I'm doing that a lot because I'm a university student

'loss'应为'lost'或'lots'，但此处应为'a lot'表示频率；'university students'应为单数形式'a university student'。

× and if it's like a dairy or move something to record myself, well, I I really do that.

✓ and if it's like a diary or something to record myself, well, I really do that.

'dairy'应为'diary'，且'move something'表达不清晰，改为'something'更合适。重复的'I'应去掉。

× Well, I'm. For some for the school stuff, so I think it's like.

✓ Well, I write for some school stuff, so I think it's like...

原句断句不完整，缺少谓语动词，导致句子不通顺。建议补充谓语使句子完整。

× and I say that focus on, you know, something with the social sciences

✓ and I say that I focus on, you know, something in the social sciences

动词focus后应接介词on，后面接in the social sciences更符合表达习惯。

× and as soon as that might be related to my professional studies, yeah.

✓ and so that might be related to my professional studies, yeah.

'as soon as'用法错误，应为'so that'表示因果关系。

× Yeah, of course I do when I get to work and dumb.

✓ Yeah, of course I do when I get to work and do my job.

'dumb'用词错误，可能想表达'work'或'job'，应改为'do my job'或类似表达。

× You know, we're like switching to another period of studying.

✓ You know, we're switching to another period of studying.

'like'在此处多余，影响句子正式性和准确性，建议去掉。

× So I think, yeah, that absolutely can change, like from the social sciences, maybe the social economic researchers.

✓ So I think, yeah, that absolutely can change, like from the social sciences to maybe social economic research.

'social economic researchers'应为'social economic research'，更符合语境。

× Yeah, source like that, I think.

✓ Yeah, something like that, I think.

'source'用词不当，应为'something'表示泛指。

× Will I prefer typing?

✓ I prefer typing.

此处不需要使用情态动词'will'，直接用一般现在时表达偏好。

× Because nowadays most of the task you need to be down with the PDF, with the documents in Microsoft Words, you know,

✓ Because nowadays most of the tasks you need to do with PDFs, with documents in Microsoft Word, you know,

'task'应为复数'tasks'；'be down'用法错误，应为'do'；'PDF'应为复数'PDFs'；'Microsoft Words'应为'Microsoft Word'。

× I know we're like doing some slice.

✓ I know we're like doing some slides.

'slice'用词错误，应为'slides'表示幻灯片。

× So I think typing is is a better way.

✓ So I think typing is a better way.

重复的'is'应去掉，保持句子简洁。

× Or you can adapt to any source of your work and it's convenient with Grady.

✓ Or you can adapt to any source of your work, and it's convenient and ready.

'Grady'应为'ready'，且句子缺少连接词使表达完整。