写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen (I practice writing every day). Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'worlds' thay vì 'words', 'journalist' không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và liên kết câu hợp lý.

範例: Yes, I practice writing every day because I enjoy expressing my ideas and emotions through words. Every day, I keep a journal where I write about what I have done and how I feel.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'about'. Sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen. Câu trả lời cần có câu chủ đề rõ ràng và chi tiết cụ thể hơn để giải thích lý do bạn thích viết về cảm xúc và suy nghĩ của mình.

範例: I like to write about my ideas and emotions because it helps me understand my thoughts better. Writing about my life allows me to express my feelings clearly and reflect on my experiences.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy giải thích cụ thể về sự thay đổi trong nội dung viết của bạn theo thời gian.

範例: Yes, I believe my writing changes as I develop. Every day, I learn more about myself and the world around me, so my writing reflects my growth and new experiences.

建議: Bạn cần sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh để truyền đạt ý tưởng. Tránh lỗi chính tả như 'white' thay vì 'write', 'mediatation' thay vì 'meditation'. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và giải thích rõ lý do bạn thích viết tay hơn đánh máy.

範例: I prefer handwriting when I want to develop my ideas clearly. Writing by hand feels like meditation to me, and it helps me connect with my emotions and thoughts better.

× Yes, I practicing writing every day because I love to explain my ideas, my emotion through worlds so every day I will have a journalist to write down everything I have done in that in a day and I.

✓ Yes, I am practicing writing every day because I love to explain my ideas, my emotions through words, so every day I write down everything I have done in that day.

The verb 'practicing' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense correctly. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match the context, and 'worlds' is a typo for 'words'. The phrase 'I will have a journalist to write down' is incorrect; it should be 'I write down' to express the habitual action. The sentence was also restructured for clarity.

× Yes, I practicing writing every day because I love to explain my ideas, my emotion through worlds so every day I will have a journalist to write down everything I have done in that in a day and I.

✓ Yes, I am practicing writing every day because I love to explain my ideas, my emotions through words, so every day I write down everything I have done in that day.

The preposition 'through' is correctly used here to indicate the medium of expression. However, 'in that in a day' is incorrect and should be 'in that day' to specify the time frame.

× Yes, I practicing writing every day because I love to explain my ideas, my emotion through worlds so every day I will have a journalist to write down everything I have done in that in a day and I.

✓ Yes, I am practicing writing every day because I love to explain my ideas, my emotions through words, so every day I write down everything I have done in that day.

The word 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' because it refers to multiple feelings. Also, 'worlds' is a misspelling of 'words'.

× I love to write about my ideas in my emotions because I love to explain what I was thinking about about the situation so routing my life and I feel that I can feel my emotion clearly.

✓ I love to write about my ideas and my emotions because I love to explain what I am thinking about the situation, so writing about my life helps me feel my emotions clearly.

The verb 'routing' is incorrect; it should be 'writing'. Also, 'was thinking' should be 'am thinking' to match the present tense context. The sentence was restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I love to write about my ideas in my emotions because I love to explain what I was thinking about about the situation so routing my life and I feel that I can feel my emotion clearly.

✓ I love to write about my ideas and my emotions because I love to explain what I am thinking about the situation, so writing about my life helps me feel my emotions clearly.

The past tense 'was thinking' is incorrect here because the speaker is describing a current habit or feeling. It should be present continuous 'am thinking'.

× Yes, I believe what I write you chained so my development because I believe that every day is a day that I studied myself and stories awesome surroundings so. I believe that definitely my writing beauty velop.

✓ Yes, I believe what I write changes my development because I believe that every day is a day that I study myself and observe my surroundings. So, I believe that definitely my writing will develop.

The word 'chained' is incorrect; it should be 'changes'. 'Studied' should be 'study' to match present tense. 'Stories awesome surroundings' is unclear and corrected to 'observe my surroundings'. 'Beauty velop' is a misspelling of 'will develop'. The sentence was restructured for clarity.

× Yes, I believe what I write you chained so my development because I believe that every day is a day that I studied myself and stories awesome surroundings so. I believe that definitely my writing beauty velop.

✓ Yes, I believe what I write changes my development because I believe that every day is a day that I study myself and observe my surroundings. So, I believe that definitely my writing will develop.

The verb 'studied' is past tense but should be present tense 'study' to indicate a habitual action.

× Yes, I believe what I write you chained so my development because I believe that every day is a day that I studied myself and stories awesome surroundings so. I believe that definitely my writing beauty velop.

✓ Yes, I believe what I write changes my development because I believe that every day is a day that I study myself and observe my surroundings. So, I believe that definitely my writing will develop.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrectly used and should be omitted or replaced with 'changes' as the verb.

× I prefer to hand write when I want to develop or. Click Clearly. White down my thought phone ideas because in writing also a mediatation to me, I can feel my emotion on my idea.

✓ I prefer to handwrite when I want to develop or clearly write down my thoughts and ideas because writing is also a meditation to me; I can feel my emotions and ideas.

The phrase 'hand write' should be 'handwrite' as one word. 'Click Clearly' is incorrect and replaced with 'clearly write down'. 'White down' is a misspelling of 'write down'. 'Phone ideas' is incorrect and replaced with 'thoughts and ideas'. 'Mediatation' is a misspelling of 'meditation'. The sentence was restructured for clarity.

× I prefer to hand write when I want to develop or. Click Clearly. White down my thought phone ideas because in writing also a mediatation to me, I can feel my emotion on my idea.

✓ I prefer to handwrite when I want to develop or clearly write down my thoughts and ideas because writing is also a meditation to me; I can feel my emotions and ideas.

The preposition 'on' in 'feel my emotion on my idea' is incorrect; it should be omitted or replaced with 'and' to connect 'emotions' and 'ideas'.