写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构不完整，且有语法错误。建议注意句子完整性，避免断句，使用更自然的表达方式。

範例: No, I don't write a lot because I'm a science student and I find writing quite boring. Also, I struggle to express myself well in writing.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方，建议使用更准确的时态和表达方式，并且句子结构应更清晰。

範例: If I have to write something, I usually write a diary because it helps me remember the happiest times I've had.

建議: 回答表达混乱，语法错误较多，句子不连贯。建议理清思路，使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, I think what I write will change. Right now, I focus mainly on my studies, but in the future, if I have more free time, I might write more about my personal life and experiences.

建議: 回答中有多处拼写和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议注意单词拼写，句子结构完整，并清楚表达观点。

範例: I prefer handwriting because I'm not very good at typing. Also, I feel that handwriting allows me to express my emotions better when I write notes or thoughts.

× I think is quite a boring work.

✓ I think it is quite boring work.

句子缺少主语，应该加上it作为形式主语。work是不可数名词，不需要加a。

× If I must have to write them something, I might write a diary 'cause it can let me remember those happiest period I spent.

✓ If I have to write something, I might write a diary because it can help me remember the happiest periods I spent.

must和have to重复使用，表达冗余。them用法错误，应直接用something。'cause应写为because。period应为复数periods。

× If I must have to write them something, I might write a diary 'cause it can let me remember those happiest period I spent.

✓ If I have to write something, I might write a diary because it can help me remember the happiest periods I spent.

时态不一致，should用一般现在时表达条件。

× Yeah, maybe 'cause for this period I just focus on my studying, but in the future, if I have more spare time, I mind have a deeper sort of my life and.

✓ Yeah, maybe because during this period I just focus on my studying, but in the future, if I have more spare time, I might have a deeper understanding of my life.

mind have用法错误，应为might have。sort of my life表达不清，应改为deeper understanding of my life。

× Maybe my maybe those things by right would change.

✓ Maybe those things I write would change.

by right用法错误，应去掉。句子结构混乱，应简化为正确表达。

× I prefer hen writing, one of the reason his I'm not really good at typing but the most important one is I think hen writing can express my emotion when I take down or something so.

✓ I prefer handwriting. One of the reasons is I'm not really good at typing, but the most important one is I think handwriting can express my emotions when I take notes or something.

hen writing应为handwriting。one of the reason应为one of the reasons。his应为is。take down应为take notes。句子结构混乱，需分句表达。