写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific reasons. Avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

範例: Yes, I write a lot because I find that writing helps me remember what I study. For example, during college, I used to take detailed notes which improved my learning.

建議: Your answer needs clearer structure and better vocabulary. Start with a direct answer, then explain with specific examples. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I like to write answers to questions when preparing for exams. For instance, if I am studying science, I write down answers to important questions to help me revise effectively.

建議: Your response is confusing and lacks clarity. Try to give a clear opinion first, then support it with reasons. Avoid contradictory statements and incomplete sentences.

範例: I don't think the notes I write will change because they are based on facts I study. However, during exams, I might change the way I format my answers to be clearer.

建議: Your answer has some contradictions and unclear phrases. Provide a clear preference with reasons, and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: I prefer handwriting because it is faster and more comfortable for me. Although I can type well, writing by hand helps me think better and remember information more effectively.

× Yes, I do write a lot because I'm a person who likes the road and studied things by writing a I preferred to ride while studying because it helped me to keep he'd help me to remember the things that I read or study.

✓ Yes, I do write a lot because I'm a person who likes the road and studies things by writing. I prefer to write while studying because it helps me to remember the things that I read or study.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun use and mixed tenses. 'Studied' should be 'studies' to match present tense, and 'preferred to ride' seems incorrect and is corrected to 'prefer to write'. Also, 'he'd help me' is unclear and corrected to 'it helps me'. Clear pronoun reference and consistent tense improve clarity.

× So I think I write a lot during my college an my freedom.

✓ So I think I write a lot during my college and my free time.

The phrase 'during my college an my freedom' is incorrect. 'During' is correctly used with 'college', but 'my freedom' is unclear and likely meant to be 'my free time'. Also, 'an' is a typo for 'and'. Correct preposition and word choice improve meaning.

× I usually write while I'm setting for.

✓ I usually write while I'm sitting for.

The word 'setting' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'sitting' to indicate the act of sitting down to write. This is a common confusion between similar sounding words.

× I am preparing for my exams so I would like to write something like question answers, short answers, exetra which is based on particular subjects.

✓ I am preparing for my exams so I would like to write something like question answers, short answers, etc., which are based on particular subjects.

The word 'exetra' is a misspelling of 'etc.' Also, 'which is' should be 'which are' to agree with the plural noun 'question answers, short answers, etc.'. Correct spelling and subject-verb agreement are necessary.

× Maybe I'm I'm studying a particular subject.

✓ Maybe I'm studying a particular subject.

The repetition 'I'm I'm' is a typographical error. Removing the duplicate improves sentence clarity.

× If I am studying science, I would like to answer the questions and write it down.

✓ If I am studying science, I would like to answer the questions and write them down.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to 'questions' which is plural. The correct pronoun is 'them' to match the plural noun.

× Yes, I don't think so because other things that I write a one change because it may be will be answers of particular question that I'm studying and I will use these notes for my revision.

✓ No, I don't think so because other things that I write do not change because they may be answers to particular questions that I'm studying and I will use these notes for my revision.

The original sentence is confusing and contains pronoun errors. 'a one change' is unclear and corrected to 'do not change'. 'It may be will be' is incorrect and simplified to 'may be'. 'Answers of particular question' corrected to 'answers to particular questions'. Pronouns and verb forms are corrected for clarity.

× So I think it won't change but while I am writing an exam the answer will be the format or the.

✓ So I think it won't change, but while I am writing an exam, the answer will be in a specific format.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Added missing parts to complete the thought and corrected sentence structure for clarity.

× I prefer handwriting because writing with my own hand is really easy for me rather than typing because typing will take more time as I am the person who is expert in typing.

✓ I prefer handwriting because writing with my own hand is really easy for me rather than typing, which takes more time as I am not an expert in typing.

The phrase 'as I am the person who is expert in typing' contradicts the idea that typing takes more time. Corrected to 'not an expert' for logical consistency. Also, added commas for clarity.

× So I think it's better to write with my own hand. It will be easy for me to write an think I think a while writing with my hand make keep.

✓ So I think it's better to write with my own hand. It will be easy for me to write and think. I think writing with my hand helps me remember better.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'write an think' and 'make keep'. Corrected to clear, grammatically correct sentences conveying intended meaning.